AN: Hey guys sorry I didn't get to actually upload this on the same day :P that's the last time I promise to upload something on a deadline hehe oh well I hope you guys aren't too mad though it does mean this chap is a little bit longer! I wish to thank Zen007 cause I was starting to think nobody would like it! lol oh well heh :P here goes

Chapter two: last call

As Brooklyn left the ally with the world renown criminal behind she took off in a full out sprint as she could tell she was going to be late getting home. Riddick followed on silent feet and watched as she slipped carefully through a doorway of a dilapidated apartment complex and leaned against a nearby wall to listen to the hushed conversation going on just inside the doorway.

"Brooklyn! Where have you been? Already you have lost me money tonight, for that you aren't to come back till you have a thousand creds! Get me my money girl or I'll call the mercs on your sorry ass and tell them you killed your mother," the smug sounding voice was nasally and had a slight whine to it and made you think of a greasy creepy janitor in a mental health institute, or the crazy house as it is more widely known.

Riddick frowned thinking he was going to have a kid that was willing to kill even her own mother before he heard the panicked exclamation from Brooklyn, "What do you mean? Mom's fine! I didn't kill her at all and I never would!"

There was the sound of flesh hitting flesh and a slight thud of someone falling against a wall or counter, "you do not talk to me that way girl! Your mother is just a whore and if I decide she is no longer worthy of my presence I will kill her if I want to, you taking the fall would just be the icing on the cake! Now get out and do your rounds whore, I will not tolerate your ugly face any longer. GET OUT!"

Hearing scrambling coming from within Riddick sank back into the shadows even more, and watched as a grim faced Brooklyn slipped from behind the grungy door and set off at a quick pace to where supposedly her rounds usually took place. Stalking after the most assuredly not ugly girl was amusing as she kept tensing the muscles in her neck as if she could tell someone was tailing her but she was determined not to turn and check it out.

Walking to her normal 'work' area next to a dim street light Brook leaned against the pole and made sure only a sliver of her stomach was showing, knowing from experience that it intrigued more men when they were left guessing, but also showing at the same time that she had a very fit body and her tan was seemingly everywhere. Waiting was half the work, as her nerves sometimes would make her panic and tense up causing prospective customers to flee. As this was sometimes an indication of someone with the crautch, a decidedlyrepulsive disease that was highly contagious and caused the organs to literally melt over the space of six to nine months. She tried not to do so and made sure her whole body stayed relaxed.

When her first prospective customer came around she slid her hand sensually up his arm and whispered in his ear, "I am clean and tight and like it rough. I might be expensive but I'm also the only one on this side of town clear of any diseases I have a test that shows exactly that and you can see for yourself. I'm also very good at making it stay interesting and will keep your attention if you take me tonight. My limit is two hours and I can make it the best lay you've ever had. If you like your whores younger," here Brook paused hesitantly and Riddick tensed slightly. "I have a younger sister who is a virgin and clean as well. Though for her it is triple the amount."

The prospective customer by this point had a raging hard on and had to shift himself with a grunt, "I will pay triple for the little slut if I can tie her down. How much?"

Cringing slightly Brook took a quivering deep breath and whispered, "two thousand five hundred creds for two hours, and you are to prepay and put it in a credit chip into a pre-arrangement lock which will only open once the you are satiated and will only open for Keelie, my little sister." By this time Riddick was furious with the girl for being willing to sacrifice her little sister in order to get money and tensed as he followed the two up to a nearby hotel room. Stalking into a nearby shadow he waited for the moronic girl to leave the hotel room again and shakily make her way to the communal bathroom down the hall. When he slipped in behind her he almost moved forward before he noticed Brook was making sure there wasn't any surveillance or people in the room before slipping her clothes off. Cocking his head to the side he took in the fact that, yes, she was tanned in every place on her body. Taking in the pert c-cup breasts as they rose and fell with each shuddering breath she took he smirked as he let his eyes freely roam her body. When she started shrinking he slid further back into the shadows in shock, a morpher! They were thought to be extinct! No way could this girl be one! She should have shown up on the proximity scans done every year universe wide.

Looking at the now nine-year-old child it was obvious she had somehow found a way around the scan. He watched as she finished shrinking and pulled a small school girl outfit from her bag and put it on before packing her clothes back into the bag and made her way back to the hotel room. Slipping into the room he settled into the darkest corner and watched the girl, now Keelie, play the innocent child and blush and shiver under the disgusting mans hands.

"Yes, you are delightful aren't you? Do you know what is about to happen child?" As the whispery excited voice slithered around the room 'Keelie' shyly nodded and replied, "Yes sir, I become a woman today!" excitement injected here. "My sister said I could learn how to do her job!" With wide eyes she looked up hopefully at the grungy man, "is she right? Will you show me how to?" Riddick arched an eyebrow at the completely believable acting and settled in to see what would happen.

Chuckling slightly in delight the man picked the child up, laid her on the bed roughly, and started running his hands all over the girl before slowly placing his hand under her skirt, "Yessss, I will show you every aspect of her job tonight and I shall enjoy it very much." Riddick tensed in rage and prepared to spring forwards to drag the disgusting man off of the child in order to one, slice the man open groin to throat and two, shake some sense into the child when a slight movement caught his eye, feeling the urge to laugh he watched as a small hand pulled a syringe from her skirt, plunge it into the mans neck and scramble out from under the 'man'. As she got out Riddick saw that the man had managed to rip the childs underwear off of her before she had plunged the needle into him, which seems to have had a hallucinogenic in it causing the man to ram himself down onto the mattress and mutter crude words to where he thought the child was placed.

