Hi Guys! So some of the reviews say I'm rushing, and let me explain.
I know I am rushing, it's just that I am a somewhat new fan fiction writer, so I have
a little trouble because I want to put down every thought that comes in my head.
I also rush because I leave again for Paris in 10 days, and then a week after I get back, I
will be leaving for another 20. On top of my AP summer work and a job, I don't have time to
write until 12 or 1 at night, which at then I become tired and tend to rush.
Lastly I want to try to finish the story before the summer ends because I know once school
starts back up I won't be writing anymore or I'll be writing VERY VERY little.
Also the spacing issue, not sure how that worked, I'll try to adjust it. And on Loki's form,
if he is supposed to freeze people at touch, then I just forgot. (sorry! but thanks for the advice)
I'll try to take the corrections