Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 8
A man's body
slams against an alleyway wall. Before he has the chance to collapse
to the ground someone grabs him and pins him in place. It's
Spiderman.
SPIDERMAN: You tell
the rest of your buds that they can stay the hell away from me, do
you hear me? One hundred K may be a lot of money, but the kind of
surgery you'll need after trying to get it will cost a hell
of a lot
more.
He dumps the man
to the ground and leaps straight up and out of the alleyway, landing
on the roof above. One kilometre or so east a police helicopter is
shining a searchlight on the rooftops as it performs a flyover.
Spiderman kneels behind a wall to find cover.
We go to the void
again. The figure is incredibly close now, a looming presence in the
darkness, the glinting of its eyes like two ice-cold stars in the
twilight.
THING: Join.
PETER: Who are
you...
THING: Power.
PETER: I need more.
I'm not strong enough.
The teeth glint.
It's smiling.
THING:
More...from...join. Join...power.
We're back on the
rooftop. Spiderman shakes his head to clear it, putting out a hand to
steady himself as the effects of the vision wear off.
We cut to high
above, and the Goblin on his glider, his helmet removed. He watches
Spiderman suffer with obvious relish.
GOBLIN: Had enough,
Spiderman? It's only just beginning.
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