Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 1, Scene 12
Harry's
mansion. We see him open up the mirror and go into the secret chamber
beyond. He approaches the serum containers and gingerly lifts one
down, cradling it as if it were a nuclear reactor. As soon as he has
lifted it from its place a steel door slides down over the mirror
entrance, sealing off the secret chamber. A computerised voice plays.
COMPUTER: Chamber
sealed.
A hitherto hidden
panel in the wall opens, with a hole the shape of the serum container
inside. Harry places the container within. The green liquid drains
into an unseen reservoir.
COMPUTER: Reaction
catalysation in progress. Vapour release beginning.
Harry strips
himself to the waist, taking huge breaths. From nozzles in the walls
green mist begins to leak.
HARRY: I love you,
father.
The gas hits him
and he begins to choke, falling to his knees. He can't breathe. His
eyes bulge from their sockets. We see his veins stand out all over
his body. He fights for breath, crawling on his hands and knees
toward the steel door, scrabbling on it for purchase, beating his
hands against it as his struggles grow weaker and weaker until he
collapses against it, his body limp.
COMPUTER: Vapour
release complete.
We stay on
Harry's non-moving body. The Goblin mask his father wore is still
there on its display stand, and we hear the faint echoes of his
maniacal laughter…
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