Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 6
J. Jonah
Jameson's half-ruined office. Tarpaulin sheets have been hastily
affixed over the gaping hole in the wall. The wind whips at them, but
Jameson pays it no heed. He sits in front of a computer panel,
telephone in hand.
JAMESON: J. Jonah
Jameson here!
CONTROLLER (V/O):
John's father? The newspaper guy?
JAMESON: The
newspaper guy with a backup control system for your fancy bird up
there, yes! Now shut up and listen! My son is overriding your
commands but he can't override mine, so take your systems offline
and let me and my team guide the shuttle back home!
CONTROLLER: You
have…our
systems…your
team...what the hell are you talking about?!
JAMESON: Son, I
don't have time for semaphore! Your computer systems were built by
an organization run by a friend of mine. I have his personal
workstation here, complete with hardwired backdoor that the Praetor
can't
override. If you don't want to watch your shuttle explode in about
twenty seconds then TAKE
THE GOD-DAMNED SYSTEMS OFFLINE!
The controller
slams the phone down. A military type appears at his shoulder.
CONTROLLER: General?
GENERAL: Was that
Jonah?
CONTROLLER: Sir…yes,
sir.
GENERAL: Do as he
says. Now.
One of Jonah's
hastily-assembled 'team' (of three people) exclaims in triumph at
his station.
TEAM GUY: Sir,
NASA's systems are offline.
JAMESON: Assume
control!
TEAM GUY: Done, sir.
We have control.
JAMESON: Bring that
throttle down! And start calculating a re-entry trajectory, anything
you can get! And let me speak to him, now!
TEAM GUY: Yes, sir.
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