Authors Note
So my usual update days are Friday, Saturday, and Sunday. It might be one of the days two or all three. IMPORTANT-I AM BUMPING RINA AGE TO JUST TURNED 14 AND MAX TO 15 SO RINA IS A BIT CURVEY (I DONT CARE IF ITS NOT A WORD THE WHOLE CHAPTER GOT DELETED AND MY THROAT HURTS) CAUSE CLARY MENTIONS MULTIPLE TIMES IN THE BOOK HOW HER MOM IS CURVEYER THEN HER SO I THOUGHT THAT I SHOULS MAKE ONE OF THE DAUGHTERS CURVEY ALSO SOMEONE SAID THAT JON SHOULD BE 6'2 SO THATS HIS HIGHT NOW.Also I'm going to rant so if you don't care you can skip to the shout outs but let's talk YOUNGER SISTERS cause there devils, I mean like so I had just been playing around so I asked my sister what gender she was then I acted surprised at her answer later I asked her if irrelevant questions annoy her and she said yes I then walked away and she started chasing me with a wet chancla to slap me she then kept on getting cold water and sprinkling it on me!, keep in mind that I'm still ill and I was going to post this earlier but she went on my phone and 'accidentally' deleted it so I had to write it again!Also as for updating next week I don't know cause I'm going to have loads of school make up work but it honestly depends on my teachers. ,(. ALSO I WOULD BE VERY GRATEFUL IF SOMEONE COULD HELP ME FIND A BETA I TRYIED AND FAILED (THE REQUIREMENTS ARE AT THE ENDOF CHAPTER)
Nicr (guest)-for some reason your review isn't appearing I the review area on my screen but I got a e-mail saying that you reviewed and thank you for understanding and as you see I will update at least once a week *-*
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Morgenstern128-Thank You for favoriting my story and reviewing I really did try and make this a different story cause I was going to do Zombie apocalypse but I decided it's been done to many times (cause I love reading those story's) so I put a different made up world of my own :)
Debra Williams- thank you so much I really am trying and when reading I've always loved to picture the book so that's why I'm trying to be descriptive also I can't express how happy it makes me that you keep reviewing with positive words and I am feeling fine my doctor said that the fever was from a very bad cold on the brick of the flu but my moms a nurse so she brought it down and I'm on antibiotics 8) so I'm getting better but I'm still a bit sick
Guest-I'm really trying hard and I'm glade you like the story also grammar and spelling are weak points for me so if you are/know a beta pls PM me so we can talk I've never had a beta before and don't quite understand how it works thank you for you constructive criticism :) (Your review didn't show up either but I got the e-mail)
One with the story for the second time *sighs loudly as annoying sister touches me repeatedly*
Clary P.O.V
"Mind telling me why you have a sword to my neck?" I ask in annoyed voice when really I'm scared.
He looks in my eyes and something flashes, to quick for me to identify.
"Sorry little Apple I thought you were a vamp." He says
I can't tell which of that sentence made me anger but I said/yelled "LITTLE APPLE!?!"
"Ya know the thing that you use to make Apple juice and Apple pie and-"
"Yes Sherlock I know what a Apple is but why'd you call me "little Apple"
"Cause your pale have one green eye and red hair and your very short."
"Alright you listen here jack-" he rudely cuts me off from what I was going to say. I glare at him and he mouths vamps.
When I see them I can tell that there not friendly "Raphael go scout the area I'm hungry."
"Yes Camille" the boy-Raphael says
Once he's gone she says "sorry about that but my little brother can't stomach kills, so are you coming out or am I coming in?"
When we don't move she lunges forward and I push the blond out of the way. She lands on my foot which is bended at a weird angle, she then bites me and while it can't kill/turn me it hurts like a bullet. I scream, and but her which makes her reel back bite she doesn't waste time as she grasp a knife and yanks my arm which I'm pretty sure I hear snap, and is about to finish me when she suddenly grabs her head and there stands the blond with a smirk that falls as soon as he sees me. He was going to kill her I think but I scream "WAIT DONT! SHE HAS A LITTLE BROTHER!" He looks at me like I'm crazy (which I just might be) but still helps me up.
"I think I'm gunna faint." I say
"No your not hang in there I'll take you to camp and keep you safe I'll make sure you get better." He says a stubborn look in his eyes. I try not to focus on the feeling I my stomach when he says that 'he's a vamp hunter they killed your dad! Plus he's just being polite' I scold myself
Jon P.O.V
Why do I even bother making plans with my sisters? It's not like there going to follow them. I sigh as I look around for them then I see a trail of blood and as I keep walking I see a hole with blood in it so like a normal brother I panic and start shouting "WHAT THE HELL CLARY RIMA WHERE ARE YOU?"
