Possible preview of The Neathian and Gundalian re-write
Inside his room in Barodius's castle, Ren was getting ready for his date with Rosemary. Since Jesse broke up with her, this was the perfect chance for him to win this girl's heart. He put on a nice white suit, made himself look presentable, and headed out.
Walking down the hallway, Zenet and Sid looked at him curiously. Why was Ren dressed up so nicely?
"Where's Mr. Fancy Pants going?" Zenet asked.
"Beats me." said Sid. They walked down the hallway.
Outside Bakugan Interspace, Rosemary waited for Ren. She had on a beautiful blue dress and high heels, with her hair tied back in a curly ponytail.
"Well, don't you look all pretty. Where are you off to?" Fabia asked as she walked up to her.
"Ren's taking me out to dinner, since ya know, Jesse broke up with me," said Rosemary, looking down.
"I'm sorry, Rosemary. I know how much he meant to you," said Fabia.
"Who cares? I don't need him anymore!" said Rosemary.
Suddenly, a white limo pulled up. Rosemary's eyes widened, and Ren stepped out. Rosemary blushed, seeing how handsome he looked.
"Are you ready?" Ren asked, taking her hand.
"Yes, sir," said Rosemary with a giggle. They stepped inside and the limo drove off. Fabia waved, and walked back into Bakugan Interspace.
The limo soon pulled up to a ritzy-looking restaurant. Ren opened the door for Rosemary and helped her out. They walked inside, and sat at their table.
"Here you go, my lady," said Ren, pulling Rosemary's chair out.
"Ah, thank you, kind sir," said Rosemary. They both sat down and started a conversation.
Meanwhile, outside, a not-so-happy Jesse was walking, kicking a crumpled up soda can. He thought about Rosemary every moment, and regretted every single moment he did.
"Why did I break up with her? I gave up the best woman for me," he thought to herself.
Suddenly, an idea came into Jesse's head. He would go to her, tell her just how much he loved her. It was the perfect plan! With a smile on his face, Jesse ran to Bakugan Interspace, but stopped when he crossed a restaurant window. Looking inside, he saw Rosemary and Ren, having dinner and a conversation.
"And so, then what?" Rosemary asked, taking a bite of her food.
"Well, then Zenet came running down the hallway, screaming 'The control room's on fire! The control rooms on fire!' Mason and I came running down the hallway, and it turns out, it was a prank! Zenet had fooled us!" said Ren. He and Rosemary started laughing.
Outside, Jesse's eyes widened. Rosemary was enjoying a date with Ren? His heart shattered into a million pieces. He glared at them both and walked away.
"Ren will pay for stealing my girl away from me!" he thought to himself.
It's a rough draft, but after awhile, I'm finally starting to get an idea how I can write it! Hopefully it should be up soon! :)