well, even though no one has posted any comments on ch. 5 im still gonna update...

Chapter 6: The Hivolt jolt! pt. 2

Vent was free falling through the air to the outskirts of the Hirosho company headquarters. Vent deployed a parachute He landed on the ground safely. Vent undid the parachute straps, and the giant bowl-shaped parachute fell to the ground. Vent then looked forward. "What...What happened here!?" Vent shouted. The air around him was filled with death and destruction. Bodies were strewn all across the compund of the Hirosho company's outer gates. Then something burned inside of Vent. He fell to his knees and grabbed his chest. Vent was breathing heavily and and was having a terrible flashback of the day his mother was kiiled...

12 Years ago...

"Mommy! I wanna go no that ride next!" A nine year-old Vent said to his strikingly beautiful mother. His mother was in her mid 30's but showed it in no way. She had long silky brunette hair and was wearing a medium length jean skirt with a white top. "Alright Vent, hold mommy's hand" She said. The two walked happily to a ride that had small tea cup-shaped ride that spun around slowly. "One ticket please" A musky man said. He was very greasy looking and had an unshaved beard. Vent's mother handed the man a ticket. He opened the gate and turned his head and spit his gum out. Vent and Luna (Ven't mom) walked through the gate and took a seat in a vibrantly colored tea cup. Then, the ride started... and then ended as fast as had started. The two got off and walked over to a lunch stand. They got their food and sat down at a somewhat dirty whit table. Luna took a napkin and wiped the table down quickly. Then in the distance an explosion and screaming was heard. "Mommy? What was that?" Vent asked scared. "Come on Vent, we need to go!" Luna said hastely grabbing her sons hand and pulling him away.

The two were running through the fai grounds that was thrown into panic. Reploids had invaded and were on a rampage. Bodies were hitting the ground like flies. The reploids were laughing and were gaining sick torture from the deaths they were causing. Then a few started to gain on Luna and Vent. "Vent! Go hide! NOW!!" Luna screamed. Vent ran behind a consession stand and watched his mother in horror. "Look what we have here boys! A nice one!" One of the reploids shouted. Then three others rushed over. "You were right Repto. She is nice." Another one said. Then, the leader walked over. He had a scar down one of his eyes. He pulled out his sabre and pointed at Luna's neck. "Do it boss! Do it!" Repto shouted. Then the leader impaled Vent's mom through the neck. She fell to the ground with a pool around her. "Come! We leave!" The leader said. "MOMMY!!" Vent said running to his mother's corpse. Tears flew from his eyes and hit the ground like little raindrops...

Vent's eyes started to roll into the back of his head and were twitching. Saliva rolled down the side of his mouth. His head hit the ground.

--Gaurdian Base--

"Prarie! Something's wrong! Ven't vitals are spiking! I think he's dying!" One of the people on the virtual keyboards said. Prarie rushed over. "Pull up his vitals! NOW!" Prarie demanded. Then on the big virtual screen in the front of the window, and graph like picture showed up. There were four meters. Blood pressure, Heart rate, Mental and Physical. All of the bars for the numbers were fluxuating. "The average should be at least 58.76, His are up in the 100's! We need to get him out of there!" The keyboard person said again. Then Vent touched her earpiece. "Vent!? VENT!! Are you there!?" Prarie shouted. All she heard was horrible gasping. Prarie put her fist atop he heart. "Pull him outta there...Now!" Prarie said with tears falling from her eyes. "Affirmitive! Activating physical transport!..."

The keyboard girl said. "ERROR. PHYSICAL TRANSPORT SIGNAL DISABLED. ELECRTICAL FEILD DETECTED. SIGNAL JAMMED." The computer said. "FUCK!!" Praire shouted. Everyone jumped in there seat a little. Then a transmission acceptance message appeared. "Accept message!" Prarie roared. Then a video appeared on the screen. "Awww... Is my little jamming signal causing you problems?" A green beaked reploid said. "Hivolt! You sonofabitch! Take down the signal!" Prarie yelled at the screen. "Sorry, can't do that. Then that would ruin my fun! And I just love to have fun! Oh! I almost forgot to mention, I sent some of my boys out to get your little friend that came down here. So hope you enjoy the guilt you have when I murder him! MWAHAHAHAAAHHAAA!..." Then the transmission was cut.

Send someone down there!" Praire demanded. "Im sorry lady Prarie. We can't do that. We are in an unstable air feild. If we even try to land or send anyone out there, they are gonna get fried by the electrical storm!" One of the typist' said. Then prarie turned around and fell to her knees. Tears rolled from her eyes. "Vent... I'm so sorry..."

Well, sorry its short, but anyways R&R!! Please review!