Ok, here's another chapter remade. Just like the other three, it's been mainly written on the back of a bus since that's the best time for writing in my opnion. Can focus on this instead of school or video games xP
Just wondering, did all you other xBox One people get both the Borderlands games for free a few days ago? Me and a few friends did but I don't know if anyone else got them. Just learned it was free play days. Oopsy
Happy Halloween to all those reading the day of Halloween even though this'll be up before it.
Fuck the rest of the shit I want to say, I'll put them in Chaos Squad's chapter 14 Author's Note. So without further interruptions, let's dive into the remade chapter!
Saix's POV
"Why did I of all people have a dream like that? Does it have something to do with my unanswered question about the feeling I have when together with Athena? Could the two be connected somehow?" I thought, my thoughts becoming more complex than the meaning of life. "It could of been a signal sent from the feeling, saying I wanted to spend the rest of my life with this gorgeous Esepon." A goofy smile began to coat my face as pictures of the two of us together floated through my head when a felt a tiny jabbing in my ribs. I looks over to see a worried Espeon, so I asked "Is everything right? You seem extremely worried."
"Everything's fine now that I've got your attention after five minutes. Anyways, I was wondering if we could live together after finding a place to settle down. Company never hurts and besides, we're on a journey together anyways."
"Yeah. That's what I had been thinking about, kinda. Besides, you're the only Pokémon to ever actually treat me like I meant something. Like I have a purpose and I'd like to thank you for that." I mumbled.
The girl smiles and strided closer to me while saying "I could say the same for you. Even with yours years of loneliness and unwanted hate, you've still managed to treat me how most of girls could only dream of. Besides, you've changed my life for me. You showed me then other side of life I hadn't known of."
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The two of us bad been walking for multiple minutes when a large force collided with me, sending me straight into the ground and pinned me down while growling "How dare a fucking demon like you take my daughter away from the village! She's nowhere near safe with when somebody like you!" Despite being all shaken up, I could see an orange Pokemon above me that contained lots of fur, a Flareon. I could feel the fiery Pokémon's claws pushing into my neck slightly, ready to tear through the flesh and muscle resulting in the kill.
I gave the odd Pokemon a small smile and asked "Is there a problem sir with me and my friend trying to find somewhere to live? Besides. Death wouldn't hurt me." My eyes fluttered closed, accepting for lack of air and death to consume me. However, it never came. Reopening my eyes, I saw the Flareon a few feet away with Athena in between the two of us, ready to fight to the death.
Athena's POV
My eyes were backed up with tears filled of terror and fear of losing Saix to my father of all people. "That child's a fucking demon!" He shouted, "If it weren't for fucking dark types, our world would be free and less chaotic! They're the reason of all the fucking causes in all this shit! And you're trying to fucking protect one that's kidnapped you?"
"Don't you fucking yell at her!" I heard Saix call from behind me. He could be heard standing up and walking over to the two of us, absolutely pissed. "I don't give a fuck of how you're treating me like complete shit. What matters is how you're treating you only fucking daughter for making a decision that she knew would change her life. She's almost old enough to move away anyways so while I'm still a year older, I'm acting as her guardian so she's eligible to leave!" Saix shouted back.
I sniffled before mumbling "Saix, still here please. I want to speak to my dad alone if that's alright." The Umbreon glared at my father one last time before walking away, out of earshot so I went to my dad and asked "What are you doing daddy? How did you find out that I left and where I went?"
"Ace told me. He said he felt your psychic abilities weakening from his due to distance. Using the information he had from your bonds, he was able to give me your location. Now tell me, why the hell are you with that boy? He's a mistake, never suppose to be anothing besides a... A... Nevermind. You don't need to know what his purpose was to the town." The Flareon grumbled.
I stared long and hard into his eyes, looking for any type of emotion he was attempting to hide from me. A sparkle presented itself after thirty tense seconds, coming from one of his tear ducts, showing me... Sadness. I gasped before saying "He isn't how you'd expect. He's a sweet and caring Pokémkn that's gone through multiple acts of discrimination because of his typing. Yet through that, he's managed to act like a friend to me, a guardian, and maybe sometime in the future, a lover... So please dad, let me go with him. You'll know I'll always be happy and well protected."
My father began configuring my answer before letting out a defeated sigh. "Fine, you can go with him but keel this in mind. I have eyes in the sky, ready to help me with you or that kid anytime I need it." And with that, he turned away, walking back towards our old Eeveelution village.
"Tell Ace and the others I said Hi! Also please put those roses in my room on mum's grave for me since I forgot to before leaving!" I yelled to him, hoping he heard.
Saix's POV
Thoughts of my dream stormed through my head, searching through every word I had knew before coming to a conclusion of a single, four lettered word. Love, what I've been feeling for the past week of knowing her has been love. I must ask her to be my mate but I don't know what should use to propose the idea to her or when... "I'm back Saix! I managed to convince my father to let me go with you." Athena cheered while walking to me. I turned to the girl who further explained "I explained to him how amazing of a guy you were and how you've endured the shit you've been through to still be able to treat me the way you do." The girl gave me a kiss on the cheek, making my face a bright red once again.
"Urm... Athena, when we find somewhere to live, I'd just like to let you know that I have a question. It's just now isn't a good time to ask and it suits the terrain better once we have a den or something." I mumbled.
"Fine by me. Besides, I have to ask you something too so we can ask the two questions at the same time she we find a place to settle down at."
There's gotta be a chance for me. She did convince her own father that I could be trust and that she could stay with me so it's not a complete zero... I stood up and motioned for her to join me instead of following from behind. The girl joyfully ran up to me and got close enough for our fur to begin touching.
As we kept walking, she'd get closer and closer to me. We had only stopped twice today to eat but other than that, kept together, Athena's tail eventually wrapping around mine. I had been blushing extremely hard considering Athena began to laugh after noticing my pink cheeks. It was impossible for me to be even slightly upset with her, even if it's her fault I had began blushing in the first place. I soon began to join in on her contagious laughter, I just didn't know what I was laughing at. But I do know one thing.
I'm insanely in love with this girl.
0There. Another chapter done and now I get to go back to Chaos Squad for updates since I have unused ideas for.
Besides, I update those twice for every single update for Chaos Squad. I'll definitely be putting chapter 21 in this story then deleting it so it seems like this story got an update when really it's fixed chapters.
(Updated 10/30/2016)
