Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 24
A car speeding
through the New York streets. Inside in the back are MJ and Lynas.
MARY-JANE: What
happened to your limo?
LYNAS: My new driver
happened.
The driver of the
car turns around and grimaces apologetically beneath a hideously
obvious disguise.
BOB: Sorry, Mr
Stewart.
LYNAS: That's
alright Bob.
BOB: I just-
LYNAS: (calmly)Eyes on
the road Bob. There's a good man.
Lynas' mobile
rings. He answers.
LYNAS: Yes? (pause)
How long ago? Any witnesses? I see. Keep me informed. Put everyone on
this, Janet. Everyone.
MARY-JANE: What
happened?
LYNAS: Police
contact. Eddie Brock is gone from his apartment.
MARY-JANE:
Peter...no, Peter...
LYNAS: Would seem to
fit, wouldn't it? I'm keeping this with us at all times.
He pats one of
the sonic emitter devices sitting beside him on his lap.
MARY-JANE: Where did
you-
LYNAS: Don't ask. We
just have to find him before things get worse.
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