An Electrifying Journey
Chapter 7 - The bully
Hello guys! I just want to say a few things...
Firstly, thanks for your reviews.
Second, I will try to make as much fanfics before I go overseas.
Thirdly, I know it is similar to some fics out there but I read A LOT of them and sometimes used the idea from them so basically its a combination.
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Now...INTO EQUESTRIA!
"Davis?" the human shouted in shock.
"W-what are you doing here?" he asked.
"W...wow Bryan, I was not expecting you to come." I said in astonishment.
Bryan is my cousin. He is pretty much a bully, always picking on those smaller than him...including me. Even though he is 16 year he still acts like a damn 8 year old and whats worse is that he HATES girly stuff ... I think he will hate Equestria too.
"So your telling me you freaking know that I'm coming to this ass shit place?" He shouted.
Princess Luna backed up in fear.
"And whose the blue horse?" he asked, pointing at Luna.
"Damn she even has a moon tattoo behind her. What's up with those?"
"Bryan ... sadly you were transported into this place called ...Equestria." I explained with hesitation.
"Pffft What? What kind of lame name is that? And what's up with these ugly ass horses with dresses?" He yelled, pointing at the crowd.
"Ummm their ponies. They are residents here. Now calm down please or you will be restrained." I commanded, trying to protect these ponies.
"Calm down? How can I f$$king calm down? And what you gonna do if I don't calm down? You'll ask these mules to trample me? Let me see them try." He yelled.
The crowed got mad and started to shout back to the ponies.
"Ugggh!" I moaned. "Guards." I looked at the royal guards who in response, tackled Bryan. Sadly, due to his sheer size and weight, he was only push aside.
"That the best you got?" He shouted and punched one of the guards and he fell with a thud and blood started trickling out of his mouth.
"Princess! Use you magic to restrain him!" I alerted the princess and her horn began to glow and Bryan was lifted up in the air.
"Guards! Open the carriage doors!"
And so they did, the carriage door was opened and Bryan was locked in the carriage.
"Hey let me out you dip shits!" He cursed, shaking the metal bars of the carriage.
We quickly ran...well they galloped back to the palace. Where he was handcuffed and brought to the throne room.
"Y-you know him?" Luna asked nervously.
"Yes and sadly he was the one chosen to come here." I sighed.
"H-he scares me. What if he hurts Tia like how he hurt the guard just now?" I rubbed her back, trying to calm her down.
Bryan was thrown into the throne room where princess Celestia was waiting.
"So is this your human friends?" Celestia asked.
"Oh my god they talk? What the hell is this?" Bryan yelled back at the princess.
"Nope ... not just a friend...my cousin and a bad one too." I sighed, kneeling.
Bryan looked at me a laughed. "Hey gay boy! She's a f$$king horse you f$$king dumba$$!"
I looked at him in irritation.
"Excuse me!" Princess Celestia shouted, standing up and glared at Bryan.
"Aww what happened whitey? You care so much about this gay son?" He yelled at the princess and spat at the floor near me.
"What did you call me?" Celestia yelled.
Bryan glared at Celestia. "...whitey..." he challenged.
"Why y-" Princess Celestia was cut off by Bryan.
"What! Why! Yah I called you whitey! What are you gonna do about it?"
"How dare you!" Shouted Celestia. "Guards! Send him to the dungeon!" She yelled at the guards who immediately push him out of the throne room and towards the dungeon.
"I'm so sorry about this Princess. He always acts like that and he also hates your show back in my world too. Maybe he will calm down by tomorrow." I explained.
"(Sigh) I hope so. Or else somepony might get hurt. Maybe you will be too." She sighed and walked to the balcony.
"Well, Luna its time." Luna stood beside her on the balcony and together, they began to set the sun and raise the moon.
Meanwhile in the dungeon...
"Hey let go off me! Ooof!" Shouted Bryan as he was thrown into the dungeon room.
