Okay, third chapter is here, ready to be remade. I just recently updated Chaos Squad, adding a third chapter at the time of me writing this for those wondering. I'm planning on finishing this either today (Wednesday) or tomorrow (Thursday) but hell. You guys won't know until this gets posted so let's get into the remake.

By the way, I'm rewriting this story up to chapter 11 I think it is.

Saix's POV

~Flashback~

I had been alone for multiple hours, training my ass off near the mossy stone. I had recently learned the move Bite thanks to my hard training and had already mastered it along with my other moves, but I decided to have some fun with it. I'd find a new object to toss into the air, and I'd catch them and try to snap them in half with my new attack. I quickly got bored of the little mini game I was playing with myself so before heading hide, I found an old willow tree on the brim of life. I used Bite on the tree's base, locking my jaw and teeth in position. When I moved back away from the old tree, I noticed to severely flawed and could easily be destroyed from there. I chuckled to myself at the strength I contained for a little Shiny Eevee and shot out quick Sand Attack, knocking the top half off balance before falling to the ground below. As soon as the tree came to a rest on the ground, my body had been engulfed by some extremely bright light. "After so long!" I cheered, "I finally get to evolve into a Leafeon like I had always wanted to!" I sealed my eyes shut, waiting for the evolution process go finish. It took about 30 seconds which felt like forever to me. My eyes slowly fluttered open as I looked down, shocked to see a pair a pair of ebony legs with blue rings on them. My thoughts raced through my head, many different feeling following close with them. The one most easily noticable was confusion. "I thought Leafeon's look like mom?" I asked myself, trying to come up with some sort of explanation for my new looks. I stumbled over to a nearby pond to see a reflection of my face, hoping I just had different coloured fur and neon pulsing through the rings. The pond showed me just enough to cause me to wonder what went wrong, m my head covered in black fur, my forehead and ears had the same flourescent blue rings, but the one difference that had ticked me off were the eyes. They were a bloody colour, red with death in them. Frightened of what everyone was going to think of me, I hid out that night. Somewhere nobody would look.

~End of Flashback~

I was sitting in my room, planning my final escape from this hell hole and how I became the unloved piece of shit I am. After the kiss I recieved from Athena, the two of us got closer. We started spending time together in front of others, our friendship didn't need to be hidden anymore. The girl tried introducing me to her friends but they treated me the same, like shit. We almost actually got into a fight once if it weren't for Athena stepping in, preventing it. Radi didn't play too big of a role trying to split me and Athena up. He'd mainly just take the girl away from me anytime he saw us together, so we did our best to just avoid the Shiny Jolteon. Physical violence between me and Radi almost happened a few times, but Athena would go with him just so I wouldn't be jumped again later in the day.

Thoughts of life as a Leafeon fogged my mind. I paid little attention to the area surrounding me, we could of been robbed and I would of never noticed with how spaced out I was. Coming to think of it, me and Athena could of been actual mates if I was a Leafeon instead of the demon body of an Umbreon. The only downside would of been that we may of just never met if I didn't evolve into something I hated. I had feelings for the Espeon, I just don't know how to explain them. It's like a tingly feeling whenever she around that causes me to smile nonstop, to enjoy life, bliss, and serenity with another Pokémon. I violently shook my head, clearing all the thoughts of a perfect life to make room for a plan.

"It's time to get out of this dump now. It's not like anybody will miss me besides my mother and Athena, but it's for the greater good of me and the town that I go." I mumbled, doing my best to sit up tall.

I knew I contained the strength for my soon to start journey so all I had to do to finish my set up was grab the Poké I had saved up, about 5000P. You know, just in case I need to stay at a town with motel or something. Only reason we have buildings in these areas are thanks to the Pokémon that aren't on all fours. I stored the cash in a small bag that was slung over my neck and turned to take my leave forever.

Only ten minutes into the walk North from town, I spotted a pink figure tens of yards away from me through the trees and bushes. "Fuck man." I mumbled, "I shouldn't be missing the girl too much. If she's the only thing on my mind, how the hell am I going to get through with this shit?"

Still curious about what the figure I saw was, I stalked slowly through the shrubbery and forest until I could see it clearly. "I can't deal with this anymore!" The Espeon shouted, "Radi needs to learn that I will never be with him! This town is dead to me because I'm treated to perfect... I want to be normal, a regular girl. Not a popular one who all the jerks hit on. Besides, Saix is the only real sweetheart this town has to offer... Hopefully he'll be alright here and doesn't almost die again... I just wouldn't be able to live if me leaving and not being able to help him would be his final moments..."

I mentally sighed before creeping through the bush I was behind and asked with as much innocence as possible "Athena, what are you doing here at this time of night?"

Her back still to me groaned and mumbled "His voice is just too sweet. It's stuck in my head and I can't do a thing about it... I'll always have the memory of it loca-a-Ah-Ah!" She screamed after turning around, revealing my prescense. The girl who was absolutely terrified had back into a tree before beginning to whimper. She slowly opened her gorgeous violet eyes when noting I hadn't attacked. When she could see me, she rubbed her eyes before looking at me harder. "Saix? Is that you?"

