Youngbountygirl: This is what you get when you start having more updates, you get a higher amount of people checking out your work XD. I'm kinda surprised on how many Twilight haters actually love this story to death. I guess it's kinda obvious, since it's more like a vampire story taken seriously and not a fairytale, compared to Twilight. Anyways, this was the stuff I saw in Twilight that got me into the books honestly. There were a lot of things I actually got interested in (not the sparkly vampires). They were things like vampires not burning in the sunlight (it would've been interesting, because then a vampire has more of a killing advantage), the psychic powers (seriously, how can you say that it's not super cool), the werewolves (I mean you skip to the werewolves and you get more serious fun and enjoyment. There's no fighting, but it's not boring and the werewolves are fun to read about, their legends, traditions, and logic... OKAY and the shirtless part, though that's me being a fangirl XD), Bella being involved in the whole thing and saying she's siding for both and kinda being the reason the vampires and werewolves are cooperating (what I didn't like was that she was being manipulative, a drama queen, and only wanting them to work together, so she could be with both guys. I think there are more reasonable reasons for Bella to choose both like, oh I don't know, the fact werewolves could kill an innocent vampire thinking it was dangerous, the fact one of those vampires could be an imprint, I mean if Jacob could imprint on a half vampire, why not a full one? And the fact they're equally monstrous, making both of their kind hypocrites.), I liked a female possibly being a werewolf, but didn't like that it was one and not more female werewolves, making females more helpless unless they're bitches and going with the Smurfette Principle. At least with the Smurfs, there was a reason for there to be one and one only smurf. Twilight never explained that. I mean at least say there was some sort of mutation with Leah with some male hormones. Anyways, I guess this story helps with explaining my reasons for loving Twilight, while a lot of people hate it (the movies were okay, but I'm talking about the books). I do believe it could've been done better, but that doesn't keep me from loving it. I do believe if Twilight was not a love story, gave more fighting scenes, and humans more dignity, it probably would've been a more popular story, and that's with the sparkling vampire (oh sure, like you wouldn't think that'd be a comic relief, if done right. I personally think it'd be cool if they didn't sparkle and just ran around in the sunlight. I mean hello! It'd give the vampires a suitable advantage to fit in the real world and get their dinner!).
Aqua Girl 007: I'm shocked about that too. I don't like the Twilight novels at all anymore. (Sighs) But even I admit that I do like how the vampires have super powers; the female werewolf was cool; the back stories to the Cullens were interesting to read and the myths surrounding the werewolves was interesting. Hell, I was a twihard before I grew out of that phase and joined this fandom.
However, I don't like those novels as much anymore since there are some very stupid parts in those books like Jacob imprinting on an infant (which I find super creepy); I wished there was more action scenes; I think Edward turning into a human disco ball when the sun is out is the most laughable idea ever; I think Edward is the perfect dream guy to the point of annoyance and I don't like Bella's character that much at all.
And I admit, I do agree with my friend too. I believe if the novel wasn't about the love story, focused more around family and friends instead of a stupid love triangle, had more fight scenes, made Edward's character more believable, made Bella more realistic, and gave the humans a larger role the novel would be alot better. I think a vampire being in the sun light is a cool idea since it'll be more realistic, though I still think them sparkling is still stupid since that'll draw more attention to them.
Anyways, here's the next chapter. Even I admit this was super touching.
The werewolves and human volunteers eventually returned from their fight and were told what had happened between Yugi, Joey, and Marik. They were all sharing surprising, shocking, and saddened glances. They were extremely surprised that someone like Yugi could stand up to Marik without showing any fear and without getting hurt, but also sad about Odion's change. Rebecca comforted Yugi, by continually saying this was the right decision. Almost all of the werewolves agreed.
Duke and Remu couldn't get away from the horror their friend was facing, Marik's own brother slowly turning to the very thing the pack hated. Duke and Remu walked upstairs to Marik's room to comfort their friend through his time of grief. Everyone helped cease Odion from the burning pain he was going to feel for these next three days. This was all they could do for now.
Marik eventually appeared from his room with puffy red eyes and a very hardened look, so nobody would question if he had been crying. That was the last thing he wanted, to look weak. Luckily, nobody questioned him. They stood still, looking very grieved. Marik slowly walked down the steps, his two friends following him, and looked at Yugi's direction.
"I'm... sorry. I was thinking with my emotions," Marik apologized quietly, and then he turned to Joey's direction. "Same goes for you, Joey." Joey nodded. Marik turned to everyone in the room, deciding to change the subject. "How's Odion doing?"
"He's still in pain, though not as much as before," Ishizu replied sadly. "I was able to drug him to sleep."
