Thankx to anyone who reviewed! Especially Dren_Fan6.023 she reviewed all the chapters! She even gave me the idea for how to write thankx in an unique way. Oh yeah we did our band concert today that was rescheduled for today (12/22/08). Review review review! You must review! Sorry. I'm not exactly begging. I just want to see what you think of my story. Oh and my last chapter was 4 ½ pages on Microsoft word. I didn't have a clue it was going to be that long. That's a record for me.
Chapter VII: More magic.
"We're winning! We're winning! They're losing! They're losing!" Adriane said the words repeatedly.
Dreamer sighed. "Adriane! Please stop."
"Oh all right." Adriane folded her arms and pretended to be mad at Dreamer. "But we're still wining and they're still losing."
"Okay." Zach said. "We're one and a half days ahead of Emily and Marlin. And I have no idea of where Kara and Lorren are."
"Maybe she gave up." Suggested Adriane. She would be extra happy if she didn't have to compete with Kara. She turned around. "Ooooo! I think I see Emily!"
"You do?" Zach turned around and saw a tiny dot in the distance. "That could be anything you know."
"I know." Adriane smiled mischievously. "Which is why it could be Emily."
Zach rolled his eyes. "We should turn around and start to go extra fast just in case."
Now it was Adriane's turn to roll her eyes. "Then do it, you silly."
"I think you have some kind of grammatical error with that sentence." Zach said innocently.
"Is it legal?" asked Dreamer.
"Of course!" Adriane said. "Why wouldn't they be? I mean they're just grammati-" she was cut off by Dreamer.
"I mean turning around to win the race when you see your enemy." He said.
"It's legal." Zach confirmed, closing a heavy book and 'minimizing' it.
"Are you sure?"
"Yes I'm perfectly sure." Zach stood up on Drake (And yes, when he was flying at 49 mph. I think that's the highway speed.), watching Aldenmor pass under him. "Right Drake?"
The dragon nodded violently, causing Adriane to fall off. If it had not been for Zach, she would have crashed; she was too shocked to remember to use her dragon wings, since they were still new to her.
He reached for her hand (aawww! That is sooo sweet. That can be included in friendship. in my opinion. I mean really, you hold hands with your friends.), then helped her get on Drake again.
"Thanks Zach." Adriane said. "You possibly saved my life. Again." She smiled at him.
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They were circling around, looking for a place to land. They finally found one.
"Good thing there's not a snowstorm now, or we would have been stuck up there forever." Adriane said, as she slid off Drake's back.
"I know." Zach said. "I hate flying over the frozen tundra when there's a snowstorm."
"I would have gotten airsick again." Dreamer said.
"I would have made a bad landing." Said Drake.
"How do we call the farimentals again?" Said Adriane.
"We're supposed to send a little bit of magic up in the sky and they'll come." Said Zach.
"Okay, how do we do that?" Adriane said.
"Just like they said, send a little bit of magic up in the sky."
"Uh-oh, um… Drake,? Dreamer? Zach has one of his terrifying plans again."
Ten minutes later…...
"Are you sure this is going to work?" Adriane was standing on top of Zach, who was standing on top of Drake, who was standing on the ground. They looked like they were in some kind of a circus.
"I'm ninety nine point nine percent sure." Zach replied.
"Okay, review the plan again."
"Drake stands on top of the ground…"
"Check."
"I stand on top of him…"
"Check."
"You stand on top of me…"
"Check."
"Dreamer keeps watch…"
"Check."….
Five minutes later
Adriane took a deep breath. Calm down, she told herself. Don't think about the fact that there is a point one chance that you will fall down. Concentrate on what you have to do.
"Can we review the plan one more time?" Drake said.
"Drake, we just reviewed it." Zach said.
"Come on you guys, let's put the plan in real life already!" Said Adriane. "I'm getting bored up here!"
"Sorry Adriane." Said Zach. "Okay everyone, let's get into our positions!"
When everyone had gotten into his or her positions, Adriane called out "Are you ready down there?"
"We're ready!" came the reply. Adriane stretched her dragon wings
Zach jumped, with Adriane standing literally on top of him. It was all part of the plan they had come up with. Adriane jumped off Zach, using her wings to fly high into the sky while Zach landed on the ground. Then she flew as high as she dared and threw an arc of gold and silver light above her. She made a perfect landing on the top of Drake's head.
"Now we wait." She said smiling.
They didn't have to wait for long. Soon they heard something on the ground. They looked down to see Marina, the beautiful water farimental on the snow. "You have played well and won the race." She said in her watery voice.
"We will give you the reward as we have promised." Said Ambia.
They spun round around and round in circles together so fast that Adriane couldn't tell the watermantal from the airmemtal. Finally, the two farimentals stopped. They each held out two sparks of magic, and gave one to each one of them.
"I got more magic!" said Adriane.
"Me too." Said Zach.
"Me three!" Said Dreamer.
"Me four!" Said Drake.
"Are you ready to go back to the fairy glen?" Asked Marina.
"Yes!" They said together. They stayed close to each other as they went throught the portal to the fairy glen.
What do you think of it? Please review to tell me and other people (though now I doubt that you will). It's not the end of the story yet! Oh and im thinking of writing a new story but my head is so full of stories that I am in desperate need of your help(not literally). You can vote for more than one story, so please send your vote in with your review. Here are the stories:
Alyssa, Miranda, Thalia, and Victoria travel to parts of the magic web where few have gone to when they want to see Avalon for themselves. And they meet the healer, warrior and blazing star in person along the way, who are now the guardians of magic. Fantasy/Adventure
Adriane visits this website and when she sees the stories she gets mad at some of the authors and gets her revenge on them without the other mages looking. (for this one you don't have to be an author to be part of the story, just give me your description and I will fit you in the story do it with your vote please) Parody/humor(probably)
When they find Avalon the mages are happy. However, Adriane has lost more than she can bear and so she decides to visit the dark sorceress and she tells her the true story of what had happened to the mages before them who tried to find Avalon. (its lot better than it looks anyway.) Fantasy/spiritual(maybe)
4. Adriane cannot stand Joey anymore. When he asks her out (or really just going to ask her out), she gets furious. Together, she and Zach plan how to stop him from doing it again. But exactly how far will Joey go to have Adriane as his girlfriend? Will he join the evil people who are trying to destroy the magic web? (Not planning to make this storyPG13 its probably PG in my opinion. Trust me, if you shared a computer with your sister and you don't want her to read your stories because they're not for her age group, you would not make this story pg13 or else your mom will kill you.) Fantasy/Adventure
Put the # of the story/stories you want me to write on . and thankz in advance if you reviewed .
