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:D Thank you so much to my first reviewer Paige1292, even though the first line of your review had me thinking it you readers don't play thankfully it got better as I scrolled down lol.


Sasha walked out of the mall, and decided the day was nice enough for her to walk back home. It would take her about 20 minutes but she didn't really mind, she might see a cutie on the way with a car or something. She rolled her eyes at that thought. Ok she didn't really care if they had a car or not. Well not that much anyway. When she moved to Woodcrest she found it amusing how these boys thought they were some real thugs. Granted there were thugs everywhere even in the suburbs but it was still funny to a Queens Native. At first moving to Southside Chicago was probably the worst shit to happen to her since she started having a period at 11. Well not the actual period, just the pain it brought with it for them first couple of days. She moved here with her two older sisters, baby sister and grandmother. Her mother died when she was young and her father was in prison currently awaiting his pending death penalty. Rightfully so as well, she thought bitterly. Really and truly she couldn't stand her older sister Dominique who really was a result of DCs song 'independent woman', she made it so hard for dudes to get at her it was disgusting. It was cool to have yours and not need a man and all but that shit was a turn off when you took it to the extreme and started flipping niggas off just cos they wanted to pay for your movie ticket. Niggas don't wanna be told how useless they are to you. Her sister was pretty though, she'll give her that much, maybe she'll find a nice latino or white boy. She reckoned her sister needed a man to control or at least a nigga who aint afraid to grab her round the neck and tell her to cut that independent shit out and accept the gesture. She smirked a little at the thought of a man grabbing her sister and telling her that. She'd love to see that.

Her other sister Teisha was a nerd, like seriously she was a nerd. Thankfully she graduated last year so there was no more ' Ya'll related…damn' from people. Aside from being a nerd she was a prude too. Well she thought she was too, shit she was worse than Jazmine when she first met her. At least after some prodding, Jazmine admitted to being curious about sex. Her sister wanted to act like sex wasn't natural and don't get her started on this 'the one' shit. Yes she understood the whole, there is one man made for you, true love, soul mate or whatever but her sister wasn't even there looking. There was this handy man though that came round the house to fix stuff for them who seemed to be checking her out, but her sister would play it down anytime one of them brought it up. Her sister was playing a fools game waiting on that fairy tale love to happen. Shit she was already 19, and never had a real boyfriend, well she had one and he ended up being a jerk but come on that's part of the learning process. All she knew was that her sister better buck up her ideas and find the 'one' soon before she got too old. What, was she going to be 30 years old just learning the game. Better play varsity style sex when you're at that age.. She rolled her eyes at this and figured no point stressing about it, all in all virgins seemed to be freaks once they got into it. She thought of Jazmine for a second and laughed out loud. Yup Dubois was going to be a real freak she could see it in them green eyes. She grimaced slightly when she thought of Huey.

"SASH" she was pulled out of her thoughts as she looked behind her, Rome was coming up behind her on the street. She stopped and waited for him to break accordingly. He removed his helmet and grinned at her.
"Why you walking by yourself" Rome asked her, so original she thought to herself and laughed a little. He gave her a weird look. She looked him up and down. He was wearing a black and white long sleeve jumper, with dark jeans and black AF1s. Simple but effective she figured.
"What you doing, aren't you on tag" she questioned, looking at the smooth trim he was sporting and the two round cut earrings gleaming from his ears. He had brown eyes and was a lot darker than Caesar and Huey but he wasn't Akon black, more of 50s shade. She liked it, she wouldn't lie she had a little thing for him but were yet to explore that part of the friendship. Initially she only really met him because of Huey. He was only ever around when Huey brought him, so they didn't see too much of him the way they saw Caesar. They even saw them white niggas Ed and Rummy more than him. It didn't matter though, they spoke from time to time and texted each other and bbm but nothing really escalated or had developed past casual flirting. Oh that and he wasn't in school, he was just floating around the hood probably selling drugs or something. It was weird that he and Huey were friends seeing as Huey was so 'pro' black and well Rome seemed like one of the problems Huey was forever lecturing them about.
"Yeah like I'll let them bitches keep me inside my own house. Let em give me a bid for that" he said coolly.

"Right, anyway as much I love to stand in the middle of the street I gotta go" she announced,
"Your always blowing me off" Rome now said, getting off his scooter and walking up to her. She had to now take a small step back so she could look at him. He stood at about 6ft and she was 5'5.

