Chapter 2 is now being remade. You can tell because you probably won't see this until after I finish remaking the damn thing.

But hey, anything to make L.I.T.S actually a good story. Personally, this story had many aspects that could of been worked on so I'm putting Chaos Squad on hold to rewrite this. Sorta. I'll still be updating these chapters again, but I should have one or two new chapters out.

I hope you all enjoyed the first remake, I'll do my best to make this. It sucks though because I gotta go between this and the original chapter which makes the process of writing this even longer. :(

References are in the parenthesis things


Athena's POV

"Get away from me you jerk!" I shouted as the Shiny Jolteon got closer, trying to flirt with me. "I'm no princess even if anybody tells me I am!"

"You should know why everybody calls you princess, babe." The Jolteon smirked, "You're drop dead sexy."

"Don't fucking call me that." I snapped. "Once I meet the right Pokémon, they'll treat me better than any of the assholes I already know. Thinking about it, isn't Pluvia your mate already?"

"Only for how the girl looks. She knows that and is completely fine with it. But you? You're one of a kind darling." He purred.

I lost my shit and used Psychic to fling the shiny into the school wall, "I would never be your damn mate, even if we were the last damn Eeveelutions left in the world!" I shouted.

I stormed away from Radi just like all the other times he'd flirt with me. I jogged to where my friends Natascha, a Jolteon(Eeveelution), Cream, an Eevee(Light's Adventures), and Amy, a Glaceon(Liberation, Love, Loss). "Hey girlfriend!" Amy shouted when she saw come out from behind the wall.

"Hey!" I yelled back, switching to a jog to get to them quicker.

"Sooo..." Natascha began, smirking, "How was your time with that dreamy 'ol Jolteon, Radi?"

I looked the girl dead in the eyes and replied flatly "He's not my type, he's a fucking douchebag, and he only wants me for my body. I don't want a mate like that."

Cream tilted her head and asked "Still not working out? Anyways, do you know that black tree in the forest?" I nodded so she continued and said "Go there. That demonic ass Umbreon seems to hang out there so Radi, Pluvia, and Flare are going to go kick his ass." The Eevee seemed to be more cheery at the end of her statement since her tail was wagging wildly.

Concern was rushing throughout my head but I didn't want to show any of it so I gave the girl a small smile and said "Alright, I'll be there."

()()()()()()

"Where's that Umbreon?" I asked myself as I sprinted through the woods. I came to a dead stop when I noticed a black body attached to the charred tree, a sharped branch going through it's back and out it's stomach. I gasped, wondering why the hell Radi's group would almost kill the poor boy.

I ran up to him and started checking his body. I could only spot the wounds of being impaled, his blood trickling down his fur. Wanting to make sure he was conscious or even alive, I yelled "Oh my Arceus, are you alright?" I was slightly disappointed in myself considering he isn't alright if he impaled and probably half dead by now.

"Damn... This'll be harder than I thought." I mumbled. "I can't heal him with the branch still going through him. He'll also feel the pain of his body tissue, organs, muscle, and skin stretching to reconnect." I looked around to see if there was anything around to help me, but I couldn't find a thing.

Attempting to get his, I asked "Hello? Can you hear me?" Once again, I got no response, only tears coming from his closed eyes. I began to worry more because I couldn't see his chest rising. I groaned and grabbed one of his legs and yanked his unmoving form from the branch, blood freeing itself just to land back on him or on the ground around us. Noticing his breathing begin again, I pleaded "Don't move please." He obeyed what I said, so I got close to his ear and whispered "I can heal you, but you're going to have to stay absolutely still." He opened his eyes slightly, revealing a pair of gorgeous, shining ruby orbs. I gasped as my life flashed before my eyes, I saw me away from Radi, away from everyone I want to leave, with the mysterious Umbreon. I shook my head, ending the scene I witnessed, to go back to my healing process. My eyes, gem, and fur glowed a bright pink. Morning Sun wouldn't heal him completely because it was almost the evening, but it did the job. Once I finished, I looked at him to see he was staring at me in awe. "Can you speak? Do you have a name?" I asked, desperate to know all I could think of. "I've healed you to the best of my abilities. It was difficult to say the least since you had been impaled."

The Umbrekn sat up and looked me down before staring at me in the eyes and asked "Why are you doing this for me? I'm an Umbreon. I'm a Dark type." He asked, spitting the word dark as if it were venomous.

"Friends of mine sent me here to watch you get beat up. Worried for your health, I did it and lied in waiting to help you if needed since Radi and his group are dick heads. That and I don't hate Dark types. They're Pokemon like the rest of us and have a terrible reputation because others would attack them and in defense, the dark types would kill them." I replied, keeping a genuinely sweet smile on my face.

"That doesn't answer my question though. Why did you save me?" He asked, attempting to be a little more stern with me but just couldn't pull it off. "Everybody hates my bloody guts and want me to die. This could of been the moment I would give everybody their gift and let their dream come true." I could see and hear his anger begin to build up before he started to shout "Every damn time I fucking asked someone prior to this incident, they'd never respond or give me some bullshit fucking answer that wasn't even related to the damn question."

"Calm down please, I have a question for you to answer now." I replied, trying to keep calm with the impatient Pokemon. He rolled his eyes so I asked him "Do you want to be friends?"

The Umbreon rose an eyebrow and looked me in the eyes, glaring into my soul to know if I had been being truthful during the question. "You, of all people want to be my friend?" He asked me, tears beginning to form in his eyes. "I haven't had anyone to actually consider a friend a years because of my evolution..." He blinked the tears away and nodded, confirming that he had wanted to become my friend.

"Time for introductions!" I cheered, "I'm Athena!"

The Umbreon chuckled and replied "Saix."

"Saix" I thought, "Suits this cutie perfectly. Has a nice ring to it and its origin is perfect to describe him."

"Well, it was nice to meet you Saix though this isn't the way I'd of preferred for us to meet. I'll see you tomorrow but we'll have to stay separated until later in the day so nobody knows about this since they'll probably bully you more and begin harassing me again." I said before slowly walking towards the boy. I could see fear in his eyes from my actions causing me to mentally chuckle. I stopped just a few inches from the Eeveelution and leaned my head forward, connecting my lips on his cheek. I pulled away a second or two after planting the kiss on him and let out a small chuckle at his rosy cheeks being visible through his dark fur. I turned away and ran from his field of view through the shrubbery, back towards my house.


Second chapter to be remade and is out now! It was actually a lot easier considering I could copy and paste parts of chapter 1's remake.

Meaning next chapter's remake won't be out as soon as this one's. I'll be updating Chaos Squas next most likely if you're fine with it since I think only people who just found this story are reading this xD