Hello! It's me, Nr36 here again! Today, I am starting to wonder if any of the fanfiction writers out there have an idea for me to put into my story. Well, if you plan on participating, here are the rules:
1. Your idea must contain strictly Mario series characters.
2. Your review must view the good, bad and ugly of this chapter and your idea.
2 1/2: Your idea must contain a disease and an item Mario and Toad use.
3. The idea must be original and not ripped from another writer or a cliche (i.e. doppelganger, 'I am your father' e.t.c.).
4. Your entry must be in English; I don't want to have to use Google Translate!
5. The deadline is in two days from July 6, 2012, at 11:59 P.M, CST.
6. I will accept multiple entries and ideas from multiple people! Good luck!
Ch 2: Electron Shock
Toad gasped as he saw all of the microscopes in the laboratory. There was seemingly only one word that he could force out of his mouth: "Wow!" There was simply no other place like it. "Now," Dr. Mario asked, "do you suppose this was a better idea than bed pan cleaning?" "Yes, it is!", Toad replied. Mario then lead him to a very shiny, expensive-looking object. "This is an electron microscope," the plumber began. "You can see many small things, like viruses and spirochetes with it!" "Well, let me see!" Toad prodded. Mario then said, "Take a good look at those contagions!" Toad then zoomed in and saw three very strange looking viruses: one was red, another was yellow, but the last one was blue! The mushroom then imagined, "I bet these are very common viruses. But what if he got a hold of these viruses? It could mean the end of the Mushroom Kingdom!" But then realized, "Man, am I paranoid or what?" Dr. Mario then spoke more. "Toad, are you finished looking at the viruses?" Toad then replied, "Yes, Mario, " "but what about the rope and a piece of paper?" "I was kidding about that!", Mario responded. Just then, Luigi burst into the room. "Mario, I just got my P.h.D!", he said. Mario then rocketed into the air. "Mama mia! Already? Before long, you will be Dr. Luigi!" "Sorry to interrupt the conversation," Toad announced, "but I am going to check the latest news from triage." "OK.", Mario said.
Mario then resumed his chat with Luigi. "Luigi, what do you plan to specialize in when you finally become the revered 'Dr. Luigi'?" Luigi then replied, "Vascular surgeon." "Oh, wow!" Mario exclaimed. "That is going to be a happy experience for you, I guess." Suddenly, the Mario Bros. heard a very sharp and loud scream. "MAAAAAAAARRRRRIIIOOOOO! LUUUUUUUUUIIIIIIIIGIIIIIIIIII!" Mario then did a double-take and shouted, "What is it, Toad?" Toad then stammered, "M-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-m-MARIO! P-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p-p..." "Well Toad, tell me! What is wrong?" Mario said. "PRINCESS PEACH HAS BEEN KIDNAPPED!" Mario screamed, "MAMA MIA! Not again! When will Bowser learn his lesson?" Luigi also added, "Mario! Toad! Let's-a-go fly over Bowser's Castle and see what he is doing!" Mario then "Good idea, Weeg! Here we go!"
Mario then reached into his lab coat pocket and pulled out three P-Wings. Toad inquired, "Mario, what does the P in P-Wing stand for?" Mario later replied, "Toad, my friend, P stands for Paratroopa, or Patapata if you want to be more specific. Toad then gasped as Mario, himself, and Luigi grew a tail and two raccoon ears. As he looked down, he saw that a large black P was firmly attached to his blue coat. Mario then yelled, "OK now, start flying!" Toad watched in amazement as he started moving his tail and rising into the air. Mario then looked ahead and saw that Bowser's Castle was closer than he thought. "All right," he said. "Have you noticed how our tails make a "BALEEE" sound when when it is moved?" Luigi then replied, "Yes, I definitely have!" "Well," Mario began. "We have activated a silencer to make us quieter, but it only lasts for a few minutes. Let's get to work!" Mario slowly extended his Super Scope 6 until it was aimed at the contemplation room. "Take a very good look at what Bowser is doing, or we may never find out what he is up to!" Luigi whispered. The trio stared downward and began hijacking the conversation below.
"Well, I finally managed to kidnap Princes Peach... AGAIN!" Bowser roared. "Lord Bowser, this time, should be use any new weapons?" asked a Koopatrol. "What? New weapon? You mean, besides brute force?" , Bowser inquired. "Yes.", the Koopatrol repeated. "In that case... Gwhahahahahaha! Mario will stand no chance against 'Infantile Syndrome'!" Bowser said. "But... what should be do with the princess?" a nearby Goomba pondered. "The same thing as always! Trounce Mario, and make her the Queen of the Koopas!" Bowser screamed. The Goomba then ordered, "I think that you are being watched by someone, Lord Bowser!" "What do you mean... AHHH! IT'S MARIO, TOAD, AND GREEN 'STACHE! FIRE THOSE BULLET BILLS!" Bowser replied.
Mario then stated, "Uh-oh... I think we've been spotted!" "What do you mean, 'spotted'?" Luigi asked. Toad then yelled, "LOOK OUT! BULLET BILLS ARE GOING STRAIGHT AT US!" Mario then spotted a bush. He then said, "Quickly! Dive into that bush over there!" After they landed, Luigi said, "I think we are safe now!" But just then, a Hammer Bro. jumped up in front of them! "Guess again!", he said. "AHHH! WE'RE GONNA DIE!" Toad screamed. "Not yet!" Luigi screamed as he jumped forcefully on the Hammer Bro, defeating him. Toad then responded, "YAY! WE'RE SAVED!" "But the princess is still in the hands of Bowser," Mario reminded. "but first, we must report our findings to the triage." Toad then said," All right, Mario." However, in his mind, he doubted that Princess Peach could be saved...
