I published a new story called 7th time's the charm
Time for some reviews!
To:
Emily: I'm glad you like the character.
Can't think: I don't want to reveal to many things about that certain part of the story, so… How did you figure that part out so… um… next review
acosta perez jose ramiro: Thanks. Agreed
Booksmusiclove: Come April, yes.
ARandomperson: Yeah, he's like ashamed of Jose cuz of obvious reasons and Alejandro cuz of what happened on TDWT. Plot will have twist. Epically after I write that chapter for CharlieHarperFan88 it's just gonna be so… so… yeah and a derp a derp a derp! XD. Revenge to come… next school year! But like up above come April, yes. Hey, I DUNNO is my catch phrase. I say it all the time. Ask Emeralfire1997. A close friend of mine.
Theroogleboy: No one can replace Bryan. And thank god for that. Chapter 27 is actually a filler chapter. I gotta stop watching TV when I write chapters. That chapter is heavily influenced by That 70's Show. Thanks! Loca is in this chapter! I'm considering becoming one when I'm older.
Dreamer911: Lucky! Me and my friend Shaylea want to go to NYC! Well, 4 more years to go for me and 5 for her. I knew that last clue gave it… I mean… um… NO ONE SEE'S THE WIZARD!
Flutejrp: I was aiming for that angle. I've even got a few chapter moments coming up for those 2.
Now, my friend just published a new and her first story. Her name is Emeraldfire1997, go check her out!
I just wrote 2 new chapters in my trusty notebook!
Also, go to the bottom for a notice.
11:55 AM Heather's POV September 6th, 2010
"So, Loca put Ineda Bathe on Mr. Narnia's attendance sheet?" Andrew asked
"It was fricking hilarious" I laughed
"I still can't believe she did that." Sarah said
"We can!" Andrew and I said in unison
"Hola Bitches! You talking 'bout me?" Loca asked slugging Andrew in the arm.
"Yeah. That's what everyone is talking about. And our music video of course." Sarah pointed out
"So what class do you guys have next?" Loca asked
"Study Hall with Mr. Theo." I said
"Me too." Andrew said
"Me three." Sarah said
"And I makes four." Loca said
"Sweet, let's go." I said
-Mr. Theo's Classroom-
"Wow. No desk, shag carpet, lava lamps everywhere." I took notice of the room. I saw something odd in the corner. "And what's with the goat?" I said
"BAAAA!" The goat looked right at me.
Weird.
"All farm animals aside, we get bean bag chairs instead of desk" Sarah said
"What this? Look they have our names on them." Loca said pointing to one with her name printed on a piece of paper that was tapped to a bean bag chair.
We all found our names in the four bean bag chairs in the front row
Loca's bean bag had leopard print on it
Sarah's bean bag chair was white pale pink hearts all over it
Andrew's bean bag chair was black with silver stars all over it
My bean bag chair was crimson red and it had black music notes all over it.
I noticed 8 chairs behind us were not filled
"This guy skipped 2 rows of chairs. Then again there is a goat in the room" I thought
"Feliz Cumpleaños" A man with fair skin, onyx eyes, and greyyish-black dreadlocks said as he walked in. He wore faded blue jeans with holes in them, a black shirt, a barf green jacket, and brown sandals. He looked as though he hadn't showered in a week.
"Oh" I said
"My" Sarah said
"God" Andrew finished
"Happy Birthday?" Loca asked
"Whose birthday is it?" Sarah asked
"Somebody's. Somewhere." The man said
I raised my brow.
"Now, I'm Mr. Theo. For the next 9 months I'm gonna be edumacating you kids on fun. So, this class is free period!" Mr. Theo said
The class burst into cheers.
"I like this guy" Loca said
"Me too." I said
"Now, you can call Theo, Mr. Theo, dude, man, bro but I'd prefer Theo." Theo explained
"You want us to call you by your last name?" Andrew asked
"Theo's my first name." Theo said
"Cool." Andrew said
"But, I do have some rules…" Theo said
"Like…?" Loca said
"Always keep 1 book by your desk, if you leave the room when you come back knock on the door 3 times, and if you ever see that door knob turning- "He pointed to the door. "Then drop what you're doing, shut your world holes, and pretend to read." Theo said
"Why?" Sarah asked
"Word holes?" I asked
"Ever since I started working here, a man named Leroy Flim has been trying to get me fired." Theo said
"Why? I've know you for 2 minutes and you're already the best teacher I've ever had." I said
"He says I'm not exactly the teacher type." Theo said
I glanced at the goat in the room.
"I don't like this Flim guy but he might have a point." I popped the P.
"Well we won't let you get fired." Loca said
The entire class nodded.
"So, what do we do in here?" Sarah asked
"Pretty much take the hour off. Any Questions?" Theo asked
I raised my hand
"Yes, Heather." Theo said
"What up with the goat?" I asked pointing to the goat.
Theo glanced back at the goat.
BAAA!
He shrugged.
-Later-
Damain, Ivy, Andrew, Sarah, Loca, and I were walking back to my house.
"So, Damain, how's the 10th grade treating ya?" I asked
"I met Clair Thomas. The most beautiful girl in the world today." My brother had a stupid grin on his face.
"Ice blonde hair, ice blue eyes, snow white skin, and a killer smile." Andrew asked
Damain nodded
"She lives next door to me. She seems nice." Andrew said
Ivy had been very quiet.
To quiet.
"So Ivy, anything new?" I asked
"Huh? Oh… um… beside the fact that someone related to Alejandro is in my Spanish class!" Ivy said
"WHAT!" I said
"He looks like him, dresses like him, and he's from Spain and his uncle is a diplomat." Ivy said
"So he's an exchange student from Spain and he's in your Spanish class?" Loca asked
"Yeah." Ivy said
"Well, that's a useless class for him." Loca said
"Do they sound the same or act the same?" Andrew asked
"Both!" Ivy said
"Maybe they're related." Sarah said
"If they are, he doesn't want to say." Ivy said
"So, if they act the same, did this… what's his name again?" Damain asked
"Diego." Ivy said
"Then did this Diego dude flirt with you as well?" Damian said
Ivy blushed.
"No! All he did was call me mi ángel. Whatever that means?" Ivy said
"It means my angel." I said as I remebered one of Alejandro's pet names for me.
"His last name is even Burromuerto!" Ivy exclaimed
"What does Burromuerto even mean?" Sarah asked
"Dead Donkey." Loca said
We all stared at Loca
"What? Spanish is the official language of my country." Loca said
"Lo, where are you from?" I asked
"I'll never tell you guys. It'd take all the fun out of it." Loca said
"At least give us a hint." Ivy said
"Ok… um… I'm not from Spain or Mexico." Loca said
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So I've got a new idea for a story
Here It is:
The I.C.A.:
Or the International Crime Agency.
Duncan, Courtney, Heather, Sierra, and Cody have been recruited for a government program.
5 years later, Duncan and Gwen are married and expecting their first child. Sierra and Cody are married with baby triplets. Courtney, the team leader has just gotten out of a relationship and is back at her prime. Heather is actually friendlier than before.
All 6 of them think that everything in the past is in the past. But after a mission in Argentina, They discover they can't hide from the past.
Couples: Gwuncan, Trentney, Coderra, and my fav Aleheather.
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