I have been reading the reviews, and I think this for the best that I must take some time and rewrite most if not all the chapters, I know that you guys feel disappointed at my current work. I will also agree with you guys as I rushed most of it and had not put that much effort in the chapters. The most important reason why I am doing this is for me to grow as a writer, I hope that you guys would understand. I will leave the 3rd chapter has my currently greatest mistake and will learn from it.

-Shrimpknight