Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 21
Brock walks
through the door to his apartment. It's an enormous place and
completely barren, a little like Mary-Jane's.
BROCK: Celine? You
here?
A woman storms
out of the bedroom. She's carrying a suitcase. It's the same
woman we saw in the picture in Brock's car – the one hanging on
his arm with all the romantic feeling of lichen on a rock.
BROCK: What are you
doing?
CELINE: Taking my
suitcase for a coffee. What do you think? I'm leaving you.
BROCK: But –
Celine, what about the wedding?
CELINE: Okay
newsflash; hottest journalist in New York proposes to you, you say
yes. Laughing stock of New York engaged to you, you run.
BROCK: I'll give
you time.
CELINE: (opening
the front door)I'll
give you a restraining order. Do yourself and me a favour, Eddie; get
the hell out of the city and stay out. And here's a tip – I'd
do it before
your first month's rent is due on this place.
BROCK: (almost
in tears)But…none
of this is my fault…!
CELINE: No, it
isn't. It never is your fault, Eddie. You're one of life's
passengers, and it's not enough for me anymore. I want to go
somewhere. Starting right now with me going out of this apartment.
She pauses
halfway through the doorway.
CELINE: Goodbye
Eddie. Thanks for everything.
EDDIE: No, wait!
But she slams the
door shut in his face. He stands with his forehead pressed against it
for a moment, hardly able to believe what is happening to him.
Eventually he turns and walks to the window to look out over New
York.
The door raps.
Eddie bounds over to it.
EDDIE: Celine?
Celine, I-
It's not
Celine. It's Peter Parker, hands on either side of the doorframe,
looking like a demon in the darkness. His eyes glint unnaturally.
PETER: Hello, Eddie.
His fist lashes
out, and the world goes black.
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