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Acosta perez jose ramiro: You're welcome! And as always, thanks!
Can't think: I'm glad you like Alice, in chapter 19, it mentions Rachel at the beginning of the chapter. Unfortunately, Loca is gonna have to be a bit mean to Alice this chapter. But, let's just say, I knew how much you liked Loca, so I added a few things that will make you laugh. All involving Loca. Yeah, he just meant, even though he got 4 kids (You forgot about Annette) who love him, Kisi was not the most loving wife or mother. And 2 out of 4 of his birth kids were accident. Here's a hint: Annette is the first accident and the second accident is not Heather. I got inspired to do that "Do a Dear" from Full House. They have cheesy moments in there, but funny.
Now, this chapter is Loca at her finest.
Noon Heather's POV October 10, 2010
Alice and I were sitting in front of my garage.
I was wearing some worn out denim jeans, bright blue high top shoes, a white tank top under a bright blue sweater, my varsity cheerleaders' jacket, and a sky blue knit cap. My hair was pulled into the kind of pony-tail I wore during World Tour. My skateboard was in my lap.
Alice was wearing a long sleeved pink and white striped shirt, dark blue overalls with a red and white polka-dot over her left knee, and white tennis shoes. Her long hair was pulled into to braided pigtails with pink bow at the end of each braid. She was sitting next to Damian's old scooter.
"Did I tell you about this morning?" I ask Alice
"No, tell me." Alice said happily
"So, I was up 'til 4 in the morning, watching TV. So, my dad said I can sleep in. So, 7 AM. I'm sleeping, and my dad comes in and starts bitching about me sleeping in. I swear, some days my dad can be such an angry person." I said
"My mom can be angry person sometimes to." Alice said
"That's why they're perfect for each other." Me and Alice smiled. I saw Sarah walking up the driveway.
"SARAH!" I shouted happily.
"Hey, I can't stay long. I'm going over to Andrew's." Sarah said happily.
"Oh! Before you go, meet my soon to be step-sister, Alice." I gestured to Alice. She waved.
"Hi! Oh Crap! Loca's coming! I'll see ya later, Heather." Sarah dashed across my lawn toward Andrew's house.
"Who's Loca?" Alice asked nervously.
"Our lovely immigrant friend. Don't worry, she's the best." I assured her.
I saw Loca, who was wearing black skinny jeans, a long sleeved, grey and black striped shirt, a black a silver crochet cap, a black sleeveless vest, and her roller blades, coming up the driveway. She was counting a big wad of cash.
"97, 98, 99, 105, 106…" Loca counted.
"Loca…" I said
"Hey. Did you know that little nerd kid about a block away from you had so much cash?" Loca said showing me her cash.
"Loca…" I gestured to Alice.
"Oh, here have a dollar." Loca handed me a dollar. I deadpanned.
"So, I grab the kid, shove him in a trash can, and roll him down the-"Loca rambled.
"Loca, this is my sister Alice." I pointed to Alice.
"Whatever! So, this kid goes all the way down the block, and he tosses out his money! And I'm like-"Loca rambled on.
"LOCA!"I shouted.
"What?" She asks me.
"Alice." I point to her.
"Hi!" Alice waved
"Hey… So, where are you from?" Loca asks.
"Topeka, Kansas." Alice says happily.
Loca starts to roll down the drive way.
"Loca?" I shout. She gives us the finger. I set my skateboard aside.
"Loca!" I run up to her and grab her by the shoulders and turn her around.
"What? I don't want to talk to it!" Loca whispers.
"Not it, my soon to be sister." I whisper back.
"Really?" Loca asked skeptically.
"Really." I smiled. I pushed her over toward Alice. "Go make nice." I said
Loca sat down beside Alice. I sat by Alice too.
"Hey." Alice said softly.
"Hi!" Loca said sweetly. Good start.
"So, step-sister? What is that? Retarded or something?" Loca asked. I face-palmed.
"My mom is marrying her dad." Alice explained.
"Well Gillz, you know what the say! Second time lucky!" Loca said.
"I'm going to ignore that."I thought.
"Why did she walk away from me?" Alice whispered to me.
"I said she was an immigrant." I whispered back.
"Oooohhhh." Alice said.
"Hey guys, I think I got blood on my blades. It's not mine so don't worry." Loca said. I shook my head.
We heard the ice cream truck not too far away.
"The Ice Cream truck runs into October here?" Alice asked
"Not here, the next town over. The snooty, stuck up, and rich town of Pine Hills." I said
"Hey, how about I get us some Ice Cream?" Loca suggested. Alice and I nodded.
"Do you need us to give you some money?" Alice asked
"Naw! I'll just use my 5 finger discount!" Loca rolled down the drive-way.
"Could I get a five finger discount?" Alice asked me when Loca was out of sight.
"I don't think so." I said
"HEY! SLOW DOWN! I SAID I WANTED 3 CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM CONES!"Loca shouted from down the street.
"I said no! Now let go of the truck, crazy!"A male voice said.
Then, the truck went zooming by my house. Loca was hanging on to the handle of one of the back doors as the truck pulled her.
