Vlog #9

"Spider-woman and I confronted another gang last night. A couple of the guys had guns so we had to get those away from them and not get shot. After we took down most of the main guy's henchmen, I kicked his ass!"

"Peter? What are doing? Are you vlogging? And I kicked that guy's ass while you were getting yours handed to you by one of his goons."

"Wha—Mary Jane! I can embellish a little."

"Did you mention the part where I had to save you?"

"N-no, not yet."

"I got this huge bruise on my back because someone got a little cocky and thought he could take out the big guy with one punch."

"I said I was sorry."

"I really need to teach you some jui jitsu or judo or something."

"You know more than one kind of martial arts?"

"My dad wanted me to be able to handle myself. Now I can do that and more. It's pretty fun. Judging by your fighting style, you just throw punches, kicks, and whatever. Your style is sloppy improv. It works sometimes, but if you're up against a skilled guy you need to know how to take him down."

"Okay, okay, I fight badly. Will you teach me how to kick ass like a pro?"

"Yes, once my back bruise stops bugging me."

"Neat! Uh, I mean cool."

"You're such a dork."

"Yeah, but you like it."

"I do, especially when you turn that camera off."

"Why?"

"It's getting to your head."

"Fine. Off."


First vlog with two people talking. Hopefully it works. Tips on making it clearer who is talking are appreciated along with reviews.