An Electrifying Journey

Chapter 20 - Partners

Haha! I loved the reviews you guys are giving it's rather entertaining. BUNCH OF SHOUTOUTS

taz2723: Nice that you added Thomas to the story and now that they have both been put in a coma by electricity you can say it is a really(bad joke inbound)electrifying journey!(Sorry I really had to say that no matter how bad that joke was)anyway loved the chapters and looking forward to the next one.

I actually had that electrifying thing from the start xD if anyone of you actually read how Davis went to Equestria, you could have figured that earlier LOL. Thanks for the compliment really appreciated.

guardian10: Nice work you did on the last two chapters. So, are Davis, Thomes, Sam and Bryan going to die? And wasn't Thomas' name originally Travis?

No, his name was originally Thomas. I am going to think about it first. Thanks for the compliment :)

eric peterson: good story i have to say this is one of the best stories i've read please write more chapters when you have the time.

I will try my best :)

Rainbow's son: I GOT MENTIONED?

WOW!

was NOT expecting that at all ...

like this chapter btw and am looking forward to the rest (as usual)

Huh I think you replied rather late xD Glad to see your reviews again.

This took up 300 words! But you guys need a reply. Also, there is this one message that gave me an idea that at the very end of the story, I will ensue a battle between haters and bronies, I think that would make sense :)

Now, back to the story...

"Okie dokie!" Pinkie smiled as she munched down some cupcakes. "Cool, what time will the party be? I asked, drinking up the cup of coffee. Pinkie put her hoof under her chin. "I think at 6 in the evening tomorrow and it is the perfect night too!" I noticed her eyes sparkle.

"Oh? Why so?" I asked, taking a bite of my chocolate muffin. Pinkie smiled. "Well tomorrow night is wh-" She was cut off by Luna who shouted "The annual meteor shower!" Everybody looked at her in curiosity. "Meteor shower?" I asked.

Luna nodded. "Yes, this meteor shower happens 2 days after the Gala every year. I am not sure why but everypony stays up until midnight to watch the meteors zoom past the skies!"

I remembered something now, "Oh yeah! There is this one episode that shows Twilight and all her friends watching the meteor shower in the sky! It was an awesome episode!" Sam nodded her head in agreement. Bryan kind of got confused.

"It is set then, the party will be from 6 in the evening till 11 30 at night. So that everypony can have time to settle down before the night show." Pinkie agreed and hopped away to make the invitations... again.

Thomas listened at every word Twilight said. They were having a lessons on magic. Even though Thomas did not know some of the things that she said, she would explain to him. After her long lecture, they stopped and Thomas said "That is an awesome topic, I love magic. Back on earth, I always want to be a unicorn when I am a pony in Equestria. And that's one reason why your favourite pony." Thomas winked at Twilight.

Twilight blushed slightly. "Thanks Thomas. What are your other reasons?" she asked, inching closer to Thomas to listen to him.

"Well... Firstly, because you are a unicorn and you learn magic and is good at it too I admire that. Second, you LOVE learning, same as me, back on Earth I loved science, which is something like magic. Thirdly, I love you coat, its purple, my favourite colour. And lastly, you look the most prettiest among all ponies, including the princesses." Thomas said, putting his hand on Twilight's cheek.

Twilight blushed can now be seen from a far. "Thomas... that is the most sweetest thing I have ever heard, its like, you like every part of me." She went to hug Thomas. "And I like that... I like you..."

Thomas's heart was beating against his ribcage and his body was burning as thought he was caught in a fire. Twilight's body was so warm and cozy. Hugging her feels like hugging a soft, warm cloud. "I-I like you too Twilight..." He smiled as Twilight pulled away and smiled at him.

They stared at each other for a while, looking deep into each other's eyes before they continued their lesson.

"Hey Bryan." I called to Bryan, who was finishing his cookie. He looked at me and gave me the 'what?' look. "How did you become a alicorn?" I asked, dipping my cookie into my coffee and eating it.

He smiled, "Good question, actually, I am not an alicorn, I am just a pegasus. Celestia just used her magic to transform me into an alicorn. I could control this horn too I could make it disappear..." He frowned and suddenly, his horn just vanished. "...and could make it re-appear." Then I saw his horn fade back in.

"...Wait a minute, if Celestia could transform you into an alicorn, could she transform me into a pony?" I asked, looking at him with interest.

"Actually... I think it could work! I should ask Tia as soon as were back in the castle." Luna chirped happily, her eyes sparkling. "Sweet! And I could turn back into a human too right?" I added, looking at Luna who just gave me a shrug.

I slouched but still, my heart was filled with content as I thought about all the things I could do as a pony.

We finished our snacks and headed back to Twilight's library. We I entered, I was shocked to see Thomas and Twilight on the sofa, Thomas put his right am around her shoulder as she taught him something. "What happened while we were gone?" I asked, startling them.

Thomas turned and immediately stood up, Twilight just remained in her position. "Oh! Hey Davis! How long you were there?"

"Just came." I shrugged.

"Cool, Twilight was just teaching me about magic, thats all. Beads of perspiration glistened on his forehead. I gave him a curious look. "Ooooook."

I went to Sam and Twilight 's room where everypony and human was happily chat with one another. We listened to songs from Sams iphone and Thomas remembered something. "Oh yeah!" Thomas was digging his pocket and fished out a iphone but he was not satisfied he continued digging until a small purple box came out from his pocket.

"Davis, this is for you." He smiled. I took the small box from his and smiled. "Thanks Thomas." I opened the box to see a small necklace. I pulled it out and saw a small wooden carving of an alicorn who looked like Luna.

I grinned widely "This is so cool! Thanks Davis!" He shrugged and smiled "I knew you liked Luna so much so I went to the school's workshop to make this piece to give in the hospital but I think it followed me somehow."

"Look Luna!" I smiled as I showed Luna and she received it with her hooves. "You liked me ever since before you came here?" She asked, her eyes sparkle as she looked at the wooden necklace."

I nodded then Thomas smiled "He actually had a secret crush on you for your information." I blushed a bit then I heard Sam speak out, "Yeah, he gets obsessed with you on Earth." Bryan nodded his head. "Yeah, I heard him mutter your name sometimes back on Earth."

Luna's eyes sparkled and she had a cute grin on her face. She pounced on me and we fell down to the floor with a thud, she kissed my lips for a short second, I was shocked and ignored the pain at my back. The feeling of her lips was... electrifying. (BOOOYEAH another joke xD)

She whispered, "I love you so much Davis." I smiled and replied, "Me too Luna, me too." She came closer to me until I could feel her breathing. I came closer to her too and soon, our lips were connected. We held the kiss, Enjoying each other 's warmth and love. I never thought of anything else but her, and only her.

Mmmmmm... cheesy :3

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-Yellowdart1