"I WANT SOME ICE CREAM! SLOW DOWN YOU SON OF A BITCH! GIVE ME SOME FUCKING ICE CREAM!"Loca shouted.
"Let go! I'm gonna call the cops on you if you don't." The male voice said as the truck disappeared out of sight.
Alice, not knowing Loca very well, was wide-eyed with shock. I, on the other hand, berried my face in my hands and shook my head in a disappointed way.
About 5 minutes later, Loca came back.
"Ok… that didn't go as planned. So, Gillz. Let's go do what were gonna do before it came here." Loca started to roll down the driveway again.
"Don't call her it!" I called after Loca.
"C'mon it. Let's go." Loca said
I hopped on my board and Alice got on the scooter.
"So, like I was saying-"Loca rambled on as she pushed Alice to the ground. Luckily, she landed on the grass.
"LOCA!"I shouted after her. She ignored me. I reached out and pulled Alice to her feet. "Sorry. She isn't the friendliest of people." I apologized for Loca.
"I can see that." Alice said.
I rolled down the drive way and did a Butter Flip over a fallen down trash can.
"Sweet!" Alice said riding down to me.
We did our handshake. (A/N: The link to this video is on my profile. But, it's the Parent Trap handshake)
"Ya know, we have a hand shake to. How did it go again? Oh yeah!" Loca said before we did our handshake. (A/N: The link to this video is also on my profile)
"HA!" Loca laughed right in Alice's ear.
-5 minutes later-
We were all riding down the street.
"So, is your trailer a double-wide? Or can't you afford that either?" Loca asked Alice. She looked really affined.
"Yeah, because you could afford that." I said coming to Alice's defenses. Alice laughed at my joke.
"Loca, can I talk to you? Over there?" I ask pointing toward a bush a few feet away. Loca shrugged and we went over to the bush.
"Loca, you need to be nice." I said
"And you need to stop being 6 feet tall. But, we have all have our issues." Loca said
"Ok, first of all, I'm 5' 11'' and second, I'm serious." Loca rolled her eyes. "By New Years Eve's, she's gonna be my sister. So you'll be seeing a lot of her." I told Loca.
"Like how much are we talking 'bout? Once a week? Do you get her on the Fridays? Ya gotta feed her? Should I go and get some pet chow?" Loca asked.
"This isn't working! Maybe a bribe would help her see my point…"I thought as I stuffed my hands into my coat pocket. This is where I had 2 $10 dollar bills.
"At least try to be nice." I said
"If I tell you something do you promise not to be a bitch about it? I DON'T KNOW HOW TO BE NICE!" Loca shouted.
I stuck the money in her face. She smiled.
"Oh, I know how to be nice!" Loca said happily. She reached for the money; I held it above my head. She's so small compared to me and Sierra; I knew she would never reach it. Not even on her tip-toes.
"How nice will you be?" I smiled
"Very Nice!" Loca said.
"How nice?" I asked again.
"Like… like… That Bridgette girl from Total Drama!" Loca said
"Promise?" I asked
"Pinkie Promise!" We did the Pinkie Promise. "Break the pinkie promise and I break your face." Loca said.
I rolled my eyes but handed her the money.
"I'm gonna go broke." I said. Alice rode up to me. "You alright?" I asked her.
"Yeah. I'll be fine, I'm used to it."Alice said. This took me by surprise. Loca rode up to Alice.
"So, I really like your clothes." Alice smiled. "Where'd you get it, the dollar store?" Loca asked
That backfired on me quickly!
I grabbed Loca by the ear and dragged her away from Alice and took $10 back.
"What did I do wrong? I gave her a compliment! Loca asked.
"No you didn't! Dollar Store? Really?" I asked her.
"I get shit at the Dollar Store all the time!"Loca said
"That's where most poor people go! And or Immigrants." I told her.
-5 minutes later-
I was working on my 360 spin when Loca rolled over to Alice. Alice braced herself for the worst.
"You're Alright!" Loca patted Alice on the back. Alice smiled and so did I.
I grabbed my board and walked over to Alice. I saw a note on her back and I frowned.
"What? What's wrong?" Alice asked innocently.
The note read: Dumb Ass
I grabbed the note of her back and showed Alice. I glared at Loca.
"How did that get there?" Loca chuckled nervously. I held out my hand.
Loca sighed angrily but gave me the money back anyway. I pulled her away from Alice.
"Alright, since bribery didn't work. Let's give you some nice lessons." I said
"What do you mean?" Loca asked. Her brow raised in a confused way.
"Step 1: Go up to her and say; Hello! How are you?" I said. Loca looked at me strangely. "Kindly." I added.
"No smack on the head?" Loca asked. I shook my head. "No punch to the shoulder?" I shook my head. "To the jaw?" I shook my head. "Too the boob?" Loca asked
"No!" I pointed toward Alice. Loca nodded and rolled over toward Alice.
"Hello, friend!" I could tell Loca was tempted to punch her on the shoulder, but decided against it. "How are you?" Loca asked
"I've been better, thanks." Alice said riding away. Loca rolled up to me.
"Good?" Loca asked me.
