Okay so how'd ya like the last chapter? Good, bad, okay? Review PLEASE! I'll really except any review except for nasty flames and super mean comments. If its saying that I can do something better in a KIND WAY I'm fine with it. I'm gonna try to update this story a lot but it's my first one so try to understand that I'm going to have A LOT of technical difficulties.
FANGS POV
I liked Max and everyone knew it. Well, everyone except for her... She's kinda think headed when it comes to this kinda stuff. Everyone knew she liked me back, and up until a few days ago, I thought they were crazy.
This is how I found out:
I was just minding my own business sitting on the couch watching TV when Nudge comes and sits next to me. This was weird because usually me and Nudge don't really talk all that much. I mean, when we need something or when it is necessary we do, but we aren't very close.
"Hey Nudge...?"
"Fang get your fricken head out of the clouds!"
"Excuse me?"
"Fang Max really likes you! I can't believe you haven't noticed yet!"
"What are you smoking Nudge?"
"Nothing, Fang! She really does! Pay more attention the next time she talks to you! You'll see it. Her eyes say everything."
And with that she walked away. No babbling on like usual. Just a few simple sentences. I just sat there for a while, talking in what she said.
I couldn't get her words to stop echoing in my head.
"Her eyes say everything."
What could that mean? All I know is that I NEED to get to the bottom of this, and fast.
I mean, it isn't possible for Max to like me! She's Max and I'm me and I've learned to accept that! There is absolutely NO WAY she could like me for three reasons: One, she always teases about every little thing she can. Two, she is the anti-boy-don't-flirt-with-me-or-I'll-rip-out-your-spine-and-beat-you-with-it Max! Three, I like her back, and that only happens in cliché movies.
My head was spinning and I was getting butterflies in my stomach. Everyone knows that feeling. Everyone knows what if feels like to figure out that your crush might just like you. And most of all, everyone knows the sudden feeling that comes after.
What if I'm wrong?
No, Fang. Don't think that way. Just go talk to the girl! If she doesn't like you so what? No, I can't. If she doesn't like me and I ask her out I will be heartbroken and I don't think I can handle that. Wait a second. What did I just think to myself?
Did I seriously just think something emotional and mushy? Oh no. Oh no no no! What am I turning into? I am turning into someone– someone– someone that shows their emotions!
I can't let this happen to me! I need to go talk to her before I loose all of my manly points!
I run upstairs as fast as I can and burst into Max's bedroom. She looks up calmly and then looks back down at the book she was reading. Wait a second, book? Whatever, Max is weird.
"Ever heard of knocking?" she said calmly, still reading.
"I, um... Sorry..." I started to stutter but I caught myself, making sure not to do it again.
"Did I just hear an apology from the great, never apologizing Fang?"
"Um, yeah. I guess so..."
"So what's up? I mean, why did you come in my room in the first place?"
Should I ask her? Should I make up an excuse for why I was in her room?
"Fang I asked you a question!" she said, annoyed.
I jumped and looked up, saying, "Oh sorry. Do you wanna hang out maybe?"
She smiled and put a bookmark in her book. Then she stood up and walked over to me.
"Sure," she answered, "Whatever shall we do?"
While she was talking to me I looked directly into her eyes. I was trying to see what Nudge was talking about earlier. However hard I tried, I just couldn't see it. I remembered she was waiting for an answer so I just shrugged, not really wanting to talk much more since I had already talked so much today. Apparently this was not an acceptable answer because she frowned.
"Fang why don't you just talk to communicate?"
"Because I have nothing to say."
Oooooo words I know!
I looked down, but it didn't take long for my gaze to be back on Max. She was so beautiful... But what would Iggy think if we got together? For a short moment, I thought about what he would think. I forgot about what Max would say if she knew I liked her. I forgot about everything.
And I kissed her.
Cliffy! Don't ya just love me? Yeah I bet you do! But I mean, I don't know that for sure, and I want to, so R&R!
Iggy: Hey lovely ladies!
TLTTOAN: Iggy I'm sure guys are reading this too...
Iggy: I know. I was talking to the ladies! Oh and by the way, she is making me like Max in this story. In reality, I don't and I'm single!
TLTTOAN: Iggy really, no one cares!
Iggy: SHE DOESN'T OWN MAXIMUM RIDE! JAMES PATTERSON DOES! YOU DON'T OWN ME! YOU DON'T OWN ME! YOU DON'T OWN ME! HAHA!
TLTTOAN: I really hate you right now. Don't forget Iggy, I could just kill you out of the story right now!
Iggy: * gulps *
TLTTOAN: MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