"In order to blow you off, you'd have to have asked me to do something" she explained. He rolled his eyes

"Aiight, wanna chill" he asked directly. To say she wasn't happy he finally asked would be a lie but at the same time she had to keep it cool.
"Nah, I gotta go" she said and winked at him before turning and walking from him.

Rome looked at Sasha walk away, they'd fuck soon enough. How could they not he thought selfishly.

'Pretty feet with open toes

Scent of your neck is like a fresh red rose

X-Ray vision piercing through your clothes

But I really can't wait to see you naked though

I try to play it cool but I gotta let you know

The way its looking I can you wanna go

Skip the preview and lets get to the show'

Jon B – Ooh So Sexy


An African American man shot dead in open street, by armed police. He was rumoured to be a drug dealer in the local area of Woodcrest, Illinois Over to Mark with more info.
"That's some bullshit" Huey muttered as he watched the news,

"Huh" Jazmine said as she stopped texting on her phone and looked towards the TV. They listened to the poor excuse to kill a black man. So suspicion was enough to kill a nigga now. Did this dude even have drugs on him, no. Did he threaten the police or attempt to attack the, NO. he was a father of four, for god sakes. Huey muttered some more.
"The police are retarded, let me not walk down the street and emit some drug dealer vibe before they shoot me dead" Huey said darkly.
"Maybe they had information on him, you know, like they did in the wire" Jazmine reasoned naively
"Real life isn't like TV" he quipped quickly.

"I didn't say it was, I was just offering a reason" she started, sounding annoyed
"Yeah well there is no reason for police stupidity. It's part of their job description, dumb fucks" Huey cursed, Jazmine sat up looking at Huey's scowl.

"Yeah well, it's done now. No point loosing sleep over it" she answered very much like Huey. If the shoe was on the other foot he'd probably have said the same to her.
"Stop doing that" he said, she looked a little confused

"Doing what"
"Doing me" he replied. Then she smirked

"I'm just telling you the truth"
"I know" Huey admitted,

"Can we watch a movie now" she whined getting up and stretching. Then moving over to the dvd collection to pick something.
"Sure go ahead, I clearly just said yes" Huey said sarcastically, she didn't respond but continued looking at the collection.

He continued to watch the story until they changed it something else.

"It's my room anyway" he rolled his eyes at her delayed response.

"UP" she squealed excitedly, so remnants of the idealistic 10 year old were still there and he found it cute but at times very annoying. He didn't want to watch some stupid Disney film.
"That films stupid" Huey told her

"Well that doesn't surprise me much, coming from you" she quipped back. He glared at her. She was getting too good at handling his, well his ways of conversation. She sat back on the bed snuggling close to him. He held her closely and he thought about that guy that had been shot for no goddamn reason. Then the animated film started.

After Jazmine finished crying about the film, so what if the guy lost his house and his wife died and some other shit. That was life even you were a cartoon that never actually felt those emotions. He just looked at her drying her eyes and saying how sad it was. She's watched this film so many times he thought with annoyance.
"I'll see you tomorrow" he said, leaning over to give her a kiss on the cheek.
"Ok" she sniffled, as he got up to leave. He stopped and looked back to Jazmine sitting cross legged on her bed with some tissues. He shook his head, his heart did this to him. Taking a deep breath, he walked back and sat on her bed, opening his arm. She jumped into them.

"I'll stay till you fall asleep ok" he said in a voice much softer than his usual tone and a voice that was reserved for Jazmine alone.

"Awwh you're so good to me, I love you" she replied before she got ready for bed and to be held by her boyfriend.

Huey finally left Jazmines house and was on his way down to his. He saw Dorothy parked outside which meant Grandad was back from one of many dates. He actually hoped his Grandad could find a woman but he had to admit, he couldn't pick them. He shuddered at the thought of the women he brought through the house when they kids. He walked into the house and instantly heard Riley cursing about something.

"All the damn streets are locked off cos of that shooting" Granddad complained loudly

"Granddad you got stood up didn't you" Riley asked cheekily much to Roberts annoyance

"No I didn't, my date couldn't make it because of the traffic" Granddad explained and Riley laughed

"Yeah sure she couldn't, that hoe probably found something better" Riley said, whilst playing his Nintendo DS.

