Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 7
Space. John
Jameson is holding MJ's picture over the stars. He moves it
slightly and we see that it was obscuring the blue marble of Earth,
coming up fast. Another huge thump comes from behind him, as Stevens'
corpse tries once again to break down the door.
COMPUTER: Shield
stresses at 96. Breach averted.
JOHN: (horrified)What…?
He throws
switches but to no avail. And then from above a familiar voice echoes
through the speakers.
JAMESON (V/O): Son?
JOHN: Dad?
JAMESON: You're
alive. I knew you were alive.
JOHN: Dad…Dad, are
you doing this?
JAMESON: Me? I'm
just a newspaper guy. How could I be doing this?
JOHN: Dad, please,
you have to stop. I can't bring this shuttle back to Earth.
JAMESON: Wrong, son.
See I've grown kinda fond of you over your whole life. So you're
coming home.
JOHN: Dad, dammit
listen to
me! There's something
up here with me,
do you understand! Something killed
Stevens
on that asteroid, but it wasn't done with his body, and now it's
loose on this shuttle! Who knows what it could do on Earth?
There's a long
silence. John looks hopeful, as if he might have gotten through to
his old man at long last.
JAMESON: You mean my
son is
going to bring back…an alien life-form? My
son is
going to be responsible for the single biggest story in human
history?
JOHN: (slumping
in his seat)Oh God.
JAMESON: Strap in
tight, John. Might be a bumpy landing but you'll get there, I
promise. Trust your old man!
The transmission
light goes out.
JOHN: We're
doomed…
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