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Chapter 57

Dougie's POV

... suddenly the front door opened.

Two minutes earlier.

I was shaken awake roughly by big strong hands that were shaking badly. My vision was blurred for a moment, and again I needed a few seconds to remember where I was and what had happened. Then I remembered Rick breaking free, and calling my friends. Telling them to call the police, telling me that 'Everything is going to be alright now'.

Was I hallucinating, or could I hear the wailing sound of sirens, very faint in the distance, from above us.

I looked up in Rick's wide, bloodshot eyes. He looked at me, slightly panicked but excited.

'They are here, the police.' He whispered to me. 'Can you hear them?'

I nodded briefly, excitement building up inside of me, then immediately regretted that when my head started pounding viciously.

'They are here, Dougie. We did it.' He said relieved, but still in a hushed, and panicked voice. I had troubles to keep my vision straight while Rick was fighting with the tie-wraps around my wrists that kept me bound to the headboard of the wooden bed. I know I was supposed to be extremely excited and relieved, knowing that the police were here, and I was finally going to be saved from this hellhole. I did feel like that, but I also felt so much fear going through me, paralyzing my mind, and I felt like my head was filled with fog. My sight unfocused, and my hands shaking, I felt my whole body breaking out in sweat. Rick noticed my state as well, and he seized his unsuccessful attempts of breaking me free for a moment, to put his hand on my forehead and he examined me for a second.

'Dougie, are you okay?' He asked me worried. I swallowed.

'I'm... scared.' I answered softly, my voice unstable.

'Don't worry, it'll all be alright.'

Rick wanted to say something else, but was interrupted by hard footsteps coming up in the corridor behind the door that kept us trapped in this room. Rick shot forwards, and scanned the room for things that he could use to defend himself with, and I started to frantically pull at the tie-wraps, and felt the small wounds that had stopped bleeding re-opening again. Panic, wild frantic white-hot panic took over my whole body when the door opened and I saw Jared walking in the room, his face drained from all color. In his right hand he carried a gun, and he aimed it at Rick, who turned around and stood there helplessly, immediately when he saw him. Rick slowly raised his hands in the air, when Jared walked up to him, the gun still pointed at his chest.

'Jared, wait…' He tried, his voice wavering with doubt and fear.

'What have you done?' Jared suddenly screamed at him, his face going red, his eyes were wild with panic as well.

'How could you betray us? Do you know what you have done, you fucking ASSHOLE? We could have had 3 FUCKING MILLION DOLLARS! BUT YOU CALLED THE POLICE! INSTEAD OF BEING RICH WE ARE GOING TO JAIL AND ITS YOUR FAULT!'

Before Rick could do anything Jared hit him harshly in his face with his left fist, causing Rick to stumble, then he hit him again. Rick tried to swing his fist at Jared, but Jared stepped back and backhanded him viciously, with the tip of pistol. Rick immediately crashed to the floor at the impact of the blow, and stayed down a second to wipe the blood out of his face, his nose, his eyes. Then, stumbling, he got back on his feet again, and tried once more to reason with Jared.

'Wait, Jared, I understand you are upset, but…'

'DAMN RIGHT IM UPSET! I HATE YOU RICK!' Jared screamed and he aimed his gun at Rick again, then pulled the safety-cap.

'NO! Don't hurt him!' I cried out in a croaky voice, my stomach constricting when Jared smiled a mean grin.

'Say goodbye to your little friend.' I didn't understand who exactly he was talking to, but I didn't care. I cried out in pure panic, and struggled the hardest I possibly could when Jared's finger touched the trigger.

'Have fun in hell.' Jared mumbled.

'NOOOOO!' I screamed, my heart beating erratically in my chest, when Jared pulled his finger back in a fast movement, and the gun went off with an ear-shattering bang. The bullet hit Rick right in his stomach, and with a soft gasp escaping his lips he crashed to the floor in a bloody heap, then he didn't move anymore.

I kept screaming hysterically, tears overflowing my face.

Jared barged his way over to me, and I screamed even harder, fear and panic controlling my body completely.

'SHUT UP AND LAY STILL!' Jared bellowed at me and aimed the gun at me. If felt like all the breath was punched out of me immediately as a fear that was stronger than I had ever felt before overtook me, and my screaming died down to a frantic gasp. He had already killed Rick. Now he was going to kill me too. Everything had been for nothing. I was going to be killed after all.

But Jared didn't pull the trigger like he had done for Rick. Instead he took out a pocket knife and started to cut the tie-wraps. I was so shocked that I couldn't even move anymore, even when I was free. He pulled me to my feet roughly, and then took out another pair of tie-wraps, to tie my hands to each other behind my back. I felt like I was going to faint, and couldn't rip my eyes away from Rick, who was laying on the floor, the pool of blood around him growing bigger by the second. I wasn't sure if he was dead already, but a voice in my head told me he was dead. And it broke my heart, and tore it into a thousand pieces.

'Please…' I heard myself beg when Jared pushed me out the door, in front of him, holding my bound hands with his left hand, while he still had the gun in his right hand, way to close to my body.

He pushed me through the corridor, up the stairs, and stopped for a second in front of the door. Jeff and David came up from behind, their faces flushed with panic and shock.

'They are everywhere, they have us surrounded completely.' David choked out.

'What do we do now?' Jeff asked, and both he and David looked at Jared with hopeful expressions.

'You two go out via the back window. They probably won't expect it. I'll keep them distracted by going out the frontdoor with Dougie.' Jared commanded. Jeff and David stared at him.

'Are you crazy? It's a suicide mission to go out the front.' David said shocked.

'And there are officers guarding the window as well.' Jeff said. Jared shrugged.

'Shoot them and run. It's your only chance.' He said simply, and I could hear from his tone that he had a plan, that didn't involve them. Fortunately for him, Jeff and David had the IQ of a cockroach and didn't even notice.

'Okay. Well… Good luck, Jared.' David said softly, then turned around, to walk towards the window. Jeff turned his attention to me briefly and grinned at me manically.

'It was a pleasure working with you, Dougie. Hopefully see you later, Jared.'

Then he turned around as well and walked after his friend.

'I don't think so.' Jared grumbled, and then aimed his pistol at David's back, and without a seconds hesitation he pulled the trigger, then aimed it at Jeff, who turned around immediately when he heard the pistol shoot, and heard his friend collapse to his knees, and shot again.

'You two are biggest freaking idiots I have ever met.' Jared said in a low voice, then turned around and didn't grant his dead mates another look anymore. When he had shot them I had cried out in shock again, and Jared had muffled my screams by clamping his big sweaty hand over my mouth. He leaned down and whispered in my ear.

'Now you be a good boy, and I won't shoot you. You are going to walk outside with me, and you won't give any problems, then I will let you go without any problems. Understood?'

I nodded frantically, the fear almost swallowing me up completely. Jared grinned and released his hand from my mouth for a moment. He now aimed the pistol at my head and I closed my eyes in fear.

Then he slowly opened the door.

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