"Shut up boy, what'd you want her to do fly to me" Granddad continued
"Shit, she could have rescheduled but she a hoe so she aint tripping. She got niggas waiting to tap that"

"RLIEY" Granddad yelled and then started to consider the fact that his date had no rescheduled with him causing him to frown deeper at his 15 year old grandson. Huey just shook his head.
"Maybe you need to take a break, love clearly isn't feeling you're involvement right now' Huey suggested as he sat on the other sofa and changed the channel.

"Love isn't feeling your involvement" Robert mimicked "You lil niggas don't know shit, the ladies love Robert Freeman shit what that lil blonde wife beater say" he said trying to think of the artist

"Chris brown" Riley confirmed.

"Yeah that lil nigga, 'I'm a fly nigga I aint tripping" Robert said proudly, Huey raised his eyebrow at his granddad, how he knew that lyric he did not know. He probably needed to stop messing with these young women.

"You need to date women your own age, you're clearly loosing perspective. If you're quoting a 21 year old man who beat up his girlfriend and clearly has anger problems."
"Chris a real nigga yo, he beat that bitch for talking slick" Riley added. Huey ignored his brother

"Hush boy, I know what I'm doing" Robert now said
"Yeah what about that girl who kidnapped Riley and that lazy hoe" Huey asked.

"That bitch couldn't handle Reezys fineness she had to have me…OW" Riley said as Huey threw a bottle at him.
"Bitch nigga" Riley said to Huey
"Dumbass" Huey replied to his brother.

"Ya'll stop your shit, I don't need no relationship advice from some teenage boys who aint getting any" Robert said turning out of the room, to call his date to reschedule.

Huey rolled his eyes, as Riley continued to curse at the game he was playing as he lost. He finally decided to retire to his room, walking upstairs. He was grateful that he finally convinced his granddad to give him the guest room. It wasn't like they ever had guests other than he and Rileys friends. So it just made sense, something that Robert Freeman tried to deny for many months after his 16 birthday but weeks before his 17th he caved and gave up the guest room. He flicked the light on and he heard his phone ringing. He casually walked over to it and unplugged it from the charger

"Yo nigga where you been" was the first thing he heard Rome say on the other line
"My phone was charging, what's up"
"You hear about that shooting" Rome asked him
"Yeah, some bullshit how can" Rome cut Huey off
"Not now nigga, you know that nigga that got shot. His fam live on my street" Rome was talking quickly

"Yeah so" he asked not understanding why that would be of any importance to him.

"They aint even know they son dead, shit I don't even think his girl or kids know he dead" Huey was confused for a moment

"Wait how do you know, the news didn't state who he was" Huey questioned, if no one knew. Why was Rome so sure.
"When do they ever identify a nigga on the news, if he aint a rapper 'degrading women' or some shit or a black athlete being admitted into sex rehab they don't identify shit." Rome said confidently

"But" Huey interjected
"Yeah aint that some shit, they kill a nigga and don't tell no one but put up on the news to make it look like they doing their job" Rome kept on going
"Anyway some niggas saying they saw the cops shoot him down in cold blood and shit, they just gone over the familys house like an hour ago"
"But you just said" Huey again tried to get a word in

"Nigga this is a progressive story would you shut the fuck up" Rome said exasperated. Hueys silence was cue for Rome to continue.
"Dude had a sister, she goes down the station, asking questions about her brother. Wanting answers rightfully. You know what them bitches did"
"What" Huey asked

"They beat her ass, she only like 19, they beat a female with batons for asking to many questions what kinda shit is that. Nigga its time to protest" The last part of Romane's sentence sat with Huey.
"The family need answers, the police are being some bitches about it. Why you gotta kill a nigga in cold blood. Did he look like he was hurting anyone? Fuck the suspicions if you aint catch him with no crack and no weapon. Why you shooting him" Rome reasoned quickly. It made sense it was just another senseless death on behalf of the police against the African American community.
"It has some legs" Huey now said thinking about whether or not the protest would be strong enough.
"Yeah of course it has legs, look Ima come yours tomorrow we gonna set this shit up" Rome said hurriedly.
"Aiight" Huey said and the phone went

"Aiight peace" Rome said and the phone clicked.

Huey sat on his bed thinking about the facts that Rome had presented to him. Anything to make white America and their justice system look like fools he thought with a smirk on his face.

"I guess they just shot the wrong nigga" Huey said before settling back in his bed to plot.


I'll try get something up by the weekend :)