When the child scrambled into the furthest corner of the room shaking in terror and tears streaming down her face to wait out the drug in order to complete the deal, Riddick thought about showing himself to her to see what her reaction would be but decided against it. As the two sat in the shadows listening, and watching in Keelies case so that she didn't miss her cue to get into the restraints connected to the headboard, the grunts and thumps filled the room. Finally, when Keelie saw that the mans left butt cheek jumped three times in succession, obviously the cue, she made her way to the bed with a small dark bag clutched tightly to her chest. She slid under the man and placed first her legs into the restraints, then spilled a dark fluid, a slight sniff told him it was blood, so that it covered her vagina and legs, on the bed and on the mans leaking cock, before placing her hands into the restraints and morphing her body to look as if it had newly forming bruises and scratches on her body to make it look realistic. The foul man finally came and 'pulled out' coming out of the drug induced hallucination, patted the childs cheek, placed a bruising kiss on Keelie's mouth, even though she tensed up and more sobs forced there way out of her, and exited the room only pausing long enough to make sure he couldn't get his money back, and with a final grunt looked longingly back at the child now struggling to get out of her restraints and left.

Riddick watched to make sure she made it out of the restraints before following the man into a nearby ally swiftly sliding his shiv home into the mans back and shoved him in a dumpster. Making his way back towards the apartment he watched her for the rest of the night as she did the same to multiple customers as both herself, Keelie, and an older version of herself she called Jasmine. Each time she charged exorbitant prices and each time the customers checked to see if they could take it back before leaving the room.

At the end of the night Riddick watched as Brooklyn transferred a thousand and twenty two credits onto a blank chip and added the rest to a chip hidden in her snowflake necklace around her neck. As Brook made her way home she made it so she was limping and looked as if she had had several rough customers and blacked her eye out. She didn't have to make herself smell like sex as she hadn't showered after the last one and knew her dad would want evidence that she had actually gone through with it.

As she stepped into the apartment she saw her dad wanking in the kitchen, she paled as she heard what he was saying, "Damn bitch should've shut the fuck up! Did I say she could talk? NO, I didn't! Who gives a fuck if she needed to use the bathroom she should've fucking held it! I needed her fucking hole so she should've opened up and asked fucking how wide would you like me!" When Brook shakily looked around the corner of the island counter she saw her mother sprawled out on the floor with a hole in her head and a puddle of blood around her. Horror and grief crossed her face before turning stony as she placed the chip on the counter.

"I got the money you requested sir, I'll be in my room," getting a grunt in reply she took that as a dismissal and steadily walked to her room. Then she shoved her way into her bathroom, shut herself inside, turned the shower on full blast and let out a nearly silent keening sob collapsing to the ground and rocking back and forth eyes wide as tears slipped unnoticed down her face.

Riddick leaned against the wall of her bedroom and listened to the quiet outpouring of grief from within the bathroom coming from a girl who had obviously stayed strong and found an alternate way to get the money demanded of her by falsely whoring herself out and if he wasn't mistaken had made that hallucinogenic herself. Listened as that same girl broke slightly at the loss of her mother by an asshole of a father. He knew it was only slightly broken as Brook only allowed herself a few minutes of grief before she realized the time and scrambled into the shower and came out wrapped only in a towel and started frantically packing her things into a duffel bag. Riddick watched as she threw multiple shivs, all hand made, several bottles of water, freeze dried food that only needed a drop of water per bag, various sized clothes and any personal effects she might wish to take as well as hesitantly adding a lock box into the bottom corner of the bag.

Brook ran back to the bathroom, picked up her clothes and set a decontamination bulb to go off in thirty seconds, which would get rid of any of her DNA in the bath room, and got dressed in clean clothes in the bedroom before setting another bulb to go off and grabbed her bag and made her way out the window heading to the space port. As she wildly shook she made her way through the streets she got several propositions before she in an impatient move threw her hood up and picked up the pace.

At this Riddick decided she would be fine and made his way quickly back to his ship noticing the coming daylight. Coming to his ship he noticed a slight blinking light only visible to his eyes on the underside of the ship alerting him of a break in, he quietly made his way into the ship and noticed the presence of eight men stashed in places hidden around the ship. He crossed the threshold into his control room and got a flash bomb for his efforts, roaring in pain and rage he snapped and flung one of his shivs towards an area he knew one of the men to have been hiding. Moving quickly he found another one and sliced his jugular wide open. By this time the flash bomb had completely faded and it was dark once more except for the flashes of gun fire, so using this to his advantage Riddick quickly disposed of two more of the now known mercs. Then he was quickly barraged on four sides by the rest of the mercs, hit with multiple tranqs and when he still managed to take out two more though a lot slower than before he felt and heard several more tranqs hit him followed by another round and taking one more swipe which left only one merc left Riddick heard a growl of frustration followed by a quick blow to the head and then, darkness.

Brook heard the gunfire and the grunts coming from within the ship she was supposed to be on, before it went silent then, finally, there was cursing as a man with sandy blonde hair and blue eyes came stomping out of the ship with a scowl on his face followed by an anti gravity stretcher with Riddick strapped to it, shackled, and with a bit in his mouth. Eyes wide in disbelief she made sure the shadows covered her before she quickly followed the man as he made his way to another much larger ship called the Hunter Gratzner, and loaded his new 'prisoner' onto his transport. She wavered for a moment in indecision before making her way to the ticket booths and buying a ticket onto the ship.