Here's to the fifth chapter being remade! In making this earlier than I expected since I'm awaiting the winner of the first lemon in my lemon story to reply of if they want the pairing to be written in Third Person of first person.
For anybody reading this that'd like to read lemons and even request they're own, please go to my lemon story and put your pairing in the reviews after reading the rules and notices I inserted into chapter one.
For those of you that read this before the update, you'll remember how short this chapter was. I'll probably have it go over 1,000 words this time around since I like to add new things when fixing the old.
Athena's POV
I awoke, still under the tree where Saix and I stayed last night to take cover from the rain. Letting out a quick sigh, I mumbled "I guess the two of us dozed off. Oh well, we're dry and well rested so there's nothing to worry or stress about." My eyes darted around my surroundings before finally resting on Saix. The boy was sound a sleep, carefree from everything this world had to offer. It's been almost two and a half weeks since the two of us stared traveling together, bonding and becoming even closer than we had ever imagined. I shook my head, clearing the thoughts of me and Saix possibly being together and thought before running off, "Might as well make myself useful. Should grab breakfast for us."
It didn't take too long to actually find bushes containing berries. I stared at the tens of choices for what to pick and eat before settling on two Oran Berries for Saix and a single Pecha Berry for me. I rolled the three berries back towards Saix, which was slightly hard due to the hill's incline, but oh well. It took around five or ten minutes to finally rolls all three berries back to the tree but I arrived just in time to see Saix begin to stir and awaken from his slumber. "Good morning Saix!" I said in my normal, cheery voice. "I got us breakfast before you woke up so feel free to dig into those Oran Berries."
"Uhm... Sanks..." Saix yawned, slurring slightly. He grogilly looked at the Oran Berries I rolled in towards him before crawling towards the fruit and taking small bites out of one.
I quickly finished my berry and turned to Saix who had just started eating his second Oran Berry. "So..." I began, not knowing what to talk about. "Do you. Ummm... Have any dreams you're willing to talk about from last night."
The Umbreon looked at me with a puzzled face before devouring the rest of his Oran Berry. "Not really unless you want to here stories about my life before becoming an Umbreon."
"As long as you aren't in any mental pain while telling me, sure. It'd be nice to get to know more about your since you know my entire life and I have not a clue about your life."
"While growing up, my go-" He began before a death scream echoed throughout the forest. The Umbreon's eyes widened as his ears twitched. Saix quickly jumped to his began running through the shrubbery and trees, trying to find where the scream originated from.
Saix's POV
As I began telling Athena about my life before evolution, a death scream echoed throughout the woods, causing my ears to ring, no pun intended. My instincts kicked in as I jolted up and sprinted through the forest, looking for whoever screamed. Athena followed close behind me as I dodged and weaved the many obstacles blocking my path until we reached a small clearing, in the middle being a Shiny Shinx surrounded by a pack of about eight Houndour, judging from my quick glance. I darted towards the single Houndour whose back was completely facing me with a Quick Attack, sending him flying towards another Houndour in his pack. The two crashed against a nearby tree getting the attention from all the others.
From the corner of my eye, I could see Athena helping the Shinx out while all the attention was on me. I shot a Shadow Ball towards the single Houndoir that had noticed the Shinx was missing. As the sphere collided with the canine, snapping it's jaw and knocking it out on contact. The others didn't bat an eye towards their downed comrade and released their hackles, revealing their razor sharp teeth. I growled and released a Dark Pulse, knocking back three of the five, leaving me vulnerable to the other two.
Both charged my way, one ended up raking it's claws through my side's flesh. The other jumped onto my back and began to dig it's teeth through my skin and muscle. I yelped in pain and dashed away, shredding my flesh and matting my fur with more of my blood when I used a move I didn't even knew I had, double kick. I bolted towards the two Houndour that had injured me and used Double Kick, doing double the damage and and knocking a few of their blood teeth out.
As I dealt with the two in front of me, the remaining three pounced me me, two connecting with a leg each, spazzing out to shred more of my legs. The two I had my focus on took this opportunity to go for my other two legs and repeated what their friends had began. I was paralyzed from all the pain I had started going through when I saw the final standing Houndour charging towards me, his mouth aimed for my throat.
Luckily for me, I crashed down onto the ground, avoiding the killing blow. With my neck out of reach, the final Houndour started to destroy my back, blood, tissue, and fur flying from my body.
Athena and the Shinx slightly came into my view so I shouted with my remaining strength "Run Athena! Let me go and just run! I'll see you in the afterlife!"
One of four chapters I got to write. Two chapters for this story, the Chapter 15 Lemon in Chaos Squad, and the first lemon in my lemons only story. Once I feel it's time, Disappearing Chances, my most votes story in the Polls shall begin
I hope you all enjoyed and goodnight!
(Updated 11/5/2016)