Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 9
Spiderman is
webbing to get a better view of the screen when a mobile rings.
Surprised, he loses his perfectly-timed momentum and crashes flat
into a wall.
SPIDERMAN: (face
still pressed to wall)
Ow.
He scrambles to a
ledge and twists his body to try to see where the mobile is.
SPIDERMAN: Aw, would
ya look at that-
There's a
perfectly rectangular bump on his arse. Clearly he left his mobile in
his inner pocket this morning. With some suit-wriggling he manages to
get it free.
SPIDERMAN: Hello?
JAMESON (V/O):
Parker!
SPIDERMAN: Jonah?
JAMESON (V/O): Shut
up, Parker! Can you still get ahold of that worthless web-spinning
menace, or has he finally scuttled back into the hole he came from?
SPIDERMAN:
Spiderman? He's…around.
JAMESON (V/O): Good!
Tell him…tell him…(clearly
Jonah's having some trouble saying these words)…tell
him I need his help.
Instinctively
Spiderman reaches out with his free left hand to stop himself from
falling off the ledge in shock.
SPIDERMAN: What
did you
say?
JAMESON: Shut up! My
son's shuttle will be splashing down a few miles into Manhattan
Harbor in less than twenty minutes. He doesn't have enough
parachutes left to slow his descent and after what the webhead did
for that train last year...well...seems he's the only one who might
be able to somehow slow the shuttle enough. I'll have a helicopter
on the roof of the Bugle building in five minutes ready to take him
to the area. Get him Parker, I don't care how but get him.
SPIDERMAN: He'll
be there.
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