A annoyed looking Rina comes and pulls me along to a camp site she then says "there safe" and hurries off somewhere. Out of all three of us siblings I trust her judgment the most. So when she said there safe I knew that they were most likely safe.
When I looked around I was a lot of people but the most important one I saw was Clary who seemed to have two broken bones! I was going to answer but knowing my sisters Rina would give me a mean look and Clary would call me some mean words so I keep quiet.
"I'm guessing your Jon." A boy with blue eyes and black hair says causing me to raise one white eyebrow.
"Umm Rina told me about you she saved me and were friends at least she implied it." The poor boy, he seemed to be trying to thank Rina which was hard but by the looks of it she trust him, why? I don't know.
"She trust you." Is all I say before I hear a pare of giggles that I haven't hear in a long time.
I turn and see my sisters laughing at something two boys said! Now don't get me wrong I'm all for them laughing and stuff but I had a feeling that this giggling and laughing was flirting with boys and as a older brother I couldn't let this happen cause BOYS»KISSING=EWWWW
Then my fears are confirmed when I hear the blond boy say "I like it when girls are feisty." Making Clary scowl but clearly she was hiding a smile.
I was going to stop this when I was Rina giving me the 'Sibling Glare' (noun 1- a glare shared between siblings when arguing,if you see this you should be ready to stop them from killing each other. Noun 2-a glare given by a sibling to protect a sibling and not heeding this warning can cause serious injuries like being castrated)
Me being the responsible and sensible person I am took a step back and sat on the ground.
When Rina finished bandaging Clary, she came and laid on top of my lap and fell asleep. This hurt a bit cause I know we're going to have to leave and I know she feels safe here but I have a bad feeling.
Then a man and Woman come out and the man shouts "JONATHAN AND ALEXANDER CARE TO TELL ME WHY YOU HAVE BROUGHT HALF-BLOODS TO OUR CAMP"
Before anyone could reply I say "Care to tell me why you can't use our names? Or are we just not good enough also could you keep the yelling down my sister is trying to sleep you know the one who patched up and prevented infection in your sons foot and the one who helped her older sister who saved your other son."
He's look of anger turns to embarrassment.
The lady says "in sorry for my husbands behavior!" She shoots him a dirty look. "But we would like to introduce ourselves."
After the introduction I learn that there are 8 of them in all. The Lightwoods, Mayres and Robert are the parents of Isabelle Alec and Max. Simon is Isabelle's boyfriend and then there's Magnus who is Alec's boyfriend.
After I introduce myself and my sisters who are now both sleeping on top of me they ask a question that I knew was coming but still hurt. "Where are your parents?"
"Dead" I say in a monotone voice hoping that she'll get the hint.
"By the Angel who takes care of you guys? How old were you?"
"Mom! That's none of our business!" Izzy says shooting me a apologetic look.
"It is if there staying with us!" Mayres responds
"Which there NOT" Robert buts in (I don't like this guy)
"Stop! I'm right here all right they died cause of vamp hunters my dad was protecting us then a year later mom died trying to get us food I was 15 Clare 14 and Rina 12! NOW SHUT THE HELL UP" I whisper yell while gesturing to my sleeping sisters.
They all look guilty then Mayres says "your welcome to stay as long as you want." She points at three tents "you can sleep in there."
I say thanks then carefully put Clary in her own tent and as much as I want my own tent I know Rina will get scared if she wakes up alone so I put her bag in the tent (Clary gunna kill me when she finds out but in my panic of looking for them I lost her and mine bags) and go and pick my youngest sister up and put her in the biggest of the three I then crawl in and slowly fall asleep to the sound of my sisters snores with one thought in my head 'I'm going to be the one who has to take this away from them to keep them from getting hurt…physically or emotionally' God I hate being a big brother.
BETA REQUIREMENTS
•I don't want someone who prefers people who's second language in English because English is my first language I just suck at grammar and spelling
•because I speed read I'm horrible at proof reading so the have to be good at that
•they need to be good at grammar and spelling
•I do this on my phone so I don't know how this works exactly but it has to be iPhone 5 compatible
•I don't mind if they give constructive criticism and would like if they help with plot holes
•They can be as honest as they want I don't like when people sugar things and I don't do that BUT they can't be EXTREMELY rude about it
