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Renesmee

I meet the pack

Outside the wolf pack was a bunch of muscled men and one gangly 15 year old boy. The two bigger guys were wrestling each other.

"Collin and Brady get off each other. Seth you were supposed to keep them out of trouble." Jacob said.

"Sorry Jake they insisted." Seth said. Collin and Brady quit fighting and straightened themselves out.

"Sorry Jake Brady's too annoying." Collin said pushing Brady.

"What ever Collin." Brady said.

"So this is Renesmee?"

"How do you-" I start.

"Wolf telepathy. We all almost vomited when he imprinted." Seth said.

"We'll be saying the same about you when you imprint Clearwater." Jake said. "Renesmee this is Seth, Brady, David, Ethan, Austin, Alex, Micheal, John, Andres,Connor, Travis, Sean, Jason, and Tyler."

"Wait Jason?" I ask. The same kid I meet at lunch?

"Yeah just made the pack yesterday." Jason said. I couple wolves patted his back like they were happy he did.

"So Renesmee your half-human?" David asked.

"Yeah."

"Jake told all about it when he left." David said then shivered like shaking off a bad thought.

"Alright guys you can shut up now."Jake said.

"Right. So Renesmee how fast can you run?" Jason taunted.

"Why don't find out." I said back disappearing into the thick green forest. I heard their whoops then the tearing of cloth before hearing their paws on the forest ground. Jacob was soon next to me in his wolf form. I smiled at him before running faster using my extra strength to take me faster. We reached the river and I leaped onto the other end before any other wolf did. Jake and his pack stopped at the edge looking at the water doubtfully.

"What the wolf scared of water?" I tease. The Jason wolf which was dark grey took the challenge and jumped to the other side. The rest of the pack followed and soon we were running again. I caught a wiff of mountain lion and rushed in that direction still thirsty from my cancelled hunting trip. When the lion came into view I pounced on the lion my teeth aimed at it's neck. When my teeth sunk into it's flesh i couldn't get enough. The lion tried to fight back put it's talons were like someone tapping me it was drained I shoved it away and strightened my now claw marked shirt. I look up to see the pack watching me intently. The Jacob wolf was very nervous ready to pounce any second but relaxed when he saw I was okay. Geez was he going to be as protective as my father?

"Sorry got distracted." I mumbled. A deep chuckle came from Seth and Jacob growled at him. I was next to Jake in a second and put my hand on his fur sending him a silent message of what Seth said. Jacob jumped from the contact and then phased back to human form.

"What was that?" Jacob said.

"What?"

"How come everytime you touch me I get some kind of picture or your voice in my head." Jacob said. " It happened when I was on you in the forest and then now."

"Oh that's just my gift. I can send people images or have conversations when i touch them. But only if I want them too." I explain

"You need to tell me before I think I'm going crazy." Jacob said. He looked at the sky which started to turn purple. "We should get back before your Mom and Dad get mad at me. Climb on my back." Jake said before phasing. I climbed on and I fit perfectly like I was made to fit on him. He barked an order to the pack before running back home faster than I have been running. Once we reached home I jumped off Jacob's back and he phased into a human form.

"You guys do a quick patrol before I get back." Jacob said. Seth led some wolves west while Collin led some other's east. I walked into the house to see my parents on the couch trying to hide their anger. Hopefully it wasn't at us.

"We have you guys been?" Bella asked. I winced leaving Jacob to explain.

"Sorry my pack got excited and challenged Renesmee for a running contest. Then Renesmee did a little hunting." Jacob explained. Bella relaxed a little but she was still tense for a vampire.

"We told you not to go anywhere." Bella said.

"It's my fault. I got thristy so I took it as an oppurtunity to hunt since it was cancelled." i said trying to save Jake. Bella sighed.

"Fine. Go on up to bed Renesmee. Jacob we need to talk." Bella said. I reluctantly left glancing at Jacob a couple of times before dissapearing into my room. After changing my dirty shirt and throwing it away i take a shower and change into some night clothes. I was very excited for tommorow so i could try and spend some time with Jake. But the excitment turned to calm then sleepy and I knew Jasper was behind it.

"Thanks Jasper." I said sarcastically. I heard him chuckle before falling into a dreamless sleep.