So I uploaded the introduction as you already know. BTW I don't mind critical comments and I also need a 100% jerk OC if anyone can make one I'll most likely accept it. I could of post this a while ago but I was waiting on OCs. Thanks to the people who submitted OCs, I'm not going to tell who got in but it isn't to late to submit OCs.
Introduction
"Naomi."
"Y-yes?" Naomi said in an insecure voice.
"I love you," he bends over to kiss her slowly.
"Naomi!...Naomi!...Wake up!" a familiar voice filling Naomi's ears. She drowsily opens her eyes seeing her bother, Kai, directly above her. Putting her covers over her head as she thinks to herself 'Why the fuck did you wake me up.'
"We need to leave now!" Kai said with a panic. "Pack what you can carry we need to go. There is something disastrous happening." Grabbing her ankles out of her covers and yanking her onto the floor making her head make a 'thud' sound on the ground. Kai then grabbing her throws her to her feet, shoving her towards her closet.
"What the fuck you do that for?" she said while rubbing her head where she fell on it. "Where are we going and why are we in a hurry?" Naomi saying aggravated, throwing random pieces of clothing in her suitcase while hitting Kai in the face with one of her panties.
"We are evacuating, pack as much as you can." Kai said while taking his sister's panties out of his face with a disgusting look on his face. He walks out of her room throwing her panties by her suitcase as he goes into his room. Then he goes to his drawer and pulls out his 9mm pistol, tucking it in the back of his pants. He looks at Naomi as she walks into his room with her suitcase packed.
Seeing the pistol Naomi asks, "Why do you need a gun?"
"Things might get a little crazy." Kai whispered walking out of his room to open the front door, "I've already packed everything in the car; go there when you're ready."
Going to the car door, she throws her suitcase in the backseat of the car while Kai hopped in the front seat; then quickly putting on his seatbelt in the driver's seat and starting the car. He floors it down the street as Naomi look out the window as if was just a normal day. As Naomi just remembered her unanswered questions, "So where are we going and why are we in a hurry." She looks out the window again seeing not one person on the street, no cars anywhere at all except the cars that were crashed into each other, as she waits for her questions to be answered.
"There is some type of virus going into people making them kill other people and infecting them too. That is why we are leaving; there is a safe zone where we can chill at for a while 'til things calm down." Kai explained as they hit the highway going out of Tokyo.
"Wait! Wait! Wait! Are you saying that there are zombies and we could die going getting out of Tokyo?" Naomi yelled in a quick panic jumping around the car hoping she doesn't die soon.
"Chill out we won't die, plus the outbreak hasn't reached Tokyo yet. We still have a few hours left until it reaches us." Kai said trying to calm his annoying sister. He stops the car as he sees traffic as far as the eye can see.
After about an hour of irritating boredom; Naomi finally cracks and sticks her head out of the car yelling, "What the fuck hurry up! At this rate we will be died in minutes!" As she was yelling she notice there was no one in the car in front of her and no one in any car around them. "Kai? There is no one in the cars," She said confused out of her mind, "Why isn't there anyone in the cars?"
"This is getting weird; let's drive thought them." Kai begins to drive between the empty cars making sure he doesn't scratches his midnight blue Honda Civic as Naomi looks into the almost completely empty cars they passed by. Passing car after car they approach a roadblock made of crashed cars and random objects, "Damn this roadblock is blocking the whole highway and there is no way pass this," he proclaimed. Moaning sounds started appearing as Naomi and Kai look in its direction. All they can see are trees and brushes until a person sprinting from the trees.
"HEY!" the person yelled. Suddenly he trips on a root of a tree and at least 4 other people come from behind him. When Kai actually took a good look at them they notice they weren't human. 'They' tore into him like he was a piece of wet paper.
"Naomi… " Kai said with wide eyes. "Stay down!" He rolled down the cars sunroof and puts his body out of the roof pulling out his 9mm. Cocking it back he fires rounds into two of their chest, and fires at the other two hitting them dead in the face. After surely knowing they were die, he looks down at Naomi hiding in the back seat making sure she is ok and not in danger. Getting back in the car he said in relief, "I think that is all of them, you can get back into the front seat again unless you are still scared." Kai looked at Naomi with a smile.
"I..I hope so…" Naomi said with her eyes slightly consumed with fear, then when they thought it was over, moaning noises louder than the ones before started roaring in the air. "I think they are…back."
"Shit that's has to be like 100 of them!" Kai once again puts his body out of the sunroof looking at all the zombies around him coming from cars, the trees, and some even climbing over the roadblock. Shooting any one of them that got close to their car he knew they couldn't kill them all. One after another they kept falling but the numbers were increasing faster and faster until they all surrounded the car shaking it and some tried climbing on the car before Kai shoot them making them fall onto the other zombies around them.
A sound of a helicopter was in the distant, Naomi heard it so she told Kai, "I think there might be a helicopter in the air we can get help from!" she jumps into the driver's seat honking the horn as long as she can, trying to get the helicopter's attention. The helicopter turns and starts heading their way, as it approaches her, she notices that it isn't slowing down but speeding up and flying to low. Noticing this she turns the gear into reverse, then floors it backwards making Kai hit his head on the car and dropping his gun. Kai's motionless body falls into the back seat as the helicopter hits the highway sliding towards their car, crashing against zombies and cars making them fly all over the place then 'CRASH' the helicopter crashes into their car making it hit a tree nearly splitting the car into two. After the crash all the zombies were dead (again) and all the cars were totaled even theirs which was flipped upside down with all the windows broke.
Naomi barely able to move looks at Kai as his motionless bloody body wasn't even in the car any more then she slowly closes her eyes and blacks out.
Hope you all like it.