He looked around and saw a wooden board which he thought was the bed and the ground was dirt instead of stone and the only light source was the single hanging lamp outside the dungeon room.
F$$k this sh!t I'm breaking out. He thought to himself as he tried to break the metal bars.
"EEErrrr...CURSE YOU DAVIS!" He yelled, his voice echoing down the hallway.
"Aaaahhhh ... I lay on the bed. We finished eating dinner and I was now feeling sleepy.
I heard a knock on the door and Luna came in with a book in her mouth.
Uuuugggghhhhh not now! I'm too tired to teach!
She placed the book on the bed and told me "Ill stay here tonight. Anyway, I have nothing to do in my room when you slept there last night."
I saw her hop on the bed and sat beside me and began to read the book. Oh thank god. I closed my eyes and said "Okay, wake me up when you need ok? Goodnight."
"Alright. Good night Davis."
At the dungeon at midnight...
"Screw this!" yelled Bryan as he tried to bend the metal bar. He noticed that the bar bended far from its original position.
"Oh yeah! This is freaking ponyland! I could do anything!" he noticed and began to bend the bar much more such that it is big enough for him to fit in between it.
He squeezed in between the bars and ran up the stairs and out of the dungeon. He laughed an evil laugh.
There was a guard doing his daily routine and took notice of Bryan.
"Hey you!" He yelled, stopping Bryan in his tracks. Bryan smirked and punch the guard so hard that he fell to the ground unconscious.
"Haha! Piece of cake. I'll out of here in no time!"
Bryan continued his way out of the palace, knocking out the guards along the way. Eventually he reached the castle garden, he ran to the pond. One of the guards there saw him and ran after him. Bryan dodge and grabbed the guard and threw him into the pond, knocking out the guard.
Bryan looked at the pond and saw one of the fishes there was laying dead under the guard.
Back in Davis's room...
I opened my eyes wide and sat up and started to pant.
"Davis? Are you okay?" Luna asked, she was still beside Davis but this time with another book.
I continued to pant and looked at Luna.
"Y-yeah... just h-had a nightm-mare." I panted and walked to the balcony, followed by Luna.
I leaned forward and rested my arms on the balcony ledge and stared down at the garden.
Luna stood beside me. "Its okay, it's just a nightmare." she comforted, putting her hoove on my shoulder.
I squinted to the pond and gasped when I saw a guard laying unconscious in it.
"Trouble!" I gasped before running out of my room and down to the garden.
"Wait!" Luna beckoned, galloping behind me.
When I was in the garden, I began walking to the pond with Luna beside her.
"What's wrong?" asked Luna.
"That." I pointed towards the guard laying unconscious in the pond. Luna ran towards him and examined him.
"Oh no" she reached out under the guard and sobbed at what she found. A orange coy, dead.
I kneeled beside her and brought her head close to me and I began to comb her mane with my other hand.
"Who could have done this?" she shouted with tears trickling down her cheeks.
Guards came running behind us. "Princess! What's going on? Who did this?" one of them asked.
I widen my eyes in astonishment. "Quick! Check the dungeon!" I ordered.
The lead guard nodded and sent 3 guards down.
I looked back at Luna who shut her eyes tightly, trying to hold back her fears.
After a few minutes of waiting, the three guards returned. "Sir! Someone broke out!" One of them warned.
I clenched my fist in anger...Bryan!
I turned to the lead guard who was awaiting my command. "Quick! Bring everyone into alert status! send all of your men to lock down the castle! No one comes in or out!" He nodded and signalled to his men, who ran into separate directions.
"Sir! We found some guards knocked out in the castle!"
I told the guard to do it fast and he ran away after my command.
"Come princess, its too dangerous here." I pulled her away from the pond and escorted her into the castle.
Bryan, you better not harm anypony else or hell will come to you.
Sorry for the violence!
Please I need some reviews!
Should I make them fight each other? or should I make Bryan friendly and stuff like that?
I will wait tommorow!
Until then
-Yellowdart1