I nodded and asked "So, what are you doing at this time of night?"

"I could ask the same thing about you Saix... But if you must know, I'm running away. I don't want to be a perfect being to this town, appraised, a trophy mate in the making. So I have to leave... So why are you out?" She replied, her voice getting queiter with each words.

"Same thing as you." I responded, my ears dropping. "I can't be seen as a demon anymore, as someone out for blood. So I'm leaving this Arceus forsaken place."

We both stood there awkwardly, our eyes keeping contact as the seconds ticked by. "We could go together if it helps."

I snapped out of the trance I was in before saying "I'm looking for a place to train, live and maybe even find a mate which won't happen most likely since I'm a, Y'know, and Umbreon."

"Don't talk like that about yourself! You are an amazing Pokémon and your typing has no affect on who you are. You're the way you are because of all the abuse you received, not because of the stereotypical dark type hatred!" She hissed.

"Sorry, but it's true. I've been this way for eight years of my life thanks to my evolution. Plus, you're the first and only friend I've had in that time period. I'm fucking 18 now, and you're my only friend. I'd do anything to keep you by my side even if you're 17 and technically can't leave for another year... So I will accept it. To be a guardian."

Athena rolled her eyes so I yelled "Race you to the next town!" I took off, running as fast as my legs could move, the more agile Espeon close behind, closing up the gap between us.

When she passed me, I heard her holler back at me "You're five levels higher than me, I'd expect more of a challenge! Now come on, hurry up slowpoke!"

"I'm an Umbreon, I'm defensive, not made for speed like you Espeons!" I called back.

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Me and Athena strolled down the dirt path, side by side when I said "We should go to sleep. Judging by the moon, we've been out for about an hour since our meet up. So it's around 1 in the morning. I'll go get supplies for a fire, you can look for somewhere for us to stay the night at." The girl agreed wand ran off towards a hill looking area. I quickly found multiple small sticks that could easily burn and start a fire so I ran back to the path to see Athena waiting.

"Follow me, I found an abandoned den so you won't have to search for rocks because it had a small, empty fire pit and a two really soft beds made of grass and leaves." I nodded due to the sticks being in my mouth and followed her to the den, dropping the sticks in the small pit. Using a small stone I found nearby and one of the sticks, I kept rubbing the two objects together, creating friction, smoke, and heat. At last five minutes later, a spark popped out and flew into the pit, setting the sticks ablaze.

"Well we have fire. Time to hit the hay." I stated before plopping down on one of the beds. Athena soon joined me and lied on the other bed before connecting her eyes with mine.

"What is this feeling that I have deep inside whenever I'm with Athena? She's just absolutely stunning, no wonder all the guys back in our village treated her like a princess." I snapped back into reality when I felt something rubbing against my neck. Athena came back into my sight a sweet smile on her face as she slowly laid back down on her bedding. She began to giggle slightly when she saw my tomato red cheeks. Pushing the thoughts and questions I had away, I began to drift into the dream world.

...…

My eyes cracked slightly, revealing a field filled with flowers. To much of my surprise, I was sitting up and something was beneath me, part of it connecting with my chest. I looked down to see Athena, her stomach slightly bulging. "Umm... Athena? Wake up please..." I stammered.

The girl began to stir before standing up, still under below me because of our size differences. "Yes? Do you need something honey?"

"Honey? We aren't mates, why would she call me by nicknames like that?" I thought before asking "Why is your stomach bulging?"

"Do you not remember? I'm pregnant with our soon to be born kits!" She cheered with joy.

"We mated? The two of us have only known each other a week, we couldn't already be mates. Besides, she's too good for me. I don't deserve someone like her..."

"Just think of it Saix." Athena said, cuddling up against to me, "they'll be little us running around. They'll be absolutey adorable, especially since you'll be their father."

A smiley creeped onto my face, I truly felt happy. Besides, being this beautiful and cheery Espeon's mate couldn't be too bad. I lowered my head to her height and rubbed her cheek with mine, causing her to purr. Everything soon blacked out and I felt someone pushing at my side. My eyes fluttered open to reveal Athena standing above me, smirking. "So... What were you dreaming about because before I woke you up, you had the cutest little smile on your face and your cheeky were a fiery red." I began to gawk, unable to speak or move. The girl chuckled and said "You're fine, it's probably something really embarrassing or secretive so I won't force you. Now we should start heading out, I'll lead the way again and I won't run so we can stick together."

Chapter 3 remade! Definitely a lot better than the original. Once all the chapters I need to fix are done, I'll be posting chapter 21 for this story then deleting it so the website says the story has been updated.

I hope you all enjoyed and stay tuned for the next chapter to be remade. It'll be done before the end of the weekend and I'll be updating Chaos Squad again.

(Updated 10/27/2016)