"When he wakes up, Odion will have blood-red eyes, but they'll slowly change as he drinks animal blood. Yami says that they'll be permanently gold," Yugi explained as Marik sighed, gazing down at the corner of his eyes. "Listen, I'm not trying to take your position or anything and I don't think vampires are angels or... perfect, so to speak." Marik furrowed his eyebrows in confusion, wondering where Yugi is getting at. "I do, however, believe they're human just like the rest of us. I believe they have morals and, if they want to, they can choose not to drink human blood. I will not believe for one second that a vampire is so greedy for blood, he loses all humanity. My brother had spent almost an entire month hungry, not knowing he was a vampire that needed blood to drink. If vampires were really that inhuman, Yami would've taken me out a long time ago. He was so sick from starvation; he couldn't even stand up and walk. He would drink and eat anything to keep him alive at that point. I won't stand by and let you say that vampires are inhuman and immortal, because they're not."
"How long did you say Yami lasted without drinking blood?" Duke asked with two risen eyebrows.
"A month," Yugi answered, "maybe a month and a half."
Duke's eyes widened. "Damn."
"I know what you're going through and I promise you Odion will still be the same brother you know and love. In fact, you'll barely even recognize that he's a vampire, if you take out the red eyes and the extra sharp teeth. In fact, Odion will be more helpful in our fight against the swarm. He could be like a spy or something," Yugi said to Marik, who just glared at the ground.
"Maybe. I just hope I don't regret not ending Odion's pain," Marik said, and then he looked at his sleeping brother, who was slowly growing more paler. He walked to Odion's side and rested his head on Odion's chest. Ishizu came from behind Marik and rubbed his back to comfort him.
Tea slowly walked next to Yugi, and then loosely held his hand. He continually pitied Marik and Ishizu for the three days they watched Odion slowly growing pale. The day before Odion's change was complete, Marik did hunt a few animals, draining all the blood into a container and placing it in the refrigerator. Yugi instructed Ishizu and Marik about washing the dishes, Odion would eat or drink from, and his clothes with bleach. There was also the advantage of Marik sharing the game he'd hunt with Odion, just like Yugi and Yami did when they lived together. Marik didn't mind the idea and Ishizu was very supportive about it.
The day finally came for Odion's transformation to be complete. Yugi decided to prepare Odion's first dinner, since he knew Odion would be starving or thirsty, along with probably being in shock. Marik, however, hated the smell. It was so bad, he and Ishizu had to get out nose plugs to block out the horrid smell. Even Maria hated the smell.
"I hope Odion wakes up already before I vomit!" Marik complained.
"Suck it up, Marik, you're going to be smelling this for the rest of your life," Yugi said, standing next to the stove, as Marik growled at him.
Yugi sighed, looking around the kitchen. It was very bright with white walls, light yellow tiled floor, white counters, wooden cabinets, a sink at the very end leading to the living room followed by a large counter, a white regular stove, and the refrigerator and freezer at the very end, a wooden table with five chairs in the middle to the right of the living room entrance, two large windows behind the table, a chandler right above the table, and ceiling lights. Yugi found the kitchen very comforting almost just as much as the living room. It almost reminded him of home before his parents died. It was no wonder Yugi kinda liked it here. He started wondering if Yami would've liked it here too.
No sooner, Duke, Remu, and Ryou entered the house and were hit by the horrible smell. They all were covering their nose.
"Holy f***ing shit! What in the hell is that smell!?" Remu complained.
"I think I'm going to puke!" Duke complained along with Remu.
"Yugi is cooking Odion's dinner and it's worse than sauerkraut!" Marik complained.
"This is f***ing retarded! What is Yugi making, blood soup?"
"Pretty much. Not only does it smell awful, but it's so horrid looking, it took every ounce of my digestion to prevent myself from vomiting!"
"I'd say!" Duke said.
"Then, I hope you don't mind sharing your dinner with Odion on your first hunt. Usually, fresh blood is better than cooked, or so Yami claims. Though, you're still going to have to get used to this," Yugi said as the boys groaned in complaint. Yugi couldn't help, but show a smirk on his lips. He enjoyed them getting a taste what he has to go through with Yami.
Yugi sighed. He missed Yami alot. In fact, this horrible smell of cooked blood only gave Yugi memories of his twin brother coming home with rabbits or bigger game, when he was lucky to hunt it, and sucking the blood from it happily. Now, Yami was with Seto, trying to win the war against the rampaging vampires. Yugi wished he could join Yami, but he was more protected with the werewolves. At least in this way, Yami would not have to choose between killing Yugi or changing him.
That was when Yugi realized something. If the VPS discovered Odion was a vampire, what would they do about his family knowing their existence? Then again, everyone here knew vampires existed whether Odion was bitten or not. In fact, he believed vampires existed before the change. Yugi decided that Odion would not have to worry about the VPS like he did. Odion was already surrounded by other paranormal beings that have a harder time blending into society, compared to vampires.
Yugi heard Odion's moan as soon as he poured the blood soup into a bowl. He took a deep breath, placing the bowl on the table before walking to the Living Room where Marik knelt beside his brother, who was lying on the couch. He wanted to be the first person Odion saw as a vampire. Marik wanted his brother to know that he didn't care what creature he was! Odion was family no matter if he grew fangs or not.
"Odion," Marik muttered in a quiet voice.
