I don't own Twilight. Work was not fun, but I survived. I had a couple of very hot updates waiting for me when I got home, so that made things better. Don't you just love it when that happens?
This is a slash story with m/m lemons involved and language. If you're under 18 or that's not your thing, please just hit the red X.
There will be alternate POV's every day. Jasper will be first and is much more talkative, but Edward is starting to talk a bit more!
Reviewer of the day goes to…. MacGyverTape who said "OM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM" All your reviews for the last chapter were amazing, but I thought this one summed it all up pretty nicely. LOL
Chapter 48 - Success
J-
He is serious? Does he really want me in his mouth right now? I sure as hell won't be able to concentrate on what I'm doing if he's sucking me down his throat.
"Edward, I don't know if I can handle that. Let me make you come, and then we can worry about me."
I can tell by the look of determination on his face he's going to get his way. I'd give him anything he wanted, and if it's my cock he wants, he's going to get it.
"No, I want you in my mouth while you make me come. I'm so close right now, baby. Please, I want to do this with you so bad. All my firsts I want with you, remember?"
"Your first and only. I'll try, Edward, but I know it won't be any good for you. I can't possibly do that with you touching me."
Of course I've heard of the term "69" before. What seventeen year old boy hasn't. I've unfortunately been on the receiving end of many locker room stories depicting my friends doing that with their girlfriends or even random hook-ups.
I do have to admit I've never actually witnessed it before, and I have a feeling that boy/ boy "69ing" is going to be a lot different than the boy/girl versions I've heard so much about.
I know it's crazy to think that I've never seen porn before, but I haven't, and theres' a damn good reason for that.
Dial up.
I fucking have dial up out here in the boonies, and that means it would take even a small video 20 minutes to load. I never really had the patience for that so my imagination always did just fine.
Now I'm really regretting that decision.
For one thing, I would always imagine a girl in my self-love sessions and that might explain why I was never really that successful. I mean I would come eventually, but it was nothing like I've experienced with Edward.
Another thing is that maybe if I'd watch porn, I would have realized a lot sooner my inclination for men.
Who knows what would have happened. All I know is right now I'm completely clueless as to how this is going to work, and it's all because I have dial up!
"Jasper, you're going to do just fine. We're both learning together, remember? Now, get those jeans off."
Oh, I love it when he's all demanding.
I quickly shimmy out of my jeans and boxers. I'm still hard as stone after sucking him.
Having him in my mouth and hearing his reactions to me make me crazy.
Maybe this won't be so difficult after all.
I look over at him and see his gaze is not at my face, but at my very hard cock. He said he wanted it, and I believe him.
I lay back on the grass and feel it tickle beneath me. I reach down and stroke my erection, because feeling him eye-fucking me is such a turn on. I have to give myself a bit of relief.
Being out here so open and exposed is making this even hotter than it already is. I let him get his fill of my body with his eyes, and then watch as he turns his body around so his head is pointing down toward my feet. He lifts up on his side with one elbow, and reaches over and pulls me up in the same position.
Oh! So that's how this is going to work!
His perfect cock is right in front of me. All I have to do is reach out and touch him.
And I do.
.
E-
I can tell he's scared, and I completely understand that. I know this isn't going to be easy or perfect this first time, but how are we going to get better at these things unless we practice?
I have no problem practicing with Jasper as much as he wants.
I can tell when he finally realizes how this is going to work, because his smirk is back and his tongue darts out to lick his lips.
That's right, baby. I want those wet lips around me right now.
He lunges forward and takes me into his mouth without even giving me a warning.
Damn, he had me so close before I know I'm not going to last long. I need to get to work if I'm going to have him coming with me.
Trying to stay focused on my task, and not the hot, wet mouth around my dick, I start licking up and down his very hard erection. He's so ready for this. He's leaking steadily, and I can't stop lapping at his tip to get it all.
He's moaning and thrusting his hips toward me, so I guess that means he's ready for a bit more.
And he was the one that was worried! He's doing just fine.
I continue to hold him and take him into my mouth as far he can go. We're both going to have to work up to taking more than this in. Having a boyfriend with a huge cock has its advantages and disadvantages that's for sure.
He's doing a great job staying focused on his task down there, because he's about ready to make me come sooner than I want.
I pull him out of my mouth, as he hums around me. Where the hell did he learn that little trick? Fucking amazing.
"Jasper, baby, you're going to make me come. I'm so close. I want you to shoot your come in my mouth. I want to taste you as you slide down my throat."
I think a bit of dirty talk never hurt anybody.
He's grown even larger when I get my mouth back to work on him. I didn't think it was possible, but he has.
I feel the hand stroking me up and down squeeze me even harder and start to move faster. Then I feel another hand go directly to my balls and start to pull down slightly. That's fucking amazing.
I reach over and do the same thing to my boy. Look at him getting all creative on me.
I feel his hand move from my balls back to my entrance, and I lose it. No warning at all. I just explode into his mouth.
My scream is muffled by his cock in my mouth. I stop all movement of my mouth on him, because the orgasm going through me is just that intense.
That does not stop him from moving, though.
He fucks my mouth while swallowing around me over and over again trying to drink it all down. There had to be so much, but I can't feel bad about it.
Fuck, I don't feel anything at all right now.
When I come back to myself, I realize he's licking me clean and talking to me.
"Baby, swallow me down. Take my come."
I grab a hold of him again, and take him down as far as I ever have before. His strangled cry is followed by stream after stream of his come shooting down my throat.
"Oh God, yes! That's it, baby."
I hear his words of encouragement, but have to concentrate on swallowing around him. I almost get all of it, but a few drops come out the side of my mouth.
When I look down at him, he's watching me. I let him fall out of my mouth before I swipe the drops that got away with my finger.
He moans loudly as he watches me put my finger in my mouth and lick him off of it.
"Mmm, you taste so good, baby. You're my favorite flavor."
I wink at him as I continue to swirl my tongue around my finger.
He swiftly launches himself over me and crashes his lips against mine. I open my mouth so that he can taste his come in my mouth.
He groans as he swirls his tongue around mine. He must like it.
He pulls away giving us both a chance to breath. We're gasping for air at this point after the intensity of the orgasms we had and then that kiss.
"You made me come first." I pout at him and lick at his adams apple.
"Edward, from now on you're in charge of all ideas for our sex life. Whatever you want to do, I'll do it. No questions asked."
I laugh at him, but I have a feeling he's totally serious. Let's see just how sure he is about that.
"Well, for our next adventure you're going to need to buy bottle of lube. Think you can handle that, baby? I want those long thick fingers in my ass very, very soon."
I feel him twitch against my very sated dick, and it makes me smile.
He must really like that idea a lot.
69 for the win! LOL The shit about Jasper having dial up is the absolute truth for me. I don't live on a farm, but I am out in the country. I HATE only having dial up. If I didn't have my iPad, I would go insane. Do any of you have to live through the torture of dial up like me?
I have to say the reviews for the last chapter were some of my favorites. It's so great to know I'm not the only dirty minded person out there! haha
See you tomorrow!