"Very Good. Step 2: She's new. Show her around. Maybe show her our hangout." I said slyly.
"I got it! Alright, listen up Alice! Back in Tocrapa, I guess it was all fields and corn and cows and shit. But here, it's exactly the opposite. Like you see that roof… no. See that house… ok no. Oh, see that bush over there!" Alice nodded. "Watch this!" Loca rolled over there at a fast speed. She tried to jump, but tripped, and ended up head first in the bush. "It's that easy!" Loca said happily.
I went over and pulled her out of the bush.
"Step 3: Treat others the way you want to be treated." I said. Loca nodded and rolled over to Alice and grabbed her… (A/N: You know what I mean!)
Alice was shocked and inched away from Loca. Loca rolled over to me.
"Not what I was expecting… but it's a start." I said
1: 00 PM Loca's POV October 10, 2010
"Hey look, a dollar!" Alice said pointing to said dollar
"Oh," I grabbed the dollar and handed it to her. "Here you have!" I said nicely
"Thanks!" Alice said stuffing it in her pocket.
"You're Wel-"Alice shoved me down. I looked at her.
"How dare she do that! That's what I do to other people!"I thought. I rolled over to Gillz.
"Gillz! Did you just see that! That little lame-o, pushed me down!" I said
"Yeah, right!" Gillz laughed
"I don't know what you're talking about." Alice said innocently.
"But… But she just… She just…" I started
"Loca, be realistic. Alice wouldn't hurt a fly." Gillz said
We dropped the subject
-10 minutes later-
Alice and I were riding in circles. Gillz was sitting on someone's lawn, trying to loosen up on of the wheels on her board or something.
"Coming through." Alice said sweetly as she shoved me down again.
"Gillz, did you see that!" I shouted over to her.
"See what?" Gillz asked me. I groaned.
-10 more minutes later-
We were all riding down the street when a gust of wind came and blew Gillz's hat of her head. She ran back to go get it. Alice shoved me down again and just kept riding.
Gillz came back.
"Tell me you didn't see that!" I shouted.
"I didn't see it." Gillz said honestly. I sighed but got back up.
-15 minutes later-
Gillz looked down to pick something up and Alice shoved me down.
"Oh come on!" I shouted
"Dude, what is with you today?" Gillz asked.
"You wanna know what's with me? That is what's with me!" I pointed toward Alice
"Don't call her that! Her! Her, Loca, her!" Gillz said to me.
-10 minutes later-
Gillz was sitting on someone's lawn a distance away from me and tying her shoe when Alice shoved me again.
"Nice!" Gillz said as she rode pass me on her board.
I groaned and got up to follow them
-15 minutes later-
Gillz and I were talking when Alice came and shoved me down again. Gillz's eyes widened in surprise as her mouth formed an "O" in surprise
"What was that for?"Gillz asked Alice
"She was in my way." Alice shrugged
"I was in your way? I was in your way! Well, look who finally grew a backbone! Little, Kansas thinks she can mess with me and walk away without a broken bone-"I started yelling at her.
"You know what Loca? I will call Immigration, and have them send you back to whatever rat infested country you came from and-"Alice yelled right back.
This went on for a good 3 minutes.
"MY ROOM! Now." Gillz told us sternly.
2 00 PM Heather's POV October 10, 2010
I led Alice and Loca, who were shooting daggers at each other, to my room. They sat on my bed and I sat on a bean bag chair.
I sighed
"What the hell?" I asked them
"Ok, just because I'm from Kansas, doesn't mean she has the right to insult me! Especially since she's probably from some run down, rat infested poor country that has people killing dogs for food!" Alice shouted
"Just because I made fun of her, doesn't mean she has the right to do what I do to other people! It's totally not fair!" Loca shouted
Then, the two started arguing.
"You know what, I can't handle this. I need a drink." I sighed
"I'll get you a drink!" Alice and Loca said in unison. They glared at each other.
"My drink is in the basement."I told them.
"I'll go get it!" The two girls said in unison.
The two girls practically trampled each other to get to the basement.
What they didn't know was I was following behind them.
"Gillz, I got it! I got your soda!" Loca shouted to me as she fought Alice for it.
I locked them in the basement.
"Done and Done." I said leaning against the wall near the door.
"What the hell?" Loca asked
"What's going on?" Alice asked
"Gillz! Gillz! Oh crap she locked us in here! Gillz!" Loca shouted.
I smiled.
"My weed!" Loca and Alice said in unison. I perked up. "Your weed?" The two girls asked in unison.
I smiled
-1 minute later-
(A/N: WARNING: High Scene!)
We were all sitting in a circle getting high
"You know what Kansas, you're alright." Loca said
"You're alright to. This can't be my weed it's too good." Alice said
"Yeah, it's mine. I grew it myself." Loca said
"I'm so glad you guys are getting along." I said
"She's not bad once you get to know her…" Loca said before bursting out in laughter.
We all did the same thing.
"I'm not even high right now!" Loca laughed.
Ok, that ending was weird. I'm putting this story on a temporary hiatus until I write more chapter of this story in my notebook. So, when I get a few chapters ahead in my notebook, I'll publish another chapter.
Until then, peace!