Odion moaned again, slowly opening his bloody red crimson eyes. Marik didn't know why, but for some reason, these eyes were not as monstrous as he feared only three days ago. They seemed more gentle and warm. Marik couldn't help, but smile, and then embraced Odion in a tight hug. He knew for sure that this was still the same Odion he knew and not a bloodthirsty monster... well, not a monster or thirsting for human blood.
"Marik... how did you get rid of the venom? I thought that was impossible," Odion asked, seemingly very shocked. Marik was just as shocked. Odion couldn't tell he was a vampire! "And why is your nose plugged?"
"It's your dinner!" Yugi replied as Odion gave a very confusing look.
"It smells delicious," Odion said generously with a soft smile. Yugi couldn't help, but laughing, including Marik and everyone else.
"Good gravy!" Remu responded, covering his whole face with his full hand.
"What is so funny?" Odion asked confusingly.
"Sorry..." Yugi apologized, and then he found his breath. "First off, we never got rid of the venom."
"What do you-" Odion asked, and then in one mere second he sped off to the bathroom. He stared at his red blood eyes in the mirror, and then his tangs. He slowly backed up against the wall, and then closed his eyes.
"Odion, it's okay. Nothing's changed! We're all still here for you," Ishizu assured, walking to her brother.
Odion opened his eyes, and then stared at the floor, still in deep shock. He slowly walked to the Living Room where everyone else was sitting down with nose plugs. Marik stood up and showed a bright smile. Odion looked at his brother, and then showed a warm and comforting smile. He held Marik in his arms and felt a great relief in himself. Duke and Remu couldn't help, but smile at this reunion.
"Marik... you feel very warm," Odion said.
"Of course I do, I'm a werewolf," Marik said, rolling his eyes and pointing out the obvious.
"No, I mean... I feel a certain warm feel from you... a sense of joy and happiness."
"What?"
"Odion must've developed vampire powers," Yugi guessed.
"What kind of powers?"
"I can't... really be sure. I feel some sort of... I don't know... sense," Odion replied, not being sure what it is. "With Ishizu, I felt some sort of cool feeling. I also felt a warmer sensation from Duke and Remu, but theirs was a little stove hot."
"I don't know what's more irritating, the vomiting smell or my head hurting!" Remu complained.
"I'm... sorry?" Odion said.
"Well, you can eat. I've already cooked you up your first dinner," Yugi said, entering the kitchen with Odion following them.
Marik and his two friends followed Yugi and Odion to the kitchen. Remu could not take the smell or sight of that stuff. As soon as he saw the blood soup, he had to swallow his throat to prevent himself from looking green. Though, just when he was sure he was going to vomit at this point, including Duke, they suddenly felt more settle. Odion furrowed his eyebrows at the soup, and then began eating it with a spoon. It tasted good, REALLY good.
"Is that okay?" Marik asked.
"It's fine! It's no wonder you had nose plugs. Are you sure you're willing to put up with this?" Odion asked.
"I'm sure. In fact, I think I can live with the smell," Marik said, taking off the nose plug. He sighed in deep relief. "I thought I'd never get over that smell!"
"I think I can get used to it too," Duke said, also taking off his nose plug. "In fact, I don't feel as sick and irritated like before."
"Same here. Mood swing much?" Remu asked, seeming very weirded out.
"Hm," Odion responded, eyebrows furrowed in a very curious way. He looked at Yugi. "How are you feeling, Yugi?"
"I feel okay," Yugi said happily, then for some reason, started missing his brother again. He gazed his eyes over to the left.
"How about now?"
"I-" Yugi said, wishing his brother were here, feeling anxious. Odion furrowed his eyebrows, as if focusing on something and Yugi began feeling a little better. "I feel fine." That was when it dawned on Yugi. "You can control moods!"
"What?" Duke asked.
"Odion's vampire power. He can change the way a person feels, if he's happy, sad, or angry," Yugi explained. Odion seemed very curious about his newly discovered powers.
"I can also sense it... I think. Almost like changing the thermostat. I wanted to try it out to see what it was. I suspected it was mood change when I changed Duke's, Marik's, and Remu's temperature to a cooler setting. They were feeling... a bit moisty and uncomfortable," Odion explained as the three stared at him in shock.
"It must've been when we were feeling sick. At least we won't have to worry about the smell, at least not as much," Duke smirked.
"Not just that, but this could be a great advantage. Odion can change the moods of the vampires we fight. If they feel sad or depressed, they can lose focus," Marik realized.
"I never really thought about that. It actually can work," Odion agreed.
"What do you know? Our first vampire volunteer and we already know how to use him to our advantage," Ryou said with such excitement.
"Am I truly still part of the pack?" Odion asked in great surprise.
"You're family no matter what you are!" Ishizu claimed, taking Odion's hands. "You'll always be a part of our pack."
"Thank you," Odion said gratefully as Marik joined in and the siblings hugged each other tightly. Yugi smiled brightly. He knew for sure that things would truly never be the same for the werewolves, especially Marik's pack. Maybe now Marik will put down his discrimination against vampires.
