Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 4
Mary-Jane steps
out of a taxi. She's in a leafy suburb in Atlanta. She checks the
address on the mailbox with the address on a piece of paper in her
pocket and nods, satisfied.
We cut to the
front door. MJ raps once, twice. Moments later it's opened by an
old lady who bears more than a passing resemblance to Aunt May.
MARY-JANE: Nellie?
NELLIE: Yes? Can I
help you, dear?
MARY-JANE: Is May
Parker here?
NELLIE: Oh, you're
not another one are you! Like I told the others, I don't want to
talk about my sister's nephew! Good day!
She makes to slam
the door but MJ grabs it and holds it open.
MARY-JANE: No, you
don't understand…I'm Peter's girlfriend, Mary-Jane Watson.
I'm here to see Aunt May. She's expecting me. Please, I need to
speak to her.
NELLIE: Well you're
out of luck dear. She was here for a little while, yes, but then that
nice young friend of yours came to collect her.
Mary-Jane's
eyes widen.
MARY-JANE: Friend of
mine?
NELLIE: Yes.
Handsome young man. Name was…oh let me think-
MARY-JANE: (flatly)
Harry.
NELLIE: That was
h…oh…my dear…is everything-
By the time she
trails off Mary-Jane has turned tail and is sprinting away from her
door. She heads for the road at the end of the street, taking out her
mobile phone and switching it on…before she remembers.
MARY-JANE: You broke
it…
She reaches the
road and flags down a taxi.
DRIVER: Where to?
MARY-JANE: Airport.
And hurry, please...
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