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Theroogleboy: Thank You. That is so sweet of you to say. Alejandro made a brief appearance in Chapter 2 (really Prologue Part 2) and 5. He will make many appearances in this story but he will not be going to Long Island. For now.
weirdkev27: Thank You! This is 1 out of 3 reasons I hate this OC. The other 2 shall be later explained. Oh and one question, WHO THE HECK IS MARTY STU! Just wondering.
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Now in the chapter Andrew and Sarah I introduced a cheerleader with the last name Sanders. She will be further explained in this chapter.
1:00 P.M Heather's POV April 17th, 2010
We just got finished bed shopping.
I got a daybed.
Damian got a regular bed. Nothing Special.
Ivy did end up getting her bed on chains. It took Dad the longest to hook up.
"So you finally got a bed" Cody said I was talking to him via cell phone.
"Yep. But I still have to figure out how to style it." I said.
"You just got to pick the wall color and the rest will come to you." He said.
"I hope so"
"So how are things with you and Bryan?"
"What do you mean?"
"Heather, it doesn't take rocket science to figure out your crushing on Bryan. Big Time." Cody said.
I blushed.
"I don't know. We talk a lot and we have a ton in common. It's just… I don't know!" I flopped on my bed and looked up at the white ceiling.
"Why not ask him out?" Cody suggested.
I sat upright.
"Pardon me?"
"Just ask him out for a pizza or something."
"I don't know. And since when are you a match maker extraordinar?" I asked.
"9th grade teaches you some important lessons. But seriously, just ask him. Kay?"
"I don't know…."
"Dude, calm down. Here's how it's going to work. 1. I'm going to hang up. 2. You're going to call Bryan. 3. Your going to ask him out and report back to me. Is that clear solider!" he said imitating Chef.
I couldn't help but giggle.
"Yes sir, General Anderson, sir!" I said
"Over and Out!" He said.
"Over and Out!" I said.
As soon as he hung up I called Bryan.
"Hello" Bryan said.
"Hey Bryan" I said
"Heather. Hi. What's up?"
"I was wondering…"
"Yes. I mean… What?" he had hoped for something.
"If you would…" My heart was pounding.
"What?"
"Teach me how to skate board!" I blurted out.
"Teach me how to skateboard?"I thought while I mentally slapped myself.
"Oh… um… sure. Why do you want to learn how skate?" he sounded disappointed.
"I just figured a new life a new hobby." I said.
"Oh. Ok. I'll meet you at your house in an hour ok?"
"Ok."
"Bye"
"Bye" I hung up and dialed Cody's number
"Hello."
"Dude I suck." I said
"Chickened out?"
"Should I surrender myself to Kentucky Fried Chicken now or wait until dinner?"
"What happened?"
"I was about to ask him then I blurted out teach me how to skate board. So now instead of a date I've got skate board lessons."
"Don't take it personally but, Bok Bok Bok Bok Bok!"
"1, Not Funny! 2. Shut Up! 3. What do I do?" I asked
"He's giving you skate boarding lessons right?"
"Yeah."
"Ask him during the lessons."
"I don't know man…"
"Just Ask Him! Bye!" He hung up
"Gotcha Cody" I said to no one
-1 hour later-
"Just think of skate boarding like surfing. You've surfed before right?" Bryan asked.
"Nope. Never in my life." I said.
"What's wrong with …" he trailed off when he noticed a girl walking towards us.
It took me a minute to recognize her but when I did I realized she was that Sanders girl.
Only this time she was wearing a ruby red tube top that showed her stomach, blue daisy dukes, a button up white shirt that remained un-button and sleeves that went down to her elbows, and high heels very similar to the ones I use to wear.
"By the pricking of my thumb something wicked this way comes" Bryan muttered.
"Hey Bryan-"she said sweetly "Who's your friend?" she said looking at me.
"This is Heather." Bryan said
"So we're broken up for 2 weeks and you go out of your way to find another girlfriend! Ugh! You suck!" She said with fury in her eyes and hands on your hips.
"You're such an Ass!" she screamed
"Takes one to know one." Bryan said
She stormed off.
"Who was that?" I asked.
"Kaity Sanders. She's the neighborhood ass-hole." Bryan said
"Who you used to date." I said sadly.
"I only dated her for a week I swear." He looked me in the eye.
"It's ok, I believe you"
"Really?"
"Really" There was silence. We just stared at each other.
"Just ask him!"Cody's voice rang through my head
"Hey Bryan, Could I ask you something?" I asked
"What?"
"Would you… um… maybe like to… go get a burger or something with me?"
"Are you asking me out?"He asked
"Maybe."
"Cause, I'd love to see a movie with you." Bryan said
"Sooooooooo?" I asked
"I'll pick you up around seven. We can get dinner and a movie."
"It's a date!" I said
"Cool, Later." He blushed
"Yeah, Later." I blushed
He ran in the direction of Andrew's house. While I ran back to my house.
I called Sarah.
"Hello" Sarah's voice said at the other end.
"Sarah I got a date!" I exclaimed.
"Shut Up! With who?"
"Bryan."
She squealed.
"When?"
"Tonight. We're going to dinner and a movie." I said
"Well, I'll let you go so you can get ready for your date. Call me with the deats later." Sarah said.
"Gotcha. Later."
"Later."
I texted Sierra and Cody and told them what happened.
Sierra said:
OMG! That is so Cute! Good Luck Girl!
Cody said:
You are no longer a chicken. : P
I texted back:
Thanks you guys wish me luck!
Then I started to get ready for my date with Bryan.
About 2 minutes later Ivy and Damain came running in.
"We're board. Entertain us." Ivy said
"You seem happy, What's up?" Damian asked
"I've got a date with Bryan." I sighed dreamily.
"Shut Up!" Ivy shouted
"No way!" Damain said
They exchanged glances.
"What about Alejandro?" They both asked in unison
"Who?" I asked.
They both laughed. I can't wait for tonight.
2:30 P.M Bryan's POV April 17th, 2010
"Yeah, Later" Heather blushed
I ran to Andrew's house.
I got there in 2 minutes flat.
I bolted up to his room
"DUDE I GOT A DATE!" I screamed
"With who?" Andrew asked setting his guitar aside.
"Heather." A goofy smile spreading on my face.
"That's my boy! Man, I knew the first time you saw her that you liked her."
"Yeah."
"She and Sarah clicked from the start. Man, now me and Sarah are going to feel like 3rd wheels." Andrew said.
I wasn't listening. I was thinking about Heather.
"But Sarah will find a guy in no time. I mean she's smart, funny, sweet, caring, and she has that silky light brown hair, beautiful brown eyes, and snow like skin." Andrew sighed dreamily
This brought me back to reality.
"Dude, you ok?" I raised my eye brow.
"Oh, um… yeah. I'm fine. Never been better." He said rapidly. He went back to playing his guitar.
Well that was weird.
Amen brother, Amen
The next chapter will be the date.
What do you think of Kaity Sanders?
*Gets hit in the head with a chair.*
Me: What the heck!
Andrew: That's for hitting me on the head with a chair in your other story.
Me: Dude, truce?
Andrew: Ok.
Me: I'll update said story on Friday or Saturday.
?: We're getting closer to finding out who I am.
Me: You go back into hiding.
(OC leaves)
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