An Electrifying Journey
Chapter 30 -
Ok, I am currently experiencing something that I wish not to experience, judges...
There's a lot of pm's on my writing and stuff like that which I kind of have like a little bit of trouble doing.
1) I cant go back and change everything, it will mess up the current chapters.
2) I am short of time as my studies are getting to me now so I cant really re read.
3) I post only 1 or 2 chapters per day which is making some of your lives difficult.
4) I am SERIOUSLY having sooo much homework, tests, quizzes, projects, etc. So forgive me for my mistakes okay?
Next thing I want to say.
1)Thanks again for MOST of you who support me, I know I make grammar and spelling errors but I am really sorry okay?
2)Okay... I need some help with the ponies.
3) I got some fans following me on facebook, I think 8. Which is good. Very good.
4) Maybe you guys can help with the ideas, I do not really want a war to start, it goes over many of the ponies' personalities, but maybe I will find a way to make problems.
Next important thing = I will update this chapter, I am now caught up with my work and some family stuff I am sorry but I will write when I can.
Hope you guys understand, I have a life and it needs my concentration on it. I will update the story soon.
-Yellowdart1
Celestia giggled and looked at me with a smile on her face "You were elected Prince just today." I stood shocked, very shocked. "Elected? Who elected me to be prince?" I sat at the small steps leading to the throne. I looked at Luna and my parents chatting amongst one another. Celestia sat beside me and at her sister "I did." I opened my mouth but no words came out. I cleared my throat and asked "Why? What did I do to deserve this title?" "You made my sister happy. I have never seen her so happy before and I believe that together, we can rule Equestria. I do not want to cause trouble between humans and ponies so I decided that the humans should deserve a ruler as well. And I bet you are the one perfect for such a job. Don't you like that?" She asked, looking at me. I smiled slightly "Of course. Of course. Its just, I am afraid that I might not be able to handle whatever you and Luna do. Like, make laws, and ruling the entire country a-and" Celestia cut me off "Do not worry, you will learn sooner or later." She comforted.
I stood up and walked to the threesome, who now have finished their conversation. Luna hugged me and I hugged her back, "What were you guys talking about?" Luna looked up at me, I realised that she was just inches shorter than me now. "Oh, nothing. Just bonding." I heard a knock on the door and Spire went in "Princess!" He looked at me and then said "Prince! Sam, Thomas and Bryan have returned with some news to give." Princess Celestia nodded and they came in. My mother stood up and asked "Sam? Thomas? B-bryan?" She looked at me with confused eyes. I nodded to her and my father and her looked back to the door which now had three figures standing on it. I saw Thomas, Bryan in the middle and then Sam.
"Were back princess!" Bryan said and together they walked in, they stopped looking at my parents "Auntie Susan? Uncle Peter?" Thomas and Bryan both followed up saying in unison, "What? Where?" Susan walked to Sam who was jogging to her. My mother placed her hand on Sam's cheeks. My mother is her favourite aunt by the way. They both hugged each other, my father approached Thomas and shook his hands "What are doing here Mr. Calm?" Thomas asked, shaking my father's hand vigorously. "We were sent here from heaven because we died on Earth." Sam gasped and Bryan asked "You died? How?" My mother stared at Bryan for a while and asked "Bryan? Is that you?" My mom asked, kneeling to get a better look at the white pegasus... yeah pegasus, he has no horns.
Bryan shrugged "Yeah, I guess your right." My father chuckled and said "Wow champ your a pony." Bryan seemed to blush in embarrassment. "Yeah, Bryan. Where did the manly part of you go?" My mother, said laughing. "Taken by her." She said, nodding to Celestia. Somehow I found that to be uncomfortably wrong.
Okay... at least I tried to write SOME parts. I will continue when I can.
-Yellowdart1
-To be updated-