Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 5
The offices of
the Sentinel. A room inside, filled with people. The low buzz of
conversation fills the room. Lynas enters at the head of the room and
the buzz melts away. It's a meeting of the Web. He cuts straight to
the point.
LYNAS: You know why
you're all here.
We see that
Robbie is in the front row. Everyone looks grim.
ROBBIE: He needs our
help. Jesus, what he must be feeling – the entire city
is coming
down on him out there.
LYNAS: At the minute
there's nothing we can do.
ROBBIE: You own
a newspaper!
There's plenty
you can
do! Jonah has no evidence apart from one picture. He's counting on
no serious challenges coming forward and so far no-one has. But
people respect the Sentinel.
LYNAS: We can
rubbish it all we want but unless we prove it's not
Peter –
and that, needless to say, might prove difficult nothing will
change. That's the media culture we live in, ladies and gentlemen.
WOMAN: I heard he
put some guy through a window.
An uncomfortable
silence follows that statement.
LYNAS: As Robbie
said, he must be under immense strain at the moment. He saved all of
our lives – I think he deserves the benefit of the doubt. He's a
hero, and he'll prove it to this city again.
ROBBIE: Who's
gonna let him, Lynas? He'll be arrested or killed before he has a
chance to prove anything to anyone.
As he says those
last two sentences, we fade into a view of Peter sitting on one of
the birds on the side of Chrysler Building, the exact place where he
sat the night his Uncle Ben was killed. He looks out over New York
with haunted, hunted eyes.
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