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Chernabog smirks at his small victory,soon enough he could pull out the big guns and his monsters could kill the witches.

-Prue-

I look at the IV drip attached to my hand and to be honest i'm a little surprised that i'm even in a hospital bed.I have a sore throat from screaming and I feel a head ache drumming in my a woman in a white outfit comes in who looks young,about Paige's age with blond hair tgats tide of with her locks showing.
"Good morning miss haliwell,how are you feeling?" she asks in a kind voice and she offers a smile and I tuck a piece of loose hair behind my ear and start to reply.
"Um,confused,why am I in here?" I ask her and she fixes up my blanket "whats the last thing you remember?" I have to think back,I was in the kitchen and I saw a figure and I started screaming and passed out,better not tell her about the freaky Demon thingy."Ah I remember passing out in my..boy friends arms" I tell her and if thats what Andy is,my boy friend,I don't know.
"Yes,after that you started hyperventilating and were hysterical and you wouldn't calm down and you smacked your head on the table and your sisters brought you here" she recalls and I feel myselg going pale,wow,I was scared.
"Can I see my sisters please?" I ask the nurse and she nods "right away,do you need anything?" she asks gently "ah some Tylenol and water please" I tell her with a grateful smile and she nods "right away".

She leaves and I feel memory restored and I hear the slithering voice croak Chernabog in my hear,who is it?.A few minutes later all my siblings and Andy rush in "Prueee!" cheers Phoebe and she dives onto the bed like a two year old and kisses all over my face and lays her head on my stomach and I have to laugh at my little walks foward to beside my bed and she leans down and kisses my forehead softly "hey sweetie,how you doing?" she asks and Piper climbs on the other side of me and she holds my hand and gives me a warm smile and I kiss her hair and lean my head down on her shoulder."I'm alright,spooked but alright" I admit with a sigh and I watch Phoebe as she curls her body up and keeps her head on my stomach and I place my free hand atop of her head and brush my fingers through her holds my wrist with one hand why she too runs her fingers through my hair."What even happened Prue?" Andy asks as his ocean blue eyes hold mine sending a wave of secure feeling over me."I-I don't know,I was pretty drunk" I say with a slight laugh inserted into yhe last word.
"Well do you want some coffee?" he asks and I smile and he walks over and kisses my lips and leaves them there for a few seconds and as he leaves I still them on mine and I smile.
"Okay,this can't be a coincidence,last night Paige you had some sort of melt down and were so scared and shaken up and then tonight Prue you've had a complete phych and couldn't breathe so far to the point you become the grudge and then you end up in hospital,if I didn't know better I'd say its the work of evil" Piper sums up with an annoyed look in her eye.
Then I have an epiphany,how was that not obvious "thats so right,Paige you said you saw a thing yesterday and I sww a thing too but it didn't match the same description" I tell the eldest and she looks at me "and maybe its a coincidence that the attacks were both at night and in the dark" it sends a shiver down my spine just recalling the memories."Hm,maybe" she answers."Hey,I can go home and look at the book of shadows" Phoebe suggests and I look at her "Paige can I pretty please drive your car!?" the youngest asks and Paige snorts "dream on sister,you crashed grams car,i'm not letting you do the same to mine" Paige laughs although pouts and makes her eyes go bigger in a puppy dog face but Paige ignores it."Piper you go,you are more..wise and you have an active power so you can just freeze and get out of there if any underworld pricks go to attack you" Paige says with a smile added the end and Piper rolls her eyes "yeah,yeah" she kisses my head and gets off my bed and Phoebe doesn't hesitate to scoot up and to re-postion right where Piper was.
She leans hear head against mine and kisses my forehead and wraps her arm around mine and gives me a cute grin before looking at Piper who is walking out of the room."You're in a snuggly mood,whats up?" I ask my baby sister and she sighs "Cole left without saying goodbye and won't answer my calls" I chuckle and stroke her hair."Phoebe,you guys haven't jumped in the sack yet or anything so just give him space and if he doesn't talk to you at all i'll track him down and disect him limb from limb with a fork,how does that sound?" Paige suggests and Phoebe laughs "no,I wasn't joking" Paige says with fake then walks back in with Coffee in a brown take away cup and a bag saying egg and bacon."Just coffee aye?" I grin and he smiles at me and sits on the edge of the bed and throws me the bag "I got you your favorite stuff,its better than the hospital food" he tells me and I feel complete when he's here."Come 'ere" I say and grab his cheeks and give him a kiss.

-Piper-

I have the book of shadows on my lap and i'm in the Attic sitting on the couch under the lamp as its quite dark out now and I see Chernabog in the book.I smile in satisfaction and start reading about him.

Chernabog is an upper level Demon who posses the power to manipulate minds useing his own targets a new victim and gets all there emotions and uses it to make the best monster to scare the victim and eventually kill them he feeds on their 's monsters can only attack in the dark so if he's attacking its best to stay out of the dark,especially at spell to vanquish him is:
If spirits threaten me in this place,
Fight Water by Water and Fire by Fire,
Vanquish their souls into nothingness,
and remove their powers until the last trace. Let these evil beings flee, and Chernabog leave
Through time and space

I feel goosebumps at the thought of him.I look out the window and see the big white moon facing me like in mock and I gulp.I grab my cellphone and flip it open and search through my contacts and see Paige's number but fear grips at me.
She answers on the fifth dial tone "did you find anything in the book?" she asks eagerly.
"Ah,yeah there is a Chernabog in here,he attacks at night and creates monsters and kills innocents,more importantly us using our emotions and memories and scares the crap outta ya" I conclude with a small nod.
"Okay,sweetie you better quickly come home and write down the vanquishing spell" she instructs me but as she says this the lamp light suddenly turns off.I almost feel my eye balls pop out in panic as I scramble off the couch and flick on the switch but the light doesn't restore.
I hear something knock over behind me and I squeak."Paige!" I cry into the phone as I am petrified."Piper,honey whats wrong?" I hear the fear in hear velvet laced voice."Ah-ah Demon,stay on the phone,please!" I yelp and get off the phone and I see a very tall it towering over me with big white pupils but no irises and their black rimmed and is a pale gray with boney legs and and ankles.I feel fear form tears in my eyes.I cannot think straight as our eyes lock and it doesn't move or anything."Baby,are you okay? whats there?" Paige asks me and I can't doubt the panic in her voice.I throw one hand up and it freezes and I dart past it and out of the Attic but into the pitch black continue jumping at me,things I look at to keep my heart from exploding.

I cry as I run out of the Manner door and hair sticks to my teary wet lips.I run down the pathway "okay Piper,I'm getting you!" Paige says as my feet pound against the pavment and I gasp seeing the thing on the other side of the road running on all fours in a cheeta consumed it keeps me running despite my lungs burning and the souls of my feet runs through me on the monster starts to run across to me and this makes me run into the middle of the road.
I then see two very bright lights coming at me and I don't register the car horn or the fact that of I don't move I'm going to be hit by a car.