Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 1, Scene 8
A picture of Mary
Jane. A finger touches it. We follow the finger along the hand until
we see the touch belongs to John Jameson. He's floating in the
shuttle, looking at the picture with anger and longing. His fellow
astronaut –Richard Stevens– notices this.
STEVENS: (makes
the 'Psycho' stabbing noise) Colonel
sir, with all due respect – get over it!
JOHN: I'm sorry –
how
many beautiful girls have jilted you at the altar again?
STEVENS: Blah blah.
Get your mind back on the mission, superstar.
Chang, a pretty
Asian female and the third astronaut, floats into the chamber.
CHANG: Loverboy
pining again?
STEVENS: As per.
CHANG: Who'd she
dump you for anyway? I mean, who the hell does a girl dump a
millionaire underwear model astronaut for? Superman?
We see John frown
slightly at this, as if a new thought has occurred to him.
JOHN: She didn't
'dump' me 'for' anyone. She just wasn't ready. She needed
some distance.
STEVENS: Well buddy,
you're a hundred thousand miles from her now. If that doesn't
qualify as 'distance', then maybe it just wasn't meant to be…
A light begins to
flash on the console.
CHANG: We're
coming up on the asteroid.
JOHN: Light the
fires. I'll raise Houston.
STEVENS: If MJ
calls, what should I tell her?
JOHN: How about go
to hell?
We leave the
shuttle and fly ahead to the asteroid. It's your usual asteroid
terrain; pitted, volcanic, steam and vapours rising, the whole
massive rock tumbling through space. But in one pitted depression on
the surface, something incongruous bubbles; it resembles a small
reservoir of black tar, and most worryingly of all, it pulses from
within, as if shaken by an interior heartbeat.
As if it's
hibernating…
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