Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 8
Jameson's
control centre. He sits perched on his desk, hovering over his team,
practically frothing at the mouth with nervous excitement.
JAMESON: 'Heroic
Astronaut Makes Historic First Contact With Being From Another
World'. (presses
intercom)
Robbie, get in here! We got a special edition to print, and a
sixty-page pullout on my son to publish!
ROBBIE (V/O):
Coming, Jonah.
TEAM GUY: Um, didn't
your son say the alien had murdered one of his crew?
JAMESON: Alright –
'Heroic First Contact With Monster
From Another World'. Either way it's gold!
TEAM GUY#2: We might
have a problem…
JAMESON: Problem?
Robbie enters.
TEAM GUY#2: The
landing gear control systems are gone, sir. Fried, most likely. That
makes a standard glide landing almost impossible.
JAMESON: Are you
telling me they stuck a 50 billion dollar new propulsion system on
that damn thing and forgot to add parachutes?
TEAM GUY#2: No...but
the damage the shuttle sustained taking off will most likely render
at least one of the atmospheric parachutes inoperative. Maybe two.
JAMESON: So? We're
not gonna to aim for the pavement, idiot! We'll go for the ocean!
TEAM GUY#1: Well,
yes…but even so, if the shuttle doesn't slow its velocity enough
even a splashdown impact will be extremely dangerous. If two
parachutes are gone it's extremely unlikely your son would survive.
JAMESON: What do we
do?
TEAM GUY#3: We can
slow it down with the thrusters, but we don't know how effective
that would be. The parachutes are vital. If they're gone…you'd
need some other way of slowing down the shuttle.
JAMESON: Slowing
down a space shuttle! And how in hell are we supposed to do that!
ROBBIE: Uh…
The entire office
gives them their undivided attention. He licks his lips nervously.
ROBBIE: There might
be someone…
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