Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 1, Scene 20
Space, the
asteroid. The shuttle has landed safely. Chang and Stevens are
outside in their spacesuits, bouncing around in the low gravity. John
Jameson remains in the shuttle operating controls.
JOHN: Talk to me,
guys. How's the weather out there.
STEVENS: A little
chilly, John. Might need a sweater.
CHANG: There's
some kind of localised node of those signals – two hundred yards
east.
JOHN: Houston will
be back in radio contact in two minutes, guys. Let's wait for
confirmation on any off-route trips.
CHANG: Loosen up,
John.
STEVENS: Yeah
remember – you're the soldier boy. We're the scientists. You're
just here to steer and make sure we don't blow ourselves out an
airlock by accident.
We cut to where
the two scientists are headed – toward the strange pool we saw
briefly earlier. Its surface lies still and unbroken…until it
twitches. A ripple spreads out along its surface, then another…
JOHN: Just be
careful out there…we're a long
way from
home.
The ripples have
run together now, to the point where the pool almost seems to have
facial features…a nose, eyes, and a gaping, grinning mouth…
END OF ACT ONE
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