Yes it's a flagrant repost but with the real movie opening, I'm interested to hear your views on this old chestnut of mine written over 2 years ago! compared to the real deal...!
Rated: Fiction K - English - Adventure/Fantasy - Chapters: 89 - Words: 45,898 - Reviews: 74 - Favs: 22 - Follows: 4 - Updated: May 15, 2012 - Published: Jan 4, 2005 - Status: Complete - id: 2205336
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Act 3, Scene 35
Aunt May opens
her front door. Lynas is standing there.
AUNT MAY: Can I help
you?
LYNAS: Just here to
deliver this, ma'am. Have a nice day.
He hands her an
envelope, smiles, and walks back to his car, which drives away. Aunt
May stares after him, puzzled. Peter enters from the kitchen.
PETER: Who was it?
AUNT MAY: I don't
know. He just gave me this.
She opens the
envelope and unfolds the documents within. We pan down to see what
she's holding. The first page says TITLE DEED. Aunt May keeps
reading. Her eyes slowly widen in disbelief.
AUNT MAY: It's the
house.
PETER: This house?
AUNT MAY: I own it.
The mortgage has been paid in full.
PETER: (incredulous)The house
- the house is yours?!
AUNT MAY: Oh, Peter!
They come
together in a joyful embrace. It's a real heartwarming moment;
finally, after the last three years of uncertainty following Ben's
death, they can relax knowing that the house is safe.
We cut to Lynas'
car. His mobile rings.
LYNAS: Yes?
Yes...it's done. Yes, I'm sure. Listen to me: Peter Parker was going
to owe me big one way or the other. And if Parker owes me, Spiderman
owes me. And that's more or less the whole point now isn't it?
He terminates the
call with a flip of his phone. Suddenly this isn't the genial Lynas
Stewart we've grown accustomed to; this is someone different, someone
new, and someone quite unpleasant.
LYNAS: Home. We have
a lot to do.
We cut ahead to
the driver. It's the woman who was present with Lynas when Peter woke
up in his mansion. She smiles.
DRIVER: Yes, sir...
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