Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 2, Scene 28
Dawn is breaking
over Manhattan, and Spiderman watches the light spill over the
buildings from his vantage point on one of the highest corners of the
Empire State Building. He runs his fingers over the forearms of his
suit.
SPIDERMAN: Ready?
With that, he
springs free of the building, his body a perfect gymnastic arrow.
Gravity takes its toll and he plummets, the ground rushing up to meet
us at a stomach-lurching rate. With the ground a fraction of a second
away, a webline is snaked and snags, and he's off, rocketing down the
New York avenue in huge looping arcs. This is Spiderman revelling in
his powers as we haven't seen him in a long time.
A voice carries
to him. It's a little girl, crying.
LITTLE GIRL: My
balloon! My balloon!
Spiderman arrests
himself in mid-swing and tracks the rising red balloon, which is
already some distance above him. With one precision leap of over a
hundred feet straight up, he clasps his hand around the string and
web-zips to the side of a building, descending more slowly so as not
to burst the balloon.
When his feet
touch the ground, the little girl is waiting for him. She's about
four years old, and currently jumping madly up and down in
excitement.
SPIDERMAN: Somebody
lose a balloon?
LITTLE GIRL: Me me
me me me me!!!
Kneeling down, he
hands it over. The girl hugs him.
LITTLE GIRL: Thank
you, Peter.
Spiderman stands
up quickly, unable to believe what he has just heard.
SPIDERMAN: What did
you call me?
LITTLE GIRL: That's
your name isn't it? Pe-ter Par-ker. Pe-ter Par-ker.
SPIDERMAN: Where did
you hear that?
LITTLE GIRL: My
Daddy was reading it to me this morning. And it was on TV when I left
the house. I live just over there (she
turns to point)
and my Daddy-
When she's turned
back, Spiderman has gone. We stay on the little girl for a moment as
she pouts, and then her face clears with the air of someone having a
fantastically good idea. She lets go of her balloon. It begins to
rise into the air.
LITTLE GIRL:
(hopefully)My
balloon...my balloon...
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