Hello all,
I know its been a while but I have been toying with the fact of a rewrite. I didn't really have a plan when I first wrote this and things jumped around to quickly and the flow was a little off. So I have been rewriting and fixing mistakes, adding things and just over all fixing the story up a bit. But what I was interested in was to see if you all had any input, I am planning on a different way to get to the ending, as well as reworking some events that are already in the story. But wanted to see if you all thought if Aleixsa should have her own enemy that she should face? Or should I just stick with the regular warriors? And if you all had any other input as well, I am happy to receive any and all help. I am not sure when the rewrite chapters will be out but hoping soon.
Thanks for you help!
-JediMadchen86
