I've noticed my story is pointing more towards that than to my own, so that's why I added the ?'s POV in
This story will end between chapters 15 and 20 if it goes to plan
The having two people talking in one paragraph, it's kinda just me as a reader being able to understand and me knowing who's talking being the writer
I'll try the one in this chapter and if you like it better, I'll fix all the other chapters
Second time I'm writing the damn chapter. FF logged me out when I went to save it for the final time so I lost everything since I didn't save constantly like normal for some damn reason.
I promised to make this long but for some reason if it goes over 1,500 and I try to save, I just log out so it'll be short until next chapter hopefully
If I'm not updating, I'll normally post the reason in the reviews
Disclaimer - I don't own Pokemon
I awoke to see both Athena and Burza still sleeping. They must be damn tired to still be asleep. Might as well get an early breakfast. I jumped off the bed and went to our bag before opening it and grabbing and Oran berry. "Time to chow down." I whispered to myself to not wake the others. I quickly finished my berry and looked to see both Burza and Athena starting to stir.
"Morning sleepyheads. What berries do you guy want?" I asked.
"I'll have a pecha." Burza replied with a yawn.
"Sitrus please." Athena said while shaking her head to get her ear to perk up instead of drooping down. Argh... Why must everything you do Athena be so arceus damn adorable? I thought to myself.
I tossed them their respective berries before asking "What do you guys want to do today? This place has a theme park, restaurants with food eating competitions, a dance club, and an arcade," my excitement showing in just my voice alone.
"Saix, c'mere and just rest. It's only 7 AM. Nothing will be open most likely." Athena responded giving up on fixing her ear.
"You guys are no fun sometimes." I muttered before jumping on the bed and laying down next to Athena, my head resting on her back as if it were a pillow. I quickly fell back asleep and instantly saw Lux.
"Lux? What are you doing in my dream?" I questioned.
"No time to explain, but I need to ask and tell you something." he replied quickly. "First of all, how do you remember me? Being part of you, I thought you wouldn't?
"I have no clue myself but whats the thing you need to tell me?" I sighed.
"Wake up soon. Five pokemon the go by the names of R, P, F, S, and J. I'm not one hundred percent sure, but they could be the beginning letters of their names due to the randomness of the letters." he warned. "One last thing before I go, keep Athena safe. They're coming for her too." And with that, he was gone and I was back in my normal dream.
R's POV
"Ok guys. Plans is to get that freak of nature and his little date. Return them to S and J, alright?" I told F and R.
"Got it" P whispered
"Roger." F said nodding.
"Alright. Plan SBT is a go go." We head out soon and should reach the hotel they're staying at by 9 PM. By then, they should be near the time they go to sleep at. Eat up, and we leave.
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We left our base that S and J had made for us. It's at least 11 hours away so it will be a trip to get to them but luckily, S and J packed us up with berries, a map, and some full heals just in case anything had happened during our mission.
"Alright guys. We gotta follow the same route as them but stay off to the side. Once we are at the motel, we sneak in from a window and into get into their room. I was warned to watch out for a friend they've encountered. He's a Shinx with a really rare condition that's aloud him to gain a psychic typing. S told P and I to get Athena and Saix. F, you get the Shinx if it wakes up. It'll be a big threat if you don't." I told F
"Got it." He replied.
Sorry for the really really short chapter. It's the best I could do with the saving not working