Hey everyone, this is my second chapter of my story. In that chapter I change my style of writing. Now that story is going to be better. Now I start my dream crossover. Please review that and give me advice for what I must change.
''hello'' normal speak
''hello''thinking
(hello)- messages from me
''Hello''-voice of monsters
''WHAT! Lord Dominator, my rival, and second, most heated enemy is a GIRL!''
Hater feel very big angry. He was humiliated by a girl. Anyone who saw it began to mock him, even Sylvia. Besides Wander. He still looking at Dominator, his heart was beat faster than normal, he doesn't know what it means. Then Sylvia came to him for talk about real sex of lord Dominator
''Hey Wander.'' Sylvia call him, but he did not do anything. ''WANDER!'' She shout at him and still nothing happened. Finally she ended her patience. She snap him and he awake.
''Oh hey Syl, how long you are here?'' He ask her. She was surprised that he did not noticed her.
''Wander, are you okay?'' She was very concerned about it.
''Yeah I'm okay, even better than okay.'' He said with great enthusiasm. ''Are you ever see someone like her before?'' she ask her with very strange voice
''Like who?'' She look around and see lord Dominator. She knows now what this means. ''Are you fu##ing serious.''
''What Hater, are you disappointed or you think the great Lord Dominator is a big strong guy hmm?'' She ask him with her funny voice. ''Oh, but maybe you feel you weakness because girl beat you'' She said to him with no respect.
''I'm not WEAK, I'M GREATEST IN THE GALAXY!" Hater start shout like little kid from kindergarten.
''Wow she is very good in torture Hater with words'' Sylvia say with respect
''Yeah, she is just perfect'' Wander said to her with hearts in eyes. When he said that the sky was began to dark for a few
seconds. (I recommended you to play the music from Scooby doo 2 when Velma firs saw a Patric and Imagined this kind of scene in that, but if you imagine is weak just leave out this scene) :))
''Uhh sir, please tell me you did that'' Peppers said with terrified in his voice
''No that wasn't me, but I know what is this'' Hater began to be serious '' That was...SIGN OF MY VICTORY HAHAHAHA'' And that gone very fast
''Oh really, hahhaha, uhh I don't think so, maybe that was sign of my Victory'' Dominator start a quarrel
''I show you that, WHEN YOU SHIP WILL BE DESTROYED BECAUSE OF MY POWER''
When he start speaking the big ball of fire crashed on the ship of Lord Dominator.
''Yes, yes, YEEES, I know that was a sign of my victory, Congratulations Watchdogs'' Hater was very proud of them, but then.
''Sir, we don't do that'' Commander Peppers honestly replied to him. That was very hard, that was first time he ever congrats them.
''WHAAAAT!? Then who attack my ENEMY AND TOOK MY VICTORY!'' Now that was real angry of lord Hater, He loose with a girl, Wander still lived and now someone took him his chance to fix that. Maybe this is not strange when I tell you that. It was very hard to take for him.
''Who attack my SHIP!'' ''WHO ATTACK HER SHIP'' Wander and Dominator say that in the same time. That awkward to them. ''Well, that was very intresting'' Sylvia and Hater look at them and think about one thing ''This is a goddamn joke.''
''I must go there!'' When she said that her armor was again on her and fly on the ship.
''Hey, wait for me!'' Wander use his bubble and fly there without Sylvia. ''Wander, COME BACK!'' Sylvia was shout at him, but he didn't hear that. When they came there most of things was destroyed and on the floor was in lot of blood. Wander doesn't say anything, he hated the sight of blood, he almost threw up.
''What's wrong Wander? ….WANDER!'' She was surprised that he go with her.
''Yeah I'm fine, I just (cough) hate the blood'' Wander have no strength to watch that.
''Relax, big baby we must find my control panel, I want to know who destroyed my ship'' She was very angry.
They finally get to the control panel, Dominator start looking on recording from cameras. They were shoot dawn when that fire ball strike ship.
''You are want find us'' Some strange voice was talk to them. It was demonic, scary voice.
When Dominator and Wander look behind them they see ugly, humanoid monsters with the gray skin and demonic armors and sharp teeth and swords in hands. There was thirteen monsters, six of them was little and have very ugly faces, next six was biggest than them and beside there faces they look like human, one of them have very strange armor he looks like some kind of shaman, but the most scary of them was the biggest monster with very big horns and demonic eyes and very big strong hands and sharp big teeth.
''You gonna DIE!''
Yup, they are dark spawns from dragon age series and yes this will be a crossover of this, Wander over Yonderand something else. HAHAHA I TELL YOU I DESTROY YOU CHILDHOOD HAHAHAHA! My mad Imagine show you very funny things. The right part of story BEGINS! HAHAHAHA. Next chapter in road, so be ready and have fun.
