Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 30
Aunt May's front
door opens.
AUNT MAY: Peter!
Peter recoils
back slightly, as if dodging a slap. None is forthcoming. Aunt May
skips straight to the hug part. Eventually they part. Peter steps
into the hallway.
PETER: I'm so sorry.
AUNT MAY: Shush. I'm
proud of you. But are you all right?
PETER: I have
felt better. But I'm gonna be just fine. In fact, I'm kinda hungry...
Mary-Jane appears
at the doorway, grinning. Aunt May smiles.
AUNT MAY: Dinner for
three? No problem.
PETER: Actually...
Harry Osborn
steps in, right on cue. He looks awkward, sheepish, ashamed. He
fidgets.
PETER: ...it's for
four.
HARRY: Hey. If this
is too-
AUNT MAY: You're
welcome in this home anytime, Harry Osborn. Now you three get in
there and get working on setting the table.
PETER / MARY-JANE /
HARRY: Yes, Aunt May.
They file in
meekly. Aunt May strides out to the kitchen, all business, but once
she's in there she simply stands out of sight by the doorway and
listens for a moment to the buzz of conversation from the three
friends in the next room.
The world's
biggest smile lights up her features. She opens the refridgerator and
begins to assemble dinner. We pull back, out of the kitchen window,
leaving the house behind altogether, that faint conversation still
floating in the air.
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