Hey there peoples. I haven't got a lot of buzz about my new story yet but I guess that it will come later. Now I realized that the fanfic was short but it has more words than the original if you check and it seemed bigger on Microsoft word but I will try to make them longer maybe even put two chapters into one if I got enough time. So anyways here is the second chapter and I will also pay close attention when I am proofreading so I don't make any errors like the last chapter.
COLE LEONARDO POV
Me and my brother where walking home when I realized that we weren't going to make it home in time for dinner. "Leo I don't think that we are going to be able to get home at this rate" but Leo being the moronic one (mom says he gets it from dad) says that we could just go through bone driver boulevard "are you out of your fucking mind"! don't you remember what happened to that Mcander kid" "he went in and came out without his arm for the love of god" "well excuse me for being the only one with ideas" said Leo "look maybe if we can just make a run for it we can at least make it home before dark" Leo agreed and we immediately started to run but only for about two seconds tell we ran into Larry evilguy that is what everyone at school calls him at least. "hey,hey,hey I'm carrying merchandise here" said Larry "sorry we are trying to get home before dinner" said Leo "you need to get home" "say I might just have what you need right here"
LEO LEONARDO THE 3rds POV
I wonder when they will get here "OWW" "sorry" said aeris she was butting some bandages on my wounds from that now broke china plate "how could have known that a piece of china could be so deadly" "well" said aries "you did fall face first into the shards" "well I would like to know how the hell put it right above the doorway" "that was you remember you and Leo jr." (That's what we like to call him) "Where responsible for cleaning out the storage closet "oohhhhhh that's right that was the same day as the thanksgiving float and we where in a hurry to see it on T.V." "May that be a lesson to you both hast make mistakes" "ya, but I still wonder when they will get home for dinner" "by the way" I said "what are we having"? "I ordered some chine's "well I like there food but hate there plates, are you almost done yet"?
LEO LEONARDO THE 4ths POV
What I looked at was the most amazing thing I ever laid eyes on it was… was… was… "A monkey paw"? said aries " how the hell is that going to het us home" "you see" said Larry "this is no ordinary monkey paw this is a magic monkey paw it can grant up to five wishes of your choice yours for only 20 bucks "there is no way tha.." Cole was cut of by me running up to Larry with 20 bucks in my hand Cole tried to stop me put I was running at mock ten I quickly swapped the monkey paw with a 20 dollar bill and looked at the magnificent thing with Larry running away saying silently to himself "sucker".
COLE LEONARDO POV
"WHY THE HELL DID YOU BY THAT THING YOU MORON"! "Take it easy" said Leo now we can get home before dark" "that just a monkey paw! even if that really was a magic monkey paw you don't know how to use it" "aaah but that is where you are wrong dad got one of these things when he was younger and he told me how he worked it" "Leo that was information coming from dad, DAD you now that mom told us to never listen to him about that stuff" "well maybe this will come in handy" "ok here it goes" "Leo that will never going to…" "I wish to be at our house" SNAP.
Well there it is it's longer than the last one and I will try to keep making it longer. I will make sure that there aren't too many errors in it so please review. Also I will yous the first names of the characters for there POV from now on and I will put 3rd or 4th for the Leo's and if you have a idea for the story I would like to hear it just PM me. So as I said please review and also XandeR there is NO way I would be jealous of you. Till next time byby.