Sorry for the long wait, I had a huge writers block!

Important Author Note at the end, please read!

Nita POV

I need to get my revenge on Tris.

I hate tris she I always trying to out shine me but that bitch doesn't know what she's in for.

I know she loves Tobias but she won't admit because she so scared that he will leave her one day which I won't blame him she's a stupid brat who would want to stay with her.

At first I was going to date Tobias but than I thought why not 'marry' Marcus and get some cash at the same time I get my revenge.

Life is just amazing to me. I'm going to start my plan today and finish it this week. I know it's quick but I want to show tris how quick her life can change just like how my life changed fast.

I still can't believe dad chose Natalie over me.

"Sweet heart meet your younger sister tris " I see a baby.

"But she not my sister. Where's my mommy!?" I scream and ready to cry.

"I'm right here" Natalie comes in.

"No my real mom!" I scream and start crying.

"This is your real mom Princess and this is your sister your going to accept it!" Dad scold me and he never a yells at me. I run up stairs. I hate this new family , I want my real mom. I can't believe he chose that baby over me.

I was only 6 years old when he yelled at me. I never will forget that day. He was always proud of Tris, never me. I would always try my best but they never cared how hard I tried but they only cared for Tris.

Once I turned 15 I found out my dad had cheated on my real mom with that bitch face Nataile. When he found out she was pregeant with Tris, he was going to leave mom for Nataile and still don't know why he brought me along when he was perfectly fine with Tris.

And she stole my boyfriend. I found them sleeping together. Like what kind of sister steals your boyfriend and sleeps with them?

The worst part is that dad and mom took her side saying it wasn't her fault, no one told me why though but I can tell it was tris plan to make herself look innocent.

I hate Tris. The more I think of Tris the more I want to get my revenge faster and I will.

Tris POV

''Oh fuck. Just like that baby." Eric moans.

Eric and I are at a hotel fucking each other. I only called him because I needed someone to distract me from thinking about Tobias. I don't know why I keep thinking about him. And I don't know why my heart shattered when I heard Tobias told me to stop playing with his feelings, and when he said he is always the one getting hurt. I never wanted him to feel that way.

"Bitch, why did you stop?" I didnt even notice I did. Clearly this is a bad idea because fucking Eric, just makes me think about Tobias more. I start to get up but I get throwned to the ground.

"Where do you think your going?"

"I'm leaving" I start to get up but Eric grabs me

"No, you're not" I bring my knee up and kick him where the sun doesnt shine.

"Fu..ck..bit..ch" He grunts I chuckle. I hate Eric he isnt even a good fuck. I swing my arm to his arm knocking him unconscience. I mentally highfive myself, proud of myself. Finally I got the opportunity to knock him unconscience. He's so annoying, stupid and clingy. He can't fuck like Tobias does, Tobias fucks me sweetly almost like were making love. Wait what? Shut up stupid brain.

I storm out of the room fustered with myself. Why can't I stop thinking about him. I quickly hope out of my car and start driving home. I don't know what this means, why I feel this way towards him, I know forsure it's not love. Tris Prior doesn't do love.

It's not love, I just feel a attraction for him, nothing else.

Really Tris? You sound like your trying to convience yourself I hear my conscience talking again.

I would know if I was in love so I am not in love because I know. Your in love when you think about the person all the time, you care from them when their hurt, just seeing their face makes your day, you would do anything for them, and put their needs before yours.

So therefore I don't love the dreamy blue eyed student Tobias Eaton.

-Monday-

Tobias POV

I feel someone roughly shaking me. I open my eyes slowy and see Marcus looking pissed, this can't be good. I gulp.

"What the fuck is wrong with you?!" He pulls me up and throws me to the ground.

"What did I do?" I ask curiously.

"Your asking me what you did faggot?! You fucking pay girls to have sex with you. Then you buy drugs!" I hear Marcus grab his belt. I never did any of this. I know if I tell him I didn't he won't believe me. No one ever listens to what I have to say. I feel tears threatening to spill, I don't even bother to try to stop them.

I try to be strong but I can't anymore I'm done trying to be strong when I'm really nothing but a weak phoney.

I feel the belt hit the sad of my face.

"Do you have anything to say for yourself?! "

"I didn't do it" Crack

"I tracked your ducking cards and went through your phone. Don't you dare lie! You're no son of mine your a fucking unwanted bastard. " another whip to my stomach.

"Stop crying you faggot!" I didn't notice any tears spilling. He whips me on the back and punches me in the eye.

He continues to hit me with his belt until I feel like I'm losing conscience but brain tells me to:

You can't quit yet tobias. I know it has to rough life for you but look how far you have gotten. You're already in pain, you have already have been hurt but you will get a reward at the end. Be strong Tobias

So the next chapter will have a few time skips.

Also I'm not sure how long I want this book to go on for but do you want a sequel?

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