So yeah. This is my book about Rock. So please review. Criticism is welcome. Encouraged actually. It helps me fix things, write better etc...
Prolouge
Rock looked out upon the expanse of water in front of him. The milky white light on the horizon told him that the sun was about to rise. He breathed in the morning air. Could he be prepared for this? He was choosed many years ago. Suddenly, the water burst into flames, brighter than the stars.
He saw a group of cats battling under four giant oak trees, he saw a shooting star, and an orange tom. He saw mountains, lions, and a silver cat.
I'm not sure how I can take much more!
He almost staggered, but he steadied himself. This was his destiny. His fate. His path. This was his punishment to face alone. He thought it was over, but one last vision exploded into his head.
There were three cats. One had a golden pelt, like a majestic lion. The other had was a grey tabby. The last cat was different. She was smaller than the other two. She had grey fur.
Rock knew that he must pass down the prophecies to the cats to come. But why him? What had he done to deserve such a fate? Rock let out a weary sigh, suddenly exhauseted from the onset of the visions. He closed his eyes, not bothering to find a den, and slipped into darkness.