Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 1
Mary-Jane is
shutting the door of her trailer and sighing in relief. There's a
knock on the roof of her trailer.
MARY-JANE: Hello?
SPIDERMAN (OOV):
Room service?
She opens the
skylight and in he scrambles, practically pouring his body through
the tiny hole. Spiderman removes the mask and he's Peter again.
They kiss.
MARY-JANE: What are
you doing here?
PETER: Wanted to
wish you luck – while I had five minutes. I'm sorry I wasn't
here for your first day.
MARY-JANE: You're
here now,
aren't you?
PETER: Yeah, I know…
MARY-JANE: You
didn't just come here for that, did you. Something's wrong.
PETER: Wrong?
MARY-JANE:
Spider-sense isn't just restricted to superheroes, tiger. Tell me.
PETER: It's the
Goblin, MJ. He's back.
We see a quick
flash of Mary-Jane falling from the end of the first movie. We come
back to reality and see the haunted look in her eyes. Clearly she
still has some recovering to do from that ordeal.
MARY-JANE: But you
killed him.
SPIDERMAN: I told
you I wanted to. He died, but I didn't kill him. That's not who I
am. This Goblin is...someone else, wearing his mask and using his
powers.
MARY-JANE: Someone
else? Who?
Just as Peter's
about to say something in response, there's a shout from outside.
SHOUTER: It's on
the big screen! It's everywhere!
The world goes
into spider-time. Peter snatches his mask up, kisses Mary-Jane on the
cheek and leaps out the skylight all in an instant. Normal time
resumes with Mary-Jane.
MARY-JANE: Wonder
what that's
a-
She glances
beside her and sees that Peter is gone. A frown creases her forehead
and she touches her cheek where he kissed her in that briefest of
moments. A sad smile appears on her lips.
MARY-JANE: Go get
'em, tiger…
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