Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 23
Spiderman and MJ
land softly on the outskirts of a train station. It's getting dark.
She has a large satchel bag with her and is wrapped in her disguise
coat.
MARY-JANE: You're
sure about this.
SPIDERMAN: Trust me.
May and Nellie will love having someone else in the house to break up
all those silences. You have the address?
MARY-JANE: Yes. How
will I know when-
SPIDERMAN: There are
about ten million phones in this city. I'll call you.
MARY-JANE: Don't I
get a kiss, at least?
Spiderman takes a
step backward. His appearance shimmers for a moment before his
spider-suit ripples, erasing the black all-in-one in favour of Peter
Parker civilian clothes.
MARY-JANE: What's
happened to you, Peter...
PETER: I'm not
sure...when you're safe I'm going to go find out. But...I think it's
another gift. Like the spider-bite in the laboratory.
MARY-JANE: So that
was a gift?
PETER: What else
would it be?
Mary-Jane simply
nods. We sense that she's deeply, deeply worried about Peter, but
unable to begin thinking about how to vocalise her concerns. Peter
senses her mood and moves to kiss her, but it's not the passionate
kisses of old; Mary-Jane holds back slightly, and it's more of a
chaste affair.
PETER: Don't worry,
MJ. I'm going to win.
MARY-JANE:
Yeah...well, you know what? I believe you. And that worries me.
She kisses him on
the cheek and walks away. Peter stares after her, confused and
conflicted as to her reaction, and for a moment looks as if he will
call after her, but seems to think better of it. He steps back into
the shadows...we see a brief shimmer...and the black-clad Spiderman
swings